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7.5

ZAHRA
ZAHRA

Topic

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

#152498

Writing

The given maps indicate that the bookstore has changed from 2000 to now.

Overall, it is clear that the bookstore has changed during this period. The hobbies part is omitted, and the story section has become smaller. Hence, the bookstore would become more functional. Moreover, when the table is added, the bookstore would become much more productive.

In 2000, there was a rectangular store with various bookshelves. An enormous L-shaped shelf for the fiction was placed on the top of the store, with a service desk situated in the lower left-hand corner and the non-fiction shelf in the lower right-hand corner. There were three different shelves containing hobbies, cookery, and art not only organized horizontally but also located in the center right. In addition, a big square shelf which was for new books is located in the center left and in front of the entrance. While the travel shelf was in left-hand side of the entrance.

 

The bookstore has altered considerably since then. Now there is one large table with four seats, occupying the center left where the hobbies, cookery, and art shelves were there. The L-shaped fiction shelf was divided into four smaller parts where Art, cookery, fiction, and non-fiction are located there. So, the hobbies shelf has gone. The non-fiction has been replaced, by a café that is more spacious. it is a place not only for selling various types of books but also a peaceful spot for customers and people who are avid readers. Other parts like the travel section and a new bookshelf remain as well as the service desk.

7.5

Golnaz
Golnaz

Topic

Some people believe that it is better to spend money on experiences, such as travel and concerts, rather than on material things like clothes and cars.

Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#24571555

Writing

We spend much of our lives working to earn money, and we earn money to enjoy life. When it comes to spending that money for pleasure, we often face a dilemma: choosing between material possessions or meaningful experiences. Beyond any doubt, it depends on people’s values and goals. However, personally, I believe that experiences tend to bring deeper satisfaction for most people.

Even though material items may enhance our daily lives, most of us adapt to them quickly. It means when we first buy something, it gives us a rush of excitement, this is known as the novelty effect. In spite of that temporary enjoyment, we get used to it and gradually its attractiveness fades. For instance, once I bought a glamorous original dress for myself, which was extremely expensive. I somehow lived beyond my means. It is fair to say it was worth buying. However, after a while, it lost its appeal for me and I chased my happiness through the next purchase. 

On the other hand, experiences turn into cherished memories which often become more valuable over time. Since experiences stick with us for our entire lives, they are considered a source of longer-lasting joy. Imagine a universally lauded concert which you have attended. It would not get old even after many years. To simplify, experiences live on in memory. Additionally, experiences not only become chapters in our life stories but also shape who we are. Generally speaking, we are shaped by what we have done, not what we own.

To conclude, a wide variety of people believe it is worth spending money on experiences compared to those who prefer to buy materials things. I hold this view that although our daily lives can be enhanced by purchasing some items, the long-term happiness that experiences bring is more valuable. Therefore, we should spend money on what makes us fulfilled. That is why experiences are a better choice for the majority of people.

7.5

Ramin
Ramin

Topic

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this

 

▪️Explain why you want to take time off work 

▪️Give details of the amount of time you need

 ▪️Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

#242849

Writing

Hi Aura,

 

I am writing to request vacation leave as of September 4. I am requesting this time off because I am planning to travel to Iran for my sister’s wedding. Since I excel at floristry and catering, she needs my assistance coordinating the event.

I would like to submit a two-week time off, and based on our remote policy and working from anywhere, request one week of working remotely from Iran. Therefore, I will be off from September 4 till September 14, and then working remotely from September 15 till September 21.

During my leave, I will be in touch with my direct reports every week if any urgent cases come up. Also, I will activate my auto response on my Outlook to make sure all staff are aware of my leave, and block my calendar “out of office”. I spoke with Diana, and she will cover my responsibilities regarding the finance reports and salary documents. I will be available via my email and the Teams app if any emergency case occurs.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could approve my request. Please let me know if you have any comments.

 

Thanks for your consideration and time.

Jon Malton

7.5

Atousa
Atousa

Topic

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this

 

▪️Explain why you want to take time off work 

▪️Give details of the amount of time you need

 ▪️Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

#177779

Writing

Dear MR Naseri,

I am writing to request a few days off because of an unexpected issue. Although I am aware of our company’s workload during the recent weeks, I have to take a few days off to rectify my health situation.

Unfortunately, I came down with a serious case of flu, and since I had been tied up with a complicated project and had to work for long hours, my health situation was exacerbated. Therefore, I have to stay at home and rest to remedy my situation.

