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T
T

#237220

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

While in the past people tended to be fitter, these days individuals do not consider their body fit, even existing numerous sports clubs exist. I believe this is mainly because of technology, and to solve this problem can help from the internet.

 

To begin with, people have always been concerned about their fitness. But today there is a distraction that causes them to not care about their healthy life and prefer a sedentary lifestyle. It is a technology. Computers, tablets, and social media are the most reasons that lead people to immobility. For example, people buy vacuums that are robots, which means they do not have to walk while sweeping, or instead of going to a restaurant, they would preferably order online from home. So, choosing technology as a priority in place of physical activity can cause to an unhealthy and unshaped body.

 

To tackle this problem, using the internet is the best and most genius way. Because it can take benefit people's interest in technology. Since the internet and technology are absolutely related to each other. If people do not want to go to a sports facility, they can exercise at home, using online videos from youtube or applications. For instance, I use fitness applications regularly daily, and I do not have to pay for a membership to health centers because most are over my budget.

 

In conclusion, without exercising, people's health can decline, happening many problems such as being unfit. the internet can help to prevent this epidemy.

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Omid
Omid

#236140

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays there are a lot of sport facilities and gyms around the cities. In addition we can see the sport places that are prepared and organized by the municipality for free in parks and other public environments. Nevertheless people are less fit than ever before.

In my opinion we can find the cause of this problem in the people lifestyle. I mean fitness is a straight result of having a healthy lifestyle containing healthy diet and continued exercise. If someone wants to have a healthy diet have to eat the foods which have less calories. In other words he/she must avoid from the foods that are made using much amount of oil and sugar. Also daily exercise beside a healthy diet is necessary to have a fit body. In my opinion having both of this vital criteria requires a sufficient time to spend every day. Thus, lack of time is the most important cause of being less fit than ever before. Nowadays the economic situation makes most of people work from the early morning until late night. So there is less time to cook at home and less energy and time to exercise. Some people prefer to order their food from restaurants and sometimes select fast foods that have a lot of calories and are very oily.

In conclusion changing life style rather than ever before have caused to lack of time that results in having unhealthy diet and not being active enough and so not being fit!

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Nooshin
Nooshin

#237554

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Being fit is a demonstration of healthiness. In recent years the number of gyms and sport equipments has increased, nevertheless more people are overweighted. I can point to two reasons, among many, which I assume to be the main causes of this matter, and seggust possible solutions. I believe unbalanced work-life hours and also unhealthy foods are the key factors for becoming fat. Employers and people themselves can prevent these reasons as are mentioned in the next paragraphs.

 


Most of the people, not only spend the majority of their time at work, but also some of them even have second jobs. Cosequently they can not free some time to attend to gyms. As there are other priorities in everyone’s life they postpone sports and exercise. Employers can solve this problem by preparing facilities at the work place, or maybe giving bonuses to motivate their employees for going to gym. In that case, the productivity of the workers increases and both sides will be benefited.

 


Another pivotal cause of being overweight despite exercising is unhealthy eating habits. Tendency to eat fastfoods, which contain saturated fat, has increased for multiple reasons. To reduce this counting calories has been proposed, cause fastfoods and saturated fats include a huge amount of calories and the person can not eat those regularly. In the end this will encourage them to eat healthier foods with less calories.

 


To sum up, there are various reasons regarding not being fit despite the availability of exercise opportunities. Being busy and unhealthy eating are important reasons for this crisis that can be faced by employers preparing opportunities and people counting the callories they eat.

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Parviz
Parviz

#203302

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Today there are a vast range of sport facilities and gyms, especially in urban areas, however people ten to be less fit compared with last. This issue would have plenty of reasons some of which I will discuss in this essay and will give some solutions to solve the problems.

First, looking at the reasons of the problem, one of the main causes of the issue, could be the modern lifestyle. What I mean by this is that humans today hove to work for along time every day. Indeed, they are snowed under with plenty of workloads that make them work even at home at nights. Another possible reason is that, although the number of gyms have been grown in recent times, the joinning cost of them have increased. So, people cannot afford to book at a gym and take up to exercise. 

There are some solutions to solve the problem, first, as far as I’m concerned, not only do governments and private companies must decrease the work time of employees, but also raise the least wages significantly. With doing this people will have extra time for leisure activity such as doing sports. My second proposal to tackle the problem is that governments dedicate subsidies for gyms. Through which the gyms will be able to fall their joinnnig fees. So, people particularly disadvantaged families can afford to join at gyms. 

By and large, in spite of a huge number of facilities and gyms, people do not tend to get fit than before. This issue is linked to a vast range of reasons from high levels of work hours, to increasing joinning fees at gyms. For tackling the issue some solutions such as decreasing work hours and paying subsides to gyms are recommended.

 

ParvizNematipour /Writing Task2    

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Atena
Atena

#236270

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

In recent times, while there are a wide range of sports equipment,obesity has become one of the outstanding problems. Although overconsumption of unhealthy food and hectic lifestyle are the main reasons for this problem. Encouraging people to change their diet and do more regular exercise, are the solutions to tackle this problem.

 

Overconsumption of unhealthy food is the main reason of being overweight. In recent times, especially in the last couple of decades, due to the hectic life schedule, almost all people around the world are fully occupied with their jobs. Since then, they do not have enough spare time for cooking. As long as restaurants are now ubiquitous, homemade food has been replaced with scrumptious fast food ,which contains high fat and salt that are harmful for our body. To add, lack of physical activity and exercise is the other cause of obesity. The majority of people have office work. Sitting long hours on chair and not having adequate physical activities leads being overweight. Not only not having enough activity leads to being overweight, but it also will result in health problems like diabetes and heart disease.

