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Saturday 20th of April 2024
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Mohsen
Mohsen

Topic

Write a letter to a teacher asking for a reference letter for a job and explain:

 

 

▪️Why you have chosen him to write the reference letter

▪️What kind of job you are applying for

▪️Why you think you are suitable for thi

s job

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Writing

Dear Mr. Gholizadeh,

     I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to request your assistance in providing a reference letter for a Software Engineering job application. I have chosen you to write this letter because of the positive impact you've had on my academic journey and your familiarity with my skills and abilities.

     I am currently applying for a Software Engineering position with Kavosh Rayaneh Company. This role involves designing, developing, and implementing software solutions, leading and mentoring a team of software developers and analyzing user requirements and translating them into technical specifications and so on, and I believe my academic background and practical experience make me a suitable candidate for this position.

     Throughout my time in your class, I have demonstrated a strong understanding of software engineering principles and have consistently performed well in projects and assignments related to the field. I have also actively participated in extracurricular activities and workshops to enhance my technical skills and knowledge.

     I am confident that my technical proficiency, problem-solving abilities, and collaborative approach make me well-suited for the Software Engineering role at Kavosh Rayaneh Company. Your reference letter highlighting my academic achievements and dedication to the field will greatly support my job application.

     Thank you for considering my request. I truly appreciate your support and guidance throughout my academic journey. Please let me know if you need any additional information or materials for the reference letter.

Best regards,

Mohsen Alikhani

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Sima
Sima

Topic

The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

 

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Writing

The map provides information about what will change in the town after its redevelopment.

Overall, A glance at the maps illustrate that although some changes will have happened in the future in replacing some areas, the majority of redevelopments have taken place in the center of the maps; moreover, in the proposed plan, a highway will be built out of the town.

As can be seen, in the north of the map, industrial estates have been replaced instead of air fields. In addition, in the proposed plan, there will be a connection between this area and the railway, which does not exist now. According to the maps, the overriding changes have taken place approximately in the center of the prospective plan by building an important square that can be considered a come-cross of all of the roads in the town. It is readily apparent that there is no connection between A2 Road and the town center, which will be built in the proposed plan by building the A4 Road. Plus, it is noticeable that the area of the build-up area ring road will be shrieked in the future; however, the gas station in both maps has been located in the vicinity of the south-west of the square, and the railway area has been reminded without any change. 

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sajjad
sajjad

Topic

Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Writing

The advocates of advertising industry argue that it can effectively boost the economy. However, due to the fact that advertisements can lower the sense of satisfaction among people with regards to their possession and identity, many believe that they have a detrimental effect on society. While there is some truth in both arguments, in my view, policymakers should make some revisions to maintain the economic benefits while reducing the undesired social effects.

 

Concerning the economic aspects, firstly, product promotion might kindle a sense of competition amongst businesses and companies. This feeling can bring about enormous changes in production sector, such as persuading the manufacturers to enhance their goods quality. As a result, adoption of innovative strategies can spark an interest in investors so that they will invest their capital in product manufacturing, promoting a circular economy. In addition, the more advertisement absorbs new customers, the more skilled workers will be needed in factories to fulfill the requirement for launching new products. Therefore, it can contribute to the high unemployment rate issue.  

 

Nevertheless, it is essential that we take the social challenges which upward advertising trend can pose into account as well. The most significant problem is that this trend promotes materialism within society. This means that individuals will compete against each other for higher social status by purchasing the luxurious, opulent products, and those who are, for example, from the grassroots level will struggle or fail to compete. Since many cannot afford multitude of new items which are promoted on in media, they may feel inadequate. Moreover, overspending and impulse buying are other negative behaviors that stem from multitude of adverts we watch every day. For instance, new iPhone cell phones are launched every year with minor alterations compared to the previous version, and they are considered a high-class item in some countries. Thus, despite the fact that they might not be a good value for the money, people often tend to get them in order to heighten their self-confidence. 

 

In conclusion, with making more job positions and providing investment opportunities, advertisement can help the economic growth. Although, adverts can sometimes encourage people towards detrimental attitudes, including being extravagant and materialistic. Therefore, I believe while it can be economically beneficial, authorities should restrain promotions in order to avert such impacts that induce the feeling of inadequacy.

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Kimiya
Kimiya

Topic

Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Writing

Advertisements are an inseparable part of our modern life and there exists a debate over their potential effects; while a group contends that advertising is crucial for a healthy economy, others are of the opinion that it can bear unpleasant social outcomes as it is likely to make people less content about their lives. In this essay I will explain both sides' perspectives and argue why I agree with the latter group.

On one hand, Advertising can boost sales and therefore, lead to economic growth. successful companies and businesses are indicators of a thriving economy as they create so many job opportunities for people. In a highly competitive market, advertisements play an important role in the success of companies by increasing the chance of selling their products, preventing them from going bankrupt. Without proper advertising strategies companies will lose their customers and have to eventually close, which can result in higher unemployment rates as their workers no longer have a job.

