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Wednesday 29th of May 2024
چهارشنبه, 09 خرداد 1403

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Parham
Parham

Topic

A friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice.

 

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

▪️Offer to find somewhere to stay

▪️Advise about what to do

▪️Give information about what clothes to bring

#24565518

Writing

Dear John,

 

I'm just writing to provide you with the info and recommendations you asked for.

 

Regarding a place to stay, I highly recommend the only five-star hotel that we have in our city, which is named "The Grand Hotel". Many tourist attractions are in walking distance of that hotel and its rooms that have a balcony have a panoramic view of the famous lake of our city. If you are looking for budget-friendlier accommodation, you can look for cheaper motels online.

 

As you may know, there're various historical monuments as well as natural sights in our region and I suggest that you make sure to visit each and every one of them. There's a restaurant near the city center which serves side and main dishes according to Iranian cuisine and you can enjoy the live folk music while having your meal. It'd be a thoroughly enjoyable meal and a memorable experience if you decide to visit there.

 

Finally, the weather in our city is mostly mild. Since it is not probable to be freezing cold or rainy here, I don't think bringing lots of warm clothes is a wise decision. Bring your sunglasses and a pair of hiking boots if you'd like to go hiking in rural areas which are full of breathtaking scenery. Also, bring your swimsuit and swimming goggles if you are fond of swimming in lakes and rivers.

 

Hope to see you soon.

 

Best Regards,

Joe

7.5

motahare
motahare

Topic

The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#24563619

Writing

In today's world, the issue of reducing the consumption of fossil fuels has become a pressing concern. Some argue that immediate action should be taken by the international community to ensure all countries reduce their reliance on fossil fuels such as gas and oil. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide a balanced opinion.

 

 

 

Those advocating for immediate action to reduce fossil fuel consumption argue that it is crucial for combating climate change. The burning of fossil fuels releases harmful greenhouse gases, contributing to global warming and environmental degradation. By reducing consumption, countries can minimize their carbon footprint and mitigate the negative impacts of climate change.

 

 

 

On the other hand, opponents of immediate action believe that sudden reductions in fossil fuel consumption could have severe economic consequences. Many developing nations heavily rely on oil exports for their economic stability. Implementing drastic measures without providing alternative sources of income could lead to job losses and economic instability. Therefore, a gradual transition towards renewable energy sources would be more feasible and sustainable.

 

 

 

While it is important to prioritize the reduction of fossil fuel consumption, it should be done in a balanced and inclusive manner. International cooperation and assistance should be provided to developing countries to ensure a smooth transition towards renewable energy sources. Financial aid, technological support, and capacity-building programs can help these countries shift their economies and reduce their reliance on fossil fuels.

 


In conclusion, while reducing the consumption of fossil fuels is vital for addressing climate change, it is important to consider the economic implications and the needs of developing countries. Immediate action may not be feasible for all nations, and a gradual transition towards renewable energy sources should be prioritized. The international community should work together to provide the necessary support to ensure a sustainable future for all.

7.5

vahid
vahid

Topic

A friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice.

 

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

▪️Offer to find somewhere to stay

▪️Advise about what to do

▪️Give information about what clothes to bring

#243840

Writing

Dear Amin,

I am really pleased to know that you have planned to spend your two-week holiday in my hometown in September. I will try my best to give as much detail as you need so that there is no room for worries.

 

As you have never been to Semnan in September, you may wonder what cloths to bring. The weather is not hot and humid at all this time of year, it is mostly warm and sunny before the sunset, however it may get a little colder as the sun sets, I offer you to bring a jacket in case it catches you off guard. If you would not mind, I would be glad to ask you to stay at our house as long as you are visiting Semnan, but if your goal is to explore the city while getting familiar with the history, I highly recommend you to book for Naghshe Jahan hustle, it is cozy and the staff are welcoming. We could go visit ancient museums and mosques built hundred years ago, although if you are not interested in history, there are plenty of nature resorts which could keep us busy for even more than two-weeks.