 

Educating and raising people’s awareness of detrimental effects of fast food is the first step to overcome obesity. If the government shows different advertisements via celebrities to teach individuals to change their unhealthy diet, people would be motivated to change their incorrect eating habits. For example, by showing healthy dishes ,which included different vegetables with seafood,instead of fast food. Furthermore, motivating people to do more regular exercise while working. For instance, employers can encourage their employees to do some exercise and go to gym at least half an hour during their work time and consider rewards for them. Not only does rewarding boost their mood, but it also motivates them to change their lifestyle. In fact, the more activity, the less obesity among people.

 

To summarize, in spite of the variety of sport centers, individuals, especially the younger generation are becoming fatter these days. I strongly believe that excessive consumption of fast food and not having regular exercise are the most pivotal reasons for this problem which can be addressed by changing life routines and increasing people ‘s awareness of harmful effects of obesity.

 

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Amir Hosein
Amir Hosein

#233439

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

despite the huge growth in the number and variety of sport facilities, we witness a considerable increase of obesity now, more than ever. In this essay, I will argue that the main reason of this trend is the expansion of technology, leading to the shift in human’s life style, and also suggest some solutions in order to address this issue.

21st century was the beginning of technology era, since computers and other digital gadgets have become an inseparable part of every individual’s daily life. Nowadays, a huge number of people do almost everything with the use of computers, from buying their groceries and paying their bills to meet with a friend on the web. These kinds of tasks, however, needed to be done in person in the past, which required walking or cycling a long distance, leading to burning calories. On the other hand, this advance in technology has led to a shift in human’s work style. In the past, jobs usually involved physical activities, which has been completely changed in the modern days, as most of workers spend most of their time in front of screens and computers. The lack of physical activities directly leads to obesity.  

Having said the causes of such an issue, there may be some steps to take in order to tackle it. First, governments can raise people’s awareness about the destructive the overuse of computers would have on the individuals and the society as a whole, and also about the benefits they will receive by exercising regularly. In addition, they can reduce the budget on gyms and other sport centers which will lead to the reduction of monthly fee costumers should pay resulting in increase of attendees.

To sum it all up, personally, I believe that technology is the amin reason of obesity and bad shape of most of the people nowadays, but fortunately, there are some solutions for this matter which I mentioned above.

5.5

Ramin
Ramin

#236902

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, There are many different types of exercising tools and sports places such as gyms. However, more people used to have in shaped bodies in the past times. I believe numerous reasons can lead to this phenomenon and diverse solutions are possible for this problem.

 

One of the most important factors is the lack of time in modern society. Since population grows and human needs develop, people tend to work more compared to past in order to answer those needs and responsibilities. The result of long working hours would be negligible free time and reduced healthy activities and increased demand of fast foods. The other considerable reason is the changes in human-being lifestyle within last few years related to technology development. Many physical-effort-requiring tasks are now done by electronic devices. For instance tasks like dish washing or floor cleaning can be done by dish washers and robots. So you don't have to push yourself and burn calories to do phisycal tasks anymore. These reasons can cause immobility and health issues like obesity.

 

Many reaserchs have been conducted to analyze this issue and offer possible ways to let people have better shaped and healthier bodies. In my point of view, two major steps need to be taken to solute this problem. First and the most important one refers to people themselves. Everyone in any position has to try to maintain the minimum physical activities during the day by various means such as walking to store or placework instead of using personal vehicles or public transportations and also avoid fast foods and unhealthy junk foods. At the same time some actions require to be done by government, such as educating people about health and suitable diets in a broad scale and invest more fundings on researchs leading to promotion of healthy habits.

In conclution, I can mention that there are lots of reasons causing more people to have unshaped bodies in comparision to past, like insufficient free time and changed life style. And several actions can be done to avoid this problem in the future such as maintaining our bodies active during the day beside avoiding unhealthy foods, and knowledge promotion by government.

5.5

abbas
abbas

#233216

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

These days, many people neglet their physical shape, and many men and women are out of shape, although there are a plenty of sport clubs and gyms that are available.  There might be other prioritizes that avoid people to follow a healthy life-style. However, there are simple solutions to build up positive habits.

 

People tend to prioritize their daily activities in which, going to gym is less important. People who live in urban areas have a busy schedule ,spending most of their time at workplace as well as on commuting, this way of living has changed peoples lifestyle. This might impose them not caring of their appearance and their health anymore. Another reason that might be influence on peoples atitiude is they tend to fulfill their time by going to cinema or hanging with their friends rather than going to gym. The last reason, many individual could not afford the cost of gym’s fees, hence going to gym is become luxury in many part of the globe.

 

However, there are some solutions to encourage people to be more active during their busy day. Many people do not go to gym, because the distance between their home and the gym is far, so constructing sport facilities in each neighborhood can motivate people to be more active. Secondly, some activities do not need any equipment, just need a pair of shoes. Activities, such as walking and jogging is extremely beneficial to our overall health. Reducing sport club’s fees is another solution to encourage people to enroll in these clubs.

 

To sum up, it can not be dined that, people are not willing to spend their time in sport facilities. However, going to gym should not consider as a luxury habits that just fortune people can use it.