On the other hand, exposure to advertisements can have an adverse effect on people as it can result in a fear of missing out. This phenomenon is likely to happen when individuals are bombarded everyday with ads making claims about better, newer items than what they already possess. This can lead people to feel like their current belongings are not enough and they constantly have to aim for something better. For example, many advertisements of cosmetic products capitalize on women's insecurities, promising them a product that will make them somehow more beautiful than what they already have. This constant exposure to ads, can eventually result in low levels of self-esteem or depression as it indirectly tells individuals that their current state or items are not enough.

Although the economic advantages that advertising brings to a society is undeniable, as long as these advertisements make people more vulnerable to feelings of not being enough, they will not be able to fully enjoy the economic benefits of them.

In conclusion, despite the positive effects of advertisements on economy, its negative psychological effects on consumers are considerably damaging and therefore, governments should come up with strategies to alleviate these adverse effects while retaining the economic benefits.

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Ahmad
Ahmad

Topic

Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Writing

Although some individuals claim that advertisements are beneficial as they bring about more economic opportunities, others believe that they can impact society negatively, leading to people becoming dissatisfied with their possessions. In my opinion, while I appreciate the positive influence of advertising on the economy, I think that this ever-growing phenomenon is exacerbating social issues.

On the one hand, it is widely admitted that advertisements are not only important but also essential to push companies forward and expand their market share in this saturated market, resulting from globalization and the advancement of technology. In other words, if corporations are determined to prosper among their rivals and other brands, they have no choice but to take advantage of advertising and draw the people's attention to their products. BMW corporation, for example, spends millions of dollars every year in order not to lose the market to its old competitor Mercedes Benz. This usage of advertisements by big companies will lead to total economic growth in the long run and improve the status of countries economically. 

on the other hand, others, including myself, claim that the act of advertising has not contributed to society as positively as it had expected to, making individuals far from being happy with what they possess. To elaborate, companies with the use of celebrity endorsement and visual effects strive to suggest that people won't be content or look good unless they use the products that these advertisements are promoting. Therefore, people might lose confidence and feel the urgent need to buy a particular model of car or a specific brand of shoes such as Nike or Adidas to make a good impression on others, leading to numerous issues such as consumerism and overconsumption.

In conclusion, while the potential of advertisements to drive the economy forward is undeniable, I assert that they are worsening social issues.

 

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Fateme
Fateme

Topic

Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#213898

Writing

Existing negotiations about the positive financial consequences and negative social influences of advertisement can be deduced since both making profit, better quality and becoming brand-aware as bright side and bugging audiences with built up goods and services as dark side are fanatically discussing. 
As many believe, including myself, advertising can help corporations boosting profit. Usually publicized products and services can be priced well above the market average by explaining their gilt-edged features. So, these companies enjoy their enhanced bottom-lines. In addition, start-ups and other unknown partnerships will be able to endorse their higher calibre and innovative products that have just passed the standard tests. Greater competition in the market is also another positive point since the more opponents there are, the harder you will endeavor to be successful. Then, higher quality products will be generated and consumers can save more money as they do not need to buy several sub-level ones that needs constant repairing.People also are becoming brand-aware because of advertising. As a result they can replace their old-fashioned amenities and acquire multi-tasked ones not only to save time but money. 
On the other hand, some negative social effects of adverts are reported like becoming less satisfied with their possessions and themselves. It can not be ignored that some enterprises cast their products with all the bells and whistles to allude people about their extraordinary functions in order to find and protect their competitive edge. However, it is always evident that these deviousnesses try to deceive viewers.  For example, there is no panacea to cure skin problems easily as it demonstrated in ads. 
In conclusion, in my mind, the positive economic impacts of ads outweigh it’s negative social. As, the unconfident feeling of these advertisement could be negated by reference to our logic  and only stunning financial prosperity of ads will remain. 

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Atousa
Atousa

Topic

Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Writing

Over the past few decades, the companies’ tendencies to advertise their commodities and merchandise in order to attract customers and increase the rate of their sales has increased significantly.  While some believe that at the recent years, advertisements have played a key role in economic developments, others argue that it has overwhelmed the rate of people’s satisfaction about what they are and have adversely. I completely agree with the latter notion.

To begin with, some believe that the advertisement industry has an undeniable role in the economic breakthroughs in every country. This is because when a product is advertised on social media, people’s inclination to purchase it enhances and since the number of individuals who buy this special product rises, it might contribute to financial developments. The more demand, the more production, and the less rate of unemployment and economic recession. As a result, since advertisement encourages people to purchase more commodities irrespective of whether they are necessary or not, it may contribute to economic growth due to improve the rate of production.

 That being said, others argue justifiably that advertisements may exacerbate the percentage of dissatisfaction’s people related to their attitude towards their appearance and what they have. This is because the preponderance of advertisements exaggerates some special aspects of a merchandise or promote a special opinion or a definition about their products and since this message is repeated continuously, it can influence the rate of their satisfaction toward themselves and what they have adversely and unconsciously. For example, over the past few decades, individuals’ beliefs about beauty have changed considerably. As a result, the impact of advertisements on declining the rate of satisfaction should not be neglected.