 

I would be most grateful if you let me know the exact time you will arrive here, so I could arrange plans. I hope that you will enjoy your holiday with us.

 

With very best wishes,

Vahid

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fatemeh
fatemeh

Topic

The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#24558372

Writing

in recent years, the magnitude of using non-renewable resources such as fossil fuels has been increasing so that managing and diminishing gas as well as oil consumption have been converted into a crucial issue. Although, due to the economic benefits of fossil fuels, some governments believe that neither actions nor plans have to be taken to find the consummate alternations for gas and oil, other individuals are convinced that due to the harmful impacts of fossil fuels, the international community is supposed to monitor the consumption of fossil fuels vigilantly to decrease the use of that. Nevertheless, due to the detrimental effects of non-renewable resources on earth as well as their limitation, I agree with the second group of people who support the international community to restrict the consumption of non-renewable resources.

To begin with, using fossil fuels more than a certain degree causes natural calamities which are twice as devastating as other issues. It means that when fossil fuels are burning, they release harmful substances such as either Carbon Dioxide or Sulfur Aside, leading get prone to various diseases, air pollution, natural disasters, and animal extinction. Therefore, with overusing fossil fuels, not only has the Ozone layer been becoming much thinner causing skin cancer, allergy, and air quality degradation, but global warming also is one of the fossil fuels consequences, contributing to rising sea levels, making seasonal storms, and famine. In addition, due to industrialization as well as unbridled augmentation of industries, animals’ inhabitants are under threat especially marines, because gas and oil have been extracted under the sea and oceans, so, should extraction equipment has leaks, oil can poison marine creatures.

Also, fossil fuels are the limitation and non-renewable resources as if for producing oil and gas, 1000 years are needed. To say that articles show that oil and gas account for a significant proportion of fuel consumption among individuals and have inevitable impacts on descendants, because fossil fuels are likely neither accessible nor infinite for the next generations, governments are supposed to alter fuel resources and use reusable energies such as solar energy and wind energy. For instance, most of the European countries have set up infrastructures to use solar energy instead of fossil fuels that not only is it much more affordable, but other generations also don’t have any worries about fuel. Therefore, weren’t they to conduct such measures, they would be faced with various obstacles about lack of fuel.

to conclude, highly important as the fossil fuels are, I believe that the international community should manage and find a solution to decrease the consumption of fossil fuels, due to their harmful effects and being limited. As a result, the less folk use fossil fuels, the better life quality citizens will possess.

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Faezeh
Faezeh

Topic

The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#243699

Writing

Over the last century, the use of unrenewable recourses such as gas and oil has been dramatically increased. Some argue that the global community should do something to compel all counties to reduce their usage of these energy recourses. I, personally agree with this viewpoint. Analyzing the undesirable effects of extra usage of fossil foil on both the planet and human health will show this. 

 

First of all, the burning of fossil fuels emits a variety of greenhouse gases, such as carbon dioxide, which have caused global warming. The primary result of the planetary warming is melting polar ice caps , contributing to rising sea levels and other serious issues. For example, it can result in coastal flooding , erosion and, more importantly, releasing freshwater into the oceans, leading to ocean acidulation and harm marine life. Furthermore, the melting ice caps can threaten the habitats of other species, that rely on ice for survival like polar bears, seals and penguins. 

 

Secondly, pollution caused by burning oil, directly target the human body and, along with time, is a key cause of various human ailments. One of the most exposed and affected organs of our bodies is the respiratory system, which is affected by the quality of the air we breathe. Unfortunately, in many large cities like New York , severe air pollution can be observed, with a visible layer of smog hanging over the city, emitted by cars which are relying on fossil fuel to transportation. Inhaling such polluted air might lead to respiratory issues like breathing problems and asthma. Furthermore, this polluted air can impact the cardiovascular and immune systems. For this reason, doctors often recommend that seniors live in suburbs or rural areas where the air quality is better. 