 

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Niloofar
Niloofar

#158867

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays gyms offer a lot of good facilities for people and help them to do regular exercises and a wide range of sport facilities are available for people but, people are not as fit as before. This essay will outline some possible reasons, as well as, suggesting some solutions. 

The first reason behind this is that gyms expenditures are astronomical these days and the costs of membership have increased significantly. People have to pay a lot for being a member of a gym and if they want to use other facilities like a swimming pool or walking path they have to pay more .Due to the economic situation many people can not afford these cost so they forget about going to gym and doing regular exercise. For example, my brother who suffers from obesity, works from sunup to sundown and his salary is not enough to pay the gym's tuition fee every month as he has to pay his loans each month. The second reason is that people are really busy with their jobs these days and they do not have too much time to enroll in a gym and have regular sport sessions. Many people arrive home at night and they do prefer to spend time with their family rather than going to the gym.

There are also some solutions to help people keep fit. Nowadays there are a lot of online classes available for people. These classes are really helpful for those who are interested in doing regular exercise. Many   of these online courses are recorded so people can use them ad many times as they like according to their life schedule. For instance, I registered for an online yoga course 3 months ago and I lost 2 Kg over the last 3 months. Another solution is that people can follow a healthy diet to keep fit.These days most of people eat fast foods which contain a lot of far,salt, additives and preservatives and they gain weight through eating these things but, following a healthy diet and eating more fresh fruit, vegetables and home-cooked food can help them to stay fit. My grandfather who is 80 years old just focuses on his diet and curb his appetite so he is fit without any exercise. 

In conclusion, these days people are less fit compared to the past because of the lack of time and high expenditures but, there are other ways to stay fit.

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AMIR
AMIR

#160841

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Although citizens have access adequately to modern sport centers and equipment, they are not physically in suitable situation in comparison with the past and often suffer from obesity. I think the main reason is related to style of human living that is expressed with couple of suggestions additionally as follow.
  Evidently, the human has been advancing especially during recent decades that it led to make some extreme changes in societies. The figure or type of carries has changed whereas people usually worked in farms like agriculture before and now often are employees in offices or companies. Secondly, technology created numerous kinds of electrical devices such as mobile, computer, console of playing, and TV. Consequently, the users spend to play, work or watch in front of monitor of them for long time. In addition, children are attracted by indoor activities rather than outdoor ones. Another important reason is wrong diet in living so that family members eat fast food without considering the huge calories receiving.
Fortunately, there are some solutions in my view which can solve the significant percentage of this issue as long as they would be performed as well as the citizens would have enough motivation. The first suggestion is people be aware that they are in danger by obesity which is harmful for their healthy. Also, the organization of TV should dedicate some programs to instruct exercises as well as increase the public information about all foods. Furthermore, government or some companies can create sport teams for employees or citizens who will be inspired by prizes or financial profits so that it will make exciting competition between them. Next, technology also can help to solve this issue with virtual reality called Meta nowadays that it can convert the type of plays to active instead of just pushing some buttons.
For summary, in spite of the technology and modernization caused that people been away from physical activities as well as suitable sport facilities could not decrease overweight in  society, I personally suggested some ways to authorities, organizations and also explained how the technology can create opportunity to be in the better status physically.     

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Masoud
Masoud

#235581

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Albeit there are an extensive diversity sport club and equipment that people can utilize them, many people do not interest in order to keep fit these days.

Firstly, there is no denying the fact that people have to work much more time than before because of economic climate and tremendous financial pressure undoubtedly. Secondly, pandemic of corona virus also played an indispensable role in this issue. For instance many people should often work full time in their offices in order to earn some money as an overtime regularly and they have to consume a junk food that will not be health food scientifically. As a result they are as busy as a bee and they can not have sufficient time to exercising due to incredibly boring. Moreover pandemic of corona has had profound effect on this matter, since people can not get together for keeping fit in the gyms practically.

From my perspective if people want to overcome this obstacle fundamentally, they must plan out against their adversity that will lead to blood pressure, obesity. As a classic solution that is worth mentioning is to walk in the park their daily routine and so they can join some community in the free space which are active in the parks. This solution can be precious when they can not exercise in the gyms. Another solution that comes to my mind is to employ a private sport teacher. By doing this individuals have to carry out their activities routinely.

In conclusion, I believe that people must plan out their sport activities during the day or week and they must not forget that exercising and healthy diet can really help them for a good lifestyle.

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Milad
Milad

#233664

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Today, modernization has changed people's life style to a bad way. Although there are many kinds of sports amenities, it is often proved that the majority of people suffer from less activity. Some causes of this issue such as time management and tight schedule will be discussed in this essay. Consequently, some possible solutions will be given. 

 

To commence with, the primary root of this problem is that individuals have not enough time to allocate for exercising in gyms. Many companies impel employees to work on a regular basis about ten hours a day. It brings not only bad diet because of having fast foods or junk foods but also some disease such as obesity due to less activity. The second one is to have problems to meet deadlines and responsibilities. The public should work most of their time in daily routines to reach their goals for e.g. make ends meet. The lack of time and problem with planning make people unsatisfied to be fitness.

 

Some possible feasible solutions would be, for instance, encourage people to use bicycles for different purposes including shopping and working. However, some actions should be taken by governments to improve healthy way of life.  Furthermore, companies can introduce flexible working hours or also offer staff to work from home. The evidence suggests that some managers who provide workers sports time during work hours, they pay attention to physical fitness. Imagine that these steps really affect people's health and could help them to have good lives.