In conclusion, although the role of advertisements in increasing the proportion of sales and encouraging people to purchase companies’ products is not deniable, the rising rate of advertisements might aggravate people’s dissatisfaction with different aspects of their lives.

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mahsa
mahsa

Topic

Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Writing

The role and consequences of advertising have always been a subject of severe debate. While some cite the economic potential of advertising, others emphasize its negative repercussions, especially in the social and psychological sense. My inclination is to concur with the latter perspective. In this essay, I will outline the reasons for this assertion, after elucidating both viewpoints.

To begin with, advocates of advertising point to its financial benefits for producers and consumers. Advertisements have become an integral part and a predominant factor in our daily lives. Although some of them are irritative and irrelevant, others are effective and informative, they can keep people informed about the latest trends and services. Moreover, advertising can convert new companies and startups into lucrative ventures by introducing their products to individuals. The ubiquity of advertisements has revolutionized the business world, as a result, customers can compare different items and brands, and then choose things that are more affordable and appropriate to meet their expectations. 

On the other hand, proponents of advertising drawbacks claim that advertisements can not only promote consumerism but also cause dissatisfaction that individuals may feel with their possessions. Advertisements often create an inaccurate and idealistic picture of products and persuade people to buy unnecessary things. Due to the proliferation of advertising people are bombarded with infinite eye-catching and impressive advertisements of new products every day. This may lead to unreal needs and this vicious cycle would continue. In addition, advertisements often use celebrities and flawless models, who have a strong physical appearance, soft skin, and lovely complexion, this endorsement can give people who are not sufficient.

In conclusion, it is understandable that advertising plays an essential role in the business world and its sheer scale and economic influence are indisputable. But its negative effects on the mental well-being of people are not undeniable, we should consider them and revise the advertising measures. 

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Amir Hossein
Amir Hossein

Topic

Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#229842

Writing

Advertising is often seen as a crucial tool for companies to promote their products and services, leading to increased competition in the market. While some argue that advertising can enhance the economy and drive competitiveness, others believe that it can also lead to dissatisfaction and negative consequences for society as a whole.

One of the main advantages of advertising is its role in promoting competition among well-known brands such as Apple, Samsung, and Xiaomi. Companies regularly use advertising to lower prices and increase market share for their products, such as smartphones, tablets, and computers. Additionally, advertising can provide consumers with valuable information to make informed purchasing decisions, ultimately benefiting individuals by raising awareness and meeting their needs.

However, critics claim that advertisers use deceptive tactics and attractive slogans to persuade consumers to purchase unnecessary products. For example, companies like Nike often rely on celebrity endorsements and catchy slogans to create a sense of urgency and desire among consumers. This can lead to unrealistic expectations and unnecessary spending, particularly among young people who idolize famous individuals. Furthermore, advertising of novelty items, like the Apple Vision Pro, can create a sense of urgency and desire among consumers, potentially leading to impulsive purchases based on the allure of the product rather than its actual quality.

In conclusion, while advertising can be a powerful tool for informing consumers and driving competition, it also has the potential to manipulate individuals and lead to wasteful spending on low-quality products. It is important for consumers to approach advertising with a critical mindset and consider the true value and necessity of products being promoted, rather than succumbing to misleading tactics and popular trends.

 

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Elahe
Elahe

Topic

Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#241318

Writing

As the world becomes more integrated, the advertising is becoming more popular inevitably. Some people argue that there are some advantages of marketing on commercial issues, others believe that detrimental impact of these merits more careful consideration. In my opinion, the benefits of advertisement can outweigh the drawbacks. This essay deals with argument for and against this controversial issue.

 

First it is clear that, there have been great advanced in technology and industry over the last forty year. For instance social medias such as Instagram, TikTok, Facebook, YouTube have been invented for decades, so many different new companies and entrepreneurs see them as fruitful tools for launching their goods. Du to this reason the MBA field of study has become more practical and valuable branch of science, which trains the students to turn a sophisticated visitor for variety of organizations. Visitors have been recruited for advertising year in and year out. So the supporter of the advertising admit that the positive outcome of this activity will be growing businesses and also big opportunities will be given to managers for selling and showing all the recent products.

 

On the contrary, defenders of advertising often point out that, there has been some negative social effects which are undeniable. There are many violator firms without any qualifications, trying to deceive naive people and convinced them to buy their brand day in and day out. Unfortunately with glamorous definition of fake products and using misleading advertisement methods by visitors, the majority of people in society are contended to consume and experience those counterfeit commodities. For example, on television, among series, many decayed creams and fake shampoos with eye-chatching introduction are explained every day in a wrong way just to reach villainous aim of selling. In my opinion, while it is important to consider the impact of advertising issue, government should adopt policies to identify and arrest fake factories and prevent the distribution on promotion of fake products.

 

To sum up, I feel that although there are some clear drawbacks to advertisement, their efficiency has greatly improved sell process and economic status. All in all, I believe that the benefits of marketing certainly offset its disadvantages.