Since my symptoms have deteriorated over the past few days, my doctor advised me to take off and rest for at least a week. 

Given the fact that our company has to meet tight deadlines at the end of the month and my key role in the design of the project, I suggest that you hold some meetings so that the team members can handle the project. Moreover, if my situation improves, I will work remotely. 

Thank you for your precious time and attention and I look forward to hearing from you.

 

Yours sincerely,

Atousa Sadeghzadeh.

7.5

fatemeh
fatemeh

Topic

The Pie chart below show the main reasons why agricultural land becomes Iess productivitive. The table shows how these causes affected regions of the world during the 1990s.

#241762

Writing

The pie chart provides information about the primary reasons for becoming worldwide agricultural regions fruitless, including deforestation, over-cultivation, over-grazing and other causes. The table illustrates how these causes impacted lands of the world, such as North America, Europe and Oceania over the course of the 1990s. Overall, while the over-grazing item showed the highest percentage among other reasons, over-cultivation made up the lowest portion, which can be seen in Oceania. Notably, the largest ratio of total land degraded can be seen in Europe, whereas the smallest figure was observed in North America.

In terms of the data in the pie chart, although over-grazing accounted for the largest percentage, at 35%, the lowest figure was attributed to over-cultivation, at 28%. In addition, deforestation constituted 30% of all reasons.

Regarding information in the table, surprisingly, not only did Oceania represent the highest proportion of various causes, but it saw the lowest figure, at 11.3% and 0% (of the total 13%), for over-grazing and over-cultivation, respectively, showing that the latter cause did not have any role in the unproductivity in this land despite playing the key role of this parameter not only for Europe but also among all these three lands, which is 7.7%. As for Europe, while deforestation made up the largest ratio, at 9.8%, over-grazing constituted the smallest portion, at 5.5%. Moreover, in North America, despite the fact that the largest percentage corresponded to over-cultivation, with 3.3% of the total (5%), deforestation constituted the lowest percentage, at 0.2%.

In comparison, Europe signified the highest percentages of all causes among these continents, at 9.8%, 7.7%, and 5.5% for deforestation, over-cultivation and over-grazing, respectively.

7

Mahsad
Mahsad

Topic

Some people believe that it is better to spend money on experiences, such as travel and concerts, rather than on material things like clothes and cars.

Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#218532

Writing

In this era, it is widely acknowledged that purchasing various material possessions, such as cars and clothes, is less effective and enjoyable than spending money on valuable and fulfilling experiences like traveling and attending concerts, which play a vital role in people’s lives. I strongly agree with this point of view, as I would argue that focusing on material goods has contributed to a growing consumerist lifestyle and can have serious consequences.

First of all, one reason to support this idea is that spending money on material possessions has changed our lifestyle to consumerist in recent years. In other words, not only numerous individuals spend their time and money on less meaningful items, but it also leads to a more consumerist way of living. For instance, several citizens especially the young generation would rather purchase diverse items which they don’t really need, mostly because of the influence of advertising across the world. As a result, although many environmental activists attempt to raise awareness, this consumerist lifestyle will have a catastrophic impact on people’s lives.

Furthermore, another crucial point to justify this viewpoint is that investing in experiences brings long-term happiness and personal growth. Moreover, no matter how much time people spend on recreational activities, what matters is how many worthwhile and unforgettable experiences they gain from their surroundings. For example, when people travel or take part in multifarious festivals and events, it is clear that they feel happier and fulfilled which can have a significant effect on improving their general knowledge.

In conclusion, I admittedly believe that leisure activities and traveling can support mental health and the ability to understand the world. Although buying material things may be more accessible than attending a concert or taking a trip, the experience will provide dramatic positive results in our future lives.

7

Ramin
Ramin

Topic

You are leaving your current job to start a new position at another company. Write a letter to one of your colleagues

 

▪️Describe your new job and the company.

▪️Say when you will be leaving your current job.

▪️Suggest a time for a farewell party.

#242849

Writing

Dear Aura, 

I am writing to inform you that I have successfully found a new job that fully meets my expectations. 

I was headhunted by a recruiter firm last month, and after a three-round interview, I got a job at the BMO Bank as a Human Resources specialist. I will be responsible for the performance management process, which I excel in, talent acquisition, and hiring. BMO is a well-known bank across Canada, has lots of branches, and I will work in the north branch near my condo. 