 

By way of conclusion, there are many reasons why people have less activities regardless of different sports facilities which are provide in many countries. This essay discuss two main reasons and accordingly possible solutions have been discussed. 

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mina
mina

#199242

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Different kind of sport facilities and gym are available nowadays, however, people are not in good shapes as they was in past. I think the main cause of this problem is related to the form of activities and daily chores people do in their lives. A healthy life style could be the best solution.

 

Nowadays, most of people do nothing but sitting in front of a computer, whereas in past, people have to do lots of physical activities in order to make money. The majority of works have been done by technology today and there is no need to human forces anymore. For instance, there are a lot of machines which help people in agriculture, therefore people can be a farmer without doing hard physical activities. Moreover, people use their cars to go around while in past, they have to walk or ride a horse which both are calorie burning activities. However, there are more gyms and sport centers in compared to the Past, but these facilities cannot alter the routine physical activities that have done by people. With all of these changes, it is not surprising to see more fat people around also there are lots of gym.

 

A healthy life  style can help us to tackle this problem. In order to improving wellbeing, people not only should do more physical activities, but also they should be careful about what they eat. A healthy life style covers all aspect of individual's lives including amount of calories they burnt and calorie they gave from foods. For instance, an engineer who spent long hours sitting in chair, can walk or cycle to he/she office and also have more healthy food

 

In conclusion the nature of people's daily activities have changed. People were more Physically active in the past. Unfortunately more sport facilities cannot help people with this problem although a healthy lifestyle might be helpful.

5.5

Seyyed Sajad
Seyyed Sajad

#226066

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

It is true that overweight become a common issue among individuals in spite of increasing sport facilities and gym. Although there are numerous causes for this issue, I think the main ones refer to low activity that we have in comparison to calories that we receive in every meal. As a solution, in my opinion receiving fewer calories can be effective solution in addition to count down the stress which is always with us, nowadays.

 

Regarding to increasing sport facilities the growing number of people who suffering from overweight is noticeable and the main reasons could be daily routine and lifestyle. For instance, large part of jobs are now behind tables. People sit on their chair for long hours that confront them with inactivity one of the main reason of obesity. Moreover, the type of food that we consume have lots of calories that needs lots of activity to be burned like fast food. We use several times a week from fast foods that take the intensity of problem to upper level. In addition, lack of time do not let people spend their time on cooking good meals or go to gym in special discipline. In addition, nowadays stress becomes an unseparated part of our life which mostly comes from our surrounding world.

 

As a solution, in my opinion, it is an ideal solution to have an optimal timetable for doing tasks to save time for going to the gym but I think it is very optimistic suggestion just like consider time for cooking healthy food. But I think it could be more realistic idea that people try to do some basic forms of sport like stretching muscles for few minutes. Moreover, I think another step that could be taken to tackle the problem is try to reduce the stress in order to avoiding overdoing tasks as a result of working more efficient without stress.

 

In conclusion, correcting the daily routine and reducing stress in composition to some primary movement of sport can be considered as a working and realistic solution.

5.5

loghman
loghman

#236243

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Although access to the sport facilities have been increasing, fewer people are fit. Progressing in technology and over eating fast foods may are two most significant justifications which lead people to be unfit even though there are high-tech sports facilities. There are some Solutions should be implemented to deal with it.

 Firstly, progressing in technology plays a crucial role in raising  unfitting rate. Computerisem lead people to less physical activities and thay becoming slave their cars and automated lifestyles. For instance, citizens oftentimes go to their work place by private car, while walking or doing cycling were more favored in the past as well as this, tendency of playing with computer game among teenager result in less physical activities and more health problem such as obesity. Secondly, overeating fast foods is another reason which lead people to be unfit. Although the fast foods have been rich in saturated fats and salt, it is popular because is affordable and saves the time and money compared to traditional foods. 

There are two effective solutions to the problem of obesity rate. One way to tackle is to encouraging people to use bicycle for going to their work place. This could be done by considering some restriction for using private vehicle. For instance, citizens will be tempt to do cycling if governments raising the fuel cost or reducing the cost of bicycle. Another method of dealing with  this problem is to prevent people from overeating fast food and prepared foods. This could be done by developing low-cost healthy food shops.By doing this a crucial part of daily routines people is optimized.

 In conclusion as plate of developing in a sport facilities overeating fast food and progressing in technology avoid people to be more feed compared to before however including people to have a more physical activity throughout decrease the cost of bicycle and providing healthy foods.

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ELNAZ
ELNAZ

#237523

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, there are many sport facilities available, but people are not as fit as before. This is an unusual opposition that can have different reasons.  

In my point of view, the main cause of this problem is that people have never been as busy as they are nowadays. There are numerous tasks that each person should take care of daily. In comparison with the past, people’s lives are much more occupied, mainly because of development in technology and human interactions. Time passes and human’s life gets more and more complicated. 

Imagine that you are a student. You get up everyday and go to school or university. When your classes are finished, you plan to hang out with your friends or go to your English class. When you go home, you do your homework or assignments. After that, you get tired. Therefore you decide to lie on your bed and spend your time texting your friend. Maybe even you play an online game with them. Is there any time left for you to go to the gym?