 

To sum up, burning fossil fuels not only threatens the planet by raising global temperature but also harms human health by polluting the air  we breathe. These reasons make it essential to take action on a global scale to reduce the consumption of mentioned resources by nations to safeguard the world and human race.     

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khatereh
khatereh

Topic

The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#24566623

Writing

The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

Nowadays, we are confronted with significant challenges related to global warming and environmental degradation worldwide. I strongly advocate for immediate action by governments to mitigate the devastating impacts on our climate, ecosystems, and public health.

Fossil fuel consumption has undeniably risen, but some argue governments should prioritize more immediate social concerns like alleviating poverty and hunger. They assert that allocating substantial budgets to address this issue, which may have a minimal global impact, is unreasonable. Therefore, rather than investing significant resources in tackling fossil fuel consumption, governments should prioritize addressing issues such as poverty and hunger worldwide. However, these individuals fail to consider that if the environment we inhabit is disrupted, global hunger could become a minor issue.
 

Present day, global warming has emerged as a pressing concern, driven by the growing numbers of cars and factories. This issue is recognized for its significant consequences, including the depletion of biodiversity and changes in climate patterns. Factories, particularly those discharging their waste into rivers, are considered a significant threat to numerous species, driving them to extinction and disturbing the balance of biodiversity. Additionally, global warming harms public health. Air pollution, prevalent in crowded populations, and industrialized cities, poses a major health threat. Furthermore, this pollution disrupts ecosystems, threatening the Earth's capacity to sustain life. These factors force governments to take immediate action and find workable solutions to cut down on fossil fuel use. 

In conclusion, while some prioritize immediate social concerns, urgent governmental action is crucial to tackle global warming and environmental degradation.

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Mohammad Ali
Mohammad Ali

Topic

The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#24559690

Writing

It is widely asserted that authorities at the international level should adopt apposite measures in order to reduce the utilization of infinite fossil fuels across the entire globe. I totally agree with this viewpoint because of the devastating ramifications of fossil fuels on the environment and the necessity of inclination toward renewable resources.

 

From my point of view, it is a foregone conclusion that carbon emission by usage of fossil fuels has pressing afflictions to the nature and earth. That is to say, human beings, in recent decades, have witnessed a plethora of environmental calamities. The most disconcerting one is global warming; it is the direct effect of CO2 retention beneath the ozone layer; consequently, due to the greenhouse effect and penetration of the layer, the earth’ temperature has been on the rise in recent years. As a result, The Global Environmental and Climate Agency (GEACA) has announced a red warning related to the pressing alteration in climatic patterns. To put it simply, the year 2023 recorded the hottest summer since 20 BC. Therefor, an immediate action by international organizations for curtailing the fossil fuels combustion, is of utmost concern.

 

Another compelling reason for the lowering of these energy sources’ usage can be the nature of these fuels being ephemeral. In other words, they are short-lived and according to the geographical and environmental studies, they will be completely depleted by the year 2050. This in turn, necessitates the employ of more sustainable energies such as Geothermal one, wind power, and solar power. By not doing so, an environmental and international cataclysm will be predictable.

 

In conclusion, i have the opinion that an urgent approach by global agencies is to be implemented, otherwise the repercussions regards climate and environment will be problematic. Moreover, the governments should invest more in the reproducible and eternal energies such as wind power.

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samira
samira

Topic

The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#212892

Writing

In the present climate global warming and pollution have become a controversial minefield; there is, however, a widely held consensus on the intervention of the international community to oblige societies to diminish their fossil fuel usage, a theory to which I fully subscribe, as it seems essential to save earth for on-coming generations.
One justification for why there should be confining regulations for countries regarding fossil fuels can be attributed to the growing average temperature of our planet which is associated with tremendous vexation. Melting glaciers can be taken as an instance, which can lead to some natural disasters; harmful floods and deteriorating cultivation to name but a few. Countries, therefore, should take a number of steps to ease this phenomenon, lessening the emission of toxic gases resulting from non-renewable fuels can be the main feasible action.
 