My first day of work is on September 7, in almost next 10 days. I will attend an onboarding session with my direct manager. Therefore, I should leave the office at least 7 days sooner to prepare myself for this new role. 

I heard that you are planning a farewell party. First of all, thank you for the arrangements. Secondly, I want to suggest inviting people on August 30, next Saturday, which would probably be my last day if Jon accepts it. 

I appreciate for consideration of my request. If you have any questions, please feel free to reach out to me. 

Best Regards, 

Siarra 

 

 

 

 

7

siamak
siamak

Topic

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

#164262

Writing

 The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
 
The diagram below illustrates a bookstore scheme currently and the perspective which was in 2000 for the whole area.
 
Overall, the bookstore has been changed into a place which is more convenient for enjoyment, so café and table have opened up. Moreover, the fiction section was renovated and the hobbies area was demolished. 
 
Looking at the previous layout, the largest part of the bookstore was designed for the fiction section. Also, by entering the store some sections namely, new books, hobbies, cookery, and art had been located in the center. Moreover, service desk and non-fiction were introduced on the right-hand side.
 
Regarding redevelopment in the present time, hobbies, cookery, and art are replaced with table which is surrounded by chairs, and non-fiction unit is converted to café. In addition, fiction, which was the most notable part, was divided into three sections (art, cookery, and fiction). Finally, travel, new books, and service desks without noticeable change are in the same area.

7

Reza
Reza

Topic

Some people believe that it is better to spend money on experiences, such as travel and concerts, rather than on material things like clothes and cars.

Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#243585

Writing

It is widely acknowledged that some claim that it is an outstanding perspective that individuals prioritize their funds for impressive activities, such as participating in concerts or travels, instead of spending on garments and cars. I absolutely agree with this belief , and the primary reasons associated with this trend are as follows:

 

To commence with, it is evident that a certain segment of the populace, say, holds the vision that experiencing memorable trips and taking part in unforgettable concerts plays a vital function in boosting people's morale and reducing stress. Moreover, this action not only gives people a profound sense of happiness and calmness but also contributes to reinforcing focus. For instance, humans who are particularly passionate about conducting these events with their family and close friends find satisfaction, contentment, and comfort. Furthermore, they can revel in each other's company, and this will be a perfect blend of excitement and merriment. Therefore,  they will be able to gain excellent insights and wisdom.

 

Conversely, others say that if people pay attention to material products, including purchasing luxurious cars and fashionable outfits, it serves as an invaluable and interesting hobby, stimulating their curiosity to become a huge fan of preparing such commodities. Namely, going to clothing shops and car exhibitions increases a fantastic sense of diverse experiences because of their high quality and unique beauty. As a result, they will enjoy these circumstances.

 

In conclusion, despite the fact that when material goods are given significance, they can give people joy , I believe that it is definitely indispensable that traveling and taking part in concerts play their role in improving the quality of people's morale and mood. Consequently, this is my fundamental viewpoint that should be recognized to act as both a cornerstone and a linchpin in the community.

 

 

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Maryam
Maryam

Topic

Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

#224877

Writing

It is true to say that some people believe that the best way to improve road safety is to implement strict regulations and increase the minimum legal age for getting driving car or riding motorbike licenses. Although this opinion would be a way to reduce road accidents, I think that it is not the best way and governments as well as parents try to educate children to improve their driving knowledge. 

Although increasing the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is a way to increase road safety, it would be counterproductive if it were obligatory. Firstly, children who do not meet the minimum requirements to obtain their driving license, may drive without it and cause many accidents due to the lack of driving knowledge and skills. This may cause more road problems and may put people`s lives in danger. For example, in some developing countries, young adults who are 15 years old, can drive on roads without getting their driving license. In this way, they want to show their complaint to the government about the minimum legal age laws. 


On the other hand, the best way to improve road safety would be to have high-quality roads. Governments are responsible for allocating more funds to road maintenance costs. This may lead to access to high-standard highways. As a result, people will drive more safely. Moreover, governments as well as parents should educate children at their early age how to drive more carefully rather than implement some strict regulations about the minimum legal age. Therefore, young people can drive with more useful driving skills and knowledge. 

In conclusion, I completely disagree with the compulsory legal regulation about the minimum age for driving cars or riding bikes and I believe that there are some other ways to increase road safety by enhancing education and spending more budget on road maintenance.