The situation is not different if you are not a student. You probably have a job, no matter it is a part-time job or a full-time one. When you get home, you want to rest and spend some time with your family. You might also text your friend or plan to meet him/her. Your mind is also busy thinking of money you spent today or bills you have to pay by end of the week. You do not even remember to go to the gym and take care of your own health.

In the past, human’s life was much simpler and people could give attention to all aspects of their lives. 

In conclusion, technology, development of human's relationships  and minds full of different concerns are reasons that cause people not to be as fit as before.

 

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Arghavan
Arghavan

#237550

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Although these days the vast number of amenities and equipped gyms has been allocated for training, there is an increasing trend among people being overweight. This situation has been created by some causes including more interest in sedentary activities and eating fast foods among individuals. This essay will delve deeper into causes and give some solutions to tackle the problem. 

To commence with the first and foremost reason,as an article shows published in 2020 by the Nature Magazine, in this technology era a host of people incline more to do sedentary activities such as remote offices, video games and even distance learning due to the fact that there are more convenient. Furthermore, eating fast foods and less healthy foods, having high amount of calories and fat,show a growing tide among persons because of the delicious recipes which they have. As a result, fatness will become a grave danger in near future. 

Turning to the solutions, this issue will be offset by a shared cooperation between people and governments. Firstly, governments should give more funds to equip sport centers for all of tastes. Secondly, they would dedicate some free gyms for encouraging people to exercise and finally being last but not least, it could be beneficial, if some aware individuals set special campaigns to promote people to do sports and explain some disturbing outcomes caused by lazy lifestyle. 

To sum up, by contrast to many sport facilities and equipped sport buildings, obesity rate has a growing trend which will be minimized by helping people and governments together. 

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raheleh
raheleh

#218818

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

In spite of the fact that these days the number of gyms and other sport facilities are growing up, still there are many people who suffer from obesity. In my opinion, it goes through their busy life style, not having a balance diet and also technology.
Due to the high cost of living expenses, people are on a tight budget and have to work more and more. As a consequence, they have less free time to do exercise or follow a personal fitness program. They do not even have time to prepare a home-made cook and mostly eat ready meals and process foods. As a result, they would gain weight and be usually in a bad state of health.
In addition, progress of technology has made this situation even worse and people are less physically active now. They may spend hours sitting in front of computers at work or watching television or surfing internet and social networks while they are having snacks. Moreover, technology made people lazier, they prefer driving cars even for short distances while they can walk or ride a bicycle.
Taking everything into consideration, since people do not concern about their health condition and they are busy so do not give any priority for exercise in their daily life, they are mostly out of condition. So, I recommend that companies set a specific time for employee to exercise and provide related facilities on site or even sign a contract with the nearest sport center to their office. In my point of view, this will definitely increase their work efficiency and would help their employees to keep fit as well.

5.5

mahdie
mahdie

#219826

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Today, people are becoming less fit compared to the past periods. Whereas numerous fitness centers and places to work out are seen everywhere, but still, the obesity percentage is high. I think this is mainly because of people’s busy work life and the cost of membership of sport facilities, however there are some solutions.

A reason why most people are less fit today is due to their busy lifestyle and working schedule. Because of the competitive atmosphere has been created in workplaces these days, almost every one prefer to devote significant  portion of their time on their own career than physical health. Another reason could be the price of membership of gym centers, which can be over people’s budget. 

To solve this issues, governments must reduce working hours or make it flexible or banned taking overtime, therefore in this way the staff will have free time to play sports and also have more energy to be active. As well as this, companies should install exercise equipment in workplaces and encourage the employees to use them, for example offering free tickets or discounts on certain days of the year will be so effective.

In conclusion, the decline in health and fitness despite the number of gym centers available in everywhere owe mainly to a lack of time and high cost of sport facilities’ tuition. However, these problems can be solved with few simple methods to increase the levels of fitness as well as the gyms fully occupied.

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Jamal
Jamal

#195727

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Obesity is a hot issue among health care communities. While, there are plenty equipment to fit, for people who have not enough keen toward using them. I firmly believe that our lives style and enormous vehicles are the main cause of this challenge.

These days, the size of clothes would be bigger that past. The fast of being fatty is not comparable of few years ago. Individuals, do not paying attention to their health and physics. Indeed, one of the main issue for this challenge is that, people completely engage their self on their jobs and works. Therefore, there are many tasks on their plat and finding a gap or time for sport is tricky. These type of employees believe that, by using some vitamin tablets they mitigate the consequences of hardworking. Certainly, having a solid body not only requires minerals and vitamins, but also it needs outdoor or indoor sport.

Physiologists believe that, everyone has to allocate 45 minutes a day for aerobic or body building exercise. While, exhausting after the work downgrade people to take nape or rest in their homes. Anther feature which encourage anyone to be silent is increasing the number of vehicles and online services. For instance, ordering food, breed, shopping and many daily works are delivered by online companies like Amazon, Uber, Snapp and so on. Unfortunately, these companies focus on addicting their costumers by attractive suggestions. People, consider their time on obey exercise in their homes based on some applications and websites, but, after they would be awkward and left their schedule. Therefore, embedding a weakly exercise has prominent value for anyone to avoid unfitting.

 

Overall, the life style and thinking rely our bodies encourage everyone going to sport and gym, to rescue from physical and mental illnesses. 

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nahid
nahid

#216476

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

These days, although many sport centers and gym clubs are equipped by new and modern facilities, many people suffer from overweight as well as not being in good shape. This fact may bring about some problems for a society. In this essay I intend to explore the sources of these problems along with some solutions to them.