On the other hand, there are plenty of countries in which scholars are indulging themselves to numerous investigations to pave the way for those who are interested in renewable fuels such as solar systems and wind turbines, the international community can take advantage of these scientists to implement clean fuel procedure in some developing countries as one of the main catalysts in their industry is oil and gas which can be replaced by clean energy supply, nevertheless, it may need structural alternation along with financial fund. Thereby, If fossil fuel is reduced in developing societies, which constitute a large number of territories, a cleaner environment would be more tangible.
To draw a conclusion from what has been discussed revolving around international supervision for fossil fuels consumption, it can be deduced that although it might be demanding and expensive, it is worth making it operational to ease global warming and the detriments that stem from this issue.

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Niloufar
Niloufar

Topic

The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#226907

Writing

There is a discussion about the use of fossil fuels. Some people believe that the international society should right away force all countries all around the world to decline to use them. A closer look examines the problem.
 

To begin with, it is imperative for the international community to quickly address the issue of fossil fuel consumption by all countries. The combustion of fossil fuels causes the emission of greenhouse gases. This phenomenon leads the earth to warm and it is causing climate change. Also, by repeating this happening, the habitats are gradually destroyed. Therefore, burning this kind of fuel not only accelerates climate change but also damages ecosystems.


Although decreasing the consumption of fossil fuels has undeniable benefits for the planet, it may not be possible for all countries due to their heavy dependence on these resources and some problems in economics. First of all, many industries and transportation systems rely on fossil fuels. So, decreasing an immediate this kind of fuel for countries puts them in challenging situations. this can be attributed to the fact that; their economies are dependent on fossil fuels. Moreover, this limitation makes them shift to renewable energy sources. This change requires substantial investments in infrastructure and technology which may be unattainable for developing nations. Thus, this limitation not only affects their economy but also requires money and restructuring of their equipment.

In conclusion, while I agree that reducing fossil fuel consumption is essential for the future, this limitation is a challenging situation for certain countries

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Ali
Ali

Topic

The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#224503

Writing

There has already been some discussion over a restrictive action that should be taken as soon as possible by the international organization in order to decline the consumption of fossil fuels all around the world. This essay will examine a formation proposal and give my opinion finally.

 

To commence with, there are some reasons why limiting the use of fossil fuels should be a must. First, some claim that the overutilization of fossil fuels is a major contributor to climate change harming us. This is because using fossil fuels emits carbon dioxide which not only causes air pollution affecting us directly but also damages the ozone layer which plays a crucial role in reflecting ultraviolet rays contributing to global warming subsequently. As a result, some disasters such as floods, drought, and the rising sea level threaten the lives of some living in dangerous areas. Next, these kinds of sources are nonrenewable as well as limited. For this reason, many are concerned they are consumed completely so as not to remain for the next generations who might innovate something more useful instead of born. Thus, the consumption of fossil fuels should be banned because fossil fuels are finite as well as might deteriorate the environmental problems.

 

On the other hand, it is an irrefutable fact that, although the utilization of fossil fuels might have some minuses, many countries are too reliant on fossil fuels making following rapid actions impossible. To lay the reason out, the price of this kind of power source is lower than other kinds of green power. So fossil fuels are the main source in undeveloped countries without any alternative. Because of this, many pivotal infrastructures such as health care systems, security systems, and banking in these countries depend on them, they cannot ban using fossil fuels. Consequently, if international organizations make any limitations immediately, they will not be able to follow. Thus, the universal institution should eliminate the dependency of these countries on fuel sources next other steps should be taken.

 

In conclusion, from my viewpoint, there is no denying the consumption of fossil fuels should be declined. in addition, owing to gaining the ability to execute the new restriction, international institutions should give a helping hand to undeveloped countries in order to share renewable technology with them.