It is seemed that the chief cause of this problem is people’s sedentary lifestyle. It means that many individuals working as an employee may spend a lot of times behind their computer and being inactive, so they don’t have neither enough time nor enough energy for doing regular exercises in gym clubs. Another contributing factor is unreasonable fees of some gym clubs. Therefore, the cost of using these facilities cannot be afforded by low paid people. Also, these people fail to be good shape. These important issues can lead to an array of psychological and physical problems in individuals.

In order to resolve these problems, we must address its causes. In other world, it is offered that gym centers ought to be added to big company which their employees work more than half of a day. Even if this gyms have a rudimentary equipment, it will have noticeable effect on employee’s fitness. Also, the tickets of attending in fitness club can be taken by companies as a reward to their workers. Moreover, if sport center’s fees were free, poor people not having private facilities would participate in these places. In this way, they will be in good shape.

In conclusion, if gym clubs or sport centers which are equipped by modern and good facilities are added in workplaces or being free for poor people, most of health problems and psychological issues can be solved and people enjoy being fit.

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fateme
fateme

#234993

Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before.

 

What do you think are the main causes of this problem?

What solutions can you suggest?

Today we have more developed means and tools to keep the body fit compared to a few years ago. Spite of these such development in means of exercising, people less tend to use them efficiently. Although there are people who see sport as one of the life value but there are still many who their bodies are no longer fit. There are absolutely some reasons for that as living in a highly competitive business world, distraction such as mobile phone and so on.

It is easy to argue that, as the world becomes more developed, the business world becomes more competitive due to fewer job opportunities. As a result, most of the people are so busy to care about going to the gym. On the other hand, from young people point of view, going to the gym has less attraction compared to whatever they do on the phone. For instance, most of the young generation prefer to spend their leisure time on watching YouTube or streaming movies instead of doing some workouts which according to some it comes from laziness.

However, some people may replace exercising with other things as diet to keep their body fit, but having personalized workout routine is something more than being fit. It also benefits for our body health or even our mental health. It should be a must for every person who is about to hire a job to have a sport routine. Beside that in every college or school should be built a gym to students do their workouts along studying.  

To sum up, it is certain that we live in a world full of stress or distractions, but people regardless of their age or their job position should have regular schedule for exercising and do not neglect these sport facilities in order to not losing their fit.

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زهرا
زهرا

#232601

A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague.

In your letter

 

 

What the presentation was about

Why the presentation was important

how the book helped you.

Dear Mr Gro, 

Hope all be fine for you in your work these days and be healthy. Please send my regards to others. I will be back so soon.I am writing this letter to inform you, I could finally  finished my presentation last week. 

Over all, as you  know your book was really helpful for me. First of all, thank so much for  gave me your nice book ,then I used it, not only for my presentation at my seminar, but also the others  who  were working  in plant department used the references too. 

Actually, all people whom attended our meeting,   hearing   carefully about new drugs and vitamins. As you was studying in plant Pathology, which  mixed between science and medical subject ,you may  have more information about vitamins and health, Therefore I would like read   another book of yours , if you could give them to  me in future. 

I believe that , you will be more expert in your field and I Hope be successful in your daily  work. I feel very  happy and pleased when read your book.

Will  have good times and thanks again.

Best wishes ,

Fatmeh.

 

 

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Andishe
Andishe

#236739

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

the graph illustrates car stolen per thousand in four different countries from 1990 to 1999. The highest precent of Theft was in Britain. Sweden was in second place which Franch and Canada were in the same position by the end of this time.
Great Britain had a slight fluctuate up and down during this time, althought, the percent was not really changed in 1999. Sweden had less than 10 percent Car theif, then it had significant increase up to 15 percent by the time in 1999. In 1991, france and Sweden had equally thefts in about 7 percent, which Canada was followed about 6 percent.
At the beginning, Canada had higher rate than France. Canada was decreasing until 1993. However, France had sharply increase in only one year ,after that, increasing until 1993. Canada had slight climbing where France had a little up and down as well. Then both face at approximately 6 percent in 1999.
overall, Frence and Canada didnot have a noticeably change in statistics. Britain went almost the same rate and it had the highest rate. on the other hand, Sweden was going up in one decade.

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Hooria
Hooria

#172519

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

 The line graph on the top of the page showes us the result of a research about thefts per thousend vehicles in four countries between 1990 to 1999.

  As we can see on this graph, it is obvious that Great Britain is on the top of the graph and the list of thefts of cars, arrainged baised on "the most" to "the least", during the whole time of research. There is also Sweden which has an incrreasing graph, although in first year it decreased. On the buttem of the graph, there is Canada, which has a decreasing graph in the first four years and then started increasing so slowly. Between tow graphs of Sweden and Canada we have France,from the beginning of the research it was on the buttem but, it start increasing and at the emd of 1999, the thefts results goes in to a steady range and it was near to the Canada's result.

  In cunclusion, among four countries that we have been researched obout them, Great Britain has the highest thefts result, all the time, and noon of the ather countries could reach its result.

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azin
azin

#236517

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

The line graph illustrates the amount of stealing per thousand vehicles in Sweden, Canada, France and Britain from 1990 to 1999. Overall, from the graph it can plainly viewed that Britain has always had the most theft through the period. While the Sweden experienced a upward trend the other had a downward trend.

With regard to the amount of theft got decreased over the years but it had some fluctuation. It began at around 17 thousand and then peaked at 20 thousand in 1996 before falling to about 15 thousand in 1999. Although France rate in stealing got decreased but it had some fluctuation and ended in almost 7 thousand just as same the Canada in 1999.

On the contrary, stealing got increased in Sweden from 1990 to 1996 and stayed the same between 1996 and 1998. In 1999 theft vehicles reached 18 thousand. 

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fereshteh
fereshteh

#237504

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

The line graph shows the vehicles that were stolen in four countries from 1990 to 1999.

It is clear that the number of thefts in Great Britain is by far much more than the other countries. all the other three countries show not many differences.

In 1990, 18 thefts out of 1000 vehicles happened in Great Britain compared to six, seven, eight for France, Canada, and Sweden Respectively.

The number of thefts in 1991 in friends in Sweden is the same at eight thefts per 1000 vehicles.

Vehicles that were stolen in Sweden shows That it increased mildly from 1991 to 1999. And contrast other countries show mild fluctuation.

In 1999 theft in Sweden reach its peak at 14 that’s Great Britain reached to the lowest number of thefts at 16 thefts per 1000 vehicles.

5.5

Pedram
Pedram

#237729

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

The pictorial information illustrates the amount of car burglary in four various nations in a period from 1990 to 1999

 

At first glance, Great Britain has the most ratio in all years but its overall trend was downward as well as Canada. It goes without saying, Sweden had risen dramatically and reached as twice times more than its first amount whilst France had a smooth rise.

 

Firstly, Great Britain after two peaks in 1992 and 1996 by 20 individuals per 1000 cars and a low point in 1993, reached a bit less than its first place in 1999. Furthermore, in 1990, Sweden started at approximately 7 thieves, but after 1992 skyrocketed to almost 13 and reduced its distance with Britain from almost 12 to roughly 5 persons.

 

In addition, France had overtook Canada in first year with a jump, after that rebounded gradually to almost its pristine ratio. Canada felt sharply from 1991 to 1993 at 7, when started its slight increase and ended up at a similar amount with France accounted for 6 wicked people.

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Monia
Monia

#217335

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

A glance at the provided graph reveals some information about car thefts in four various nations from 1990 until 1999.

It is apparant from the data that the number of thefts in Great Britian was considerably high while, it seems this quantity was fewest in Canada.

It is interesting to note that, the sum of stolen car in Britian was a mere 25000 in first year then in went up gradually for 2 years approxiematly for 20000 ones then it declined till middle of period. Evidently, it soar  twentythousand in 1996, at this point it dropped slowly until the end. Thefts had stolen vehicle somewhere at the vicinity of 5000 in Canada as well as this statistic decreased untill 1993, again it experienced a remarkable rise for 7 years. Suprisingly, the sum of car which were stolen in Sweden was nearly 7000 that increased expotentially between 1991 to 1999. In France, the car thefts volume had flacuated just under 10000 to just above 50000.

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Masoumeh
Masoumeh

#237730

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

This graph is an analysitical  research report about car theft in several countries during 1990-1999. 
First it reveals that there is an increasing rate of car theft in sweden. It shows that in 1990 there were almost 6 car stealing per one thousand vehicles, and these were increased to near 14 by 1999. 
Another point we can infer from this graph is that Britain was the country that car theft rates were more different than others. For example Britain car theft rate in 1990 is near 18 per 1000 vehicles that in other 3 countries the average of ratings were near 6. It seems that car theft in Britain is 2 times more than others.  
The next issues I can see in this graph is that  the rate of car theft in France and Canada were the same in 1999. Although in canada the graph was increasing, in France the statistics of this kinds of crime is in a decreasing slope.
Generally, statistics of car theft in Sweden, France, and Canada are in a similar rates but in Britain both prevalence and variance are far from other countries.

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Mohammad
Mohammad

#233854

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

The stolen car statistics between three European countries and Canada illustrate on the line graphover nine years.

As can be seen, the thefts rate in Canada and France are steadily fall over nine years, while, this rate is considerably increase in Sweden. There is a significant gap between Great Britain and the others on car thefts statistics.

The stolen car rate flow in Canada and France is same from 1990 to 1999. According to the statistics from the beginning until 1993, the rate is steadily drop to five thousand for each. The thefts flow approximately stay stable for Canada until the end of period, while, has a gradual fluctuations for France between 1990 and 1999. In 1999, both country touch each other on six thousand thefts vehicle. 

There was a significant difference between Great Britain and other countries. Thefts rate on Great Britain is two times more than the others and has moderate fluctuation over nine years.The stolen car statistics in Sweden represented sharp jump from eight thousand to approximately 15 thousand between 1990 and 1999.

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Mobina
Mobina

#237591

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

The line graph compares information about the number of vehicles which were robbed in four distinct countries, over a nine-year period from 1990 to 1999.

 

Overall, what stands out from the line graph is that Great Britain had the greatest number of stolen vehicles in all the periods. However, it is interesting to note that there was a dramatic sharp in the number of thefts vehicles in Sweden, while it fluctuated in both France and Canada.

 

As can be seen from the line graph, Great Britain had the highest number of robbed vehicles at just over 17000 in 1990, and in 1996 the figure for the country peaked at nearly 20000. However, it fell sharply to around 16000 in the following three years.

5.5

Kimia
Kimia

#234395

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

This line graph demonstrates how many vehicles were stolen per thousand cats in Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada from 1990 until 1999. All thefts in these countries had a subtle change over the 10 years except France that had a drastic change. It had a dramatic rise in 1991 and it finally reached its peak I'm 1999 with almost 15 thefts per thousand vehicles. And Canada fell drastically in 1993 unlike Sweden that reached almost 10 thefts per thousand cars in the same year. The lowest number of thefts was found in Canada I'm 1993 with only 5 thefts. Overall, there was an upward trend in the number of thefts in Great Britain and France. And the other 2 had a very subtle change.

5.5

Seyed Bahaeddin
Seyed Bahaeddin

#232888

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

Following graph shows the number of stolen cars per 1000 vehicles in four European countries from 1990 to 1999.

As the graph illustrate, only in Sweden steal growth and in other countries theft had been steady or slightly decreased.

In Great Britain, number of theft cars increased from 18 to 20 from 1990 to 1992 and in 1993 this numbers drop to 17. During next 4 years number of stolen cars increased and reached it’s top at 21 per 1000 vehicles in 1996. Finally, the trend was downward from 1996 to 1999 and the number decreased to about 16 thefts.

The only country with growing number of thefts during given period was Sweden with about 8 thefts in 1990 to just under 15 stolen vehicles in 1999. During 1996 to 1998 the number stay remains at 12. Meanwhile, theft number for Canada was decreasing from 1990 to 1993 (7 robberies to 5 robberies) and after 1993 this number increased gradually to 6 in 1999. Lastly, number of thefts in France experienced a sharp rise from 4 in 1990 to 8 in 1991 and then with some fluctuations again reached to 4 at 1999

5.5

Katayoun
Katayoun

#237733

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

It is often said that exercise have to be in all educational institutions in contemporary era. However, the issue is not entirely straight forward, and argument can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.

 


On the one hand, those who support the compulsory exercise cite. The various benefits that sports can bring to individuals. Thes range from being fit to having healthy lifestyle. For instance, exercise activities and paying attention to body contribute to fit development and be healthy, which can increase the longevity. Another argument is the stress reliever that people recieve from sports, meaning that the individuals feel more happiness and thus more confident, and it can help them to do their personal and work affairs better in whole days.

 


By contrast, opponents of this view point out that sports should not be forced. Examples can be seen in countless situations, where the compulsory sport has caused discomfort and apathy. In addition, many people can't exercise, due to their body form or sickness or even they aren't interested in exercising. For these people, sport would be probably boring and annoying. Finally, it must be said that not all individuals actually exercise, because their interest lie elsewhere. For these people, sports should not be encouraged.

 


Overall, it seems advisable that the decision to do exercise should be based on a people abilities, interest and body circumstances, rather than on general view that all individuals should exercise. So it would appear that this serve the interests of both the people and the sport involved.

5.5

AMIR
AMIR

#160841

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

With regard to increasing the percentage of obesity in society, some groups of people argue that sport must be mandatory in educational establishments. The opposite group rejected this strategy and they believe that it probably harms participants emotionally. In my opinion, the both views must consider some benefits and drawbacks to performing each trend which analyzed below as follow.

The first idea claims that the only way to resolve the overweight issue rising among citizens is setting compulsory plan in educational centers. According to this method, students will get used to doing exercise regularly. On the other words, sport totally turns into daily routine activity when children have been educated by trainers at schools. For example, students must do some stated sport program for ten minutes before the start of their science classes. Furthermore, unfit ones will get rid of obesity without serious determination. It means that they no need strong motivation to be fit. In my view, it has some negative points mentally which is synchronized with opposite attitude of another group.

On the other side, there is one group against them who believe that mandatory exercise in educational organs makes some embarrassments feeling in some overweight persons or students. In reality, the negative feeling comes from unsuccessfully in doing something. For instance, the numbers of students at schools who are annoyed from obesity have been laughed by their other classmates as long as they could not perform correctly the sport practices. So, it should be better that we encourage people and also do not expect to do high-level of exercises. It means that the organization should provide one atmosphere as well as guide them by trainers with simple work out in the unprofessional level.

In conclusion, it is necessary to find one solution to create positive tendency between people especially students to be fit physically. So, I think that educational authorities should facilitate the schools with suitable atmosphere and justified trainers for students to being away from probable emotional harms when they exercise.

5.5

Mohammad
Mohammad

#214023

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

In these days, the number of people who have a normal weight decreased considerably, as a consequence, some individuals believe that sport must be an obligatory section of educational systems scheduals, but others think that it would have negative emotional effects on pupils who are not interested about sport.

One of the most important of life aspects is being healthy. Overweigh and fat people are usually facing with several problems like heart attacks more than slim ones, therefore, they should do sport in order to decline their fat. It would be faster and easier if they go to gym in younger ages, so sport scheduals at school and university can be more effective. In addition, being compulsory this kind of education would help students to improve both physical and emotional aspects indeed. Of course, authorities should choose and prepare appropriate sport for all kinds of pupils who are different in ages and sizes.

On the other hand, a few of students can not or do not want to attend in these types of classes, and prefer being alone. They are embarrassingin all situation and turn away from whole activities, so they never make voluntary decision to do sport or other works. In my opinion, compulsory physical education is forcing them into being healthier. Many psychologists have  recommeded their patients to do regular sport which plays vital role to increase confidence.

In conclusion, to prevent an overweigth community, goberments should obligate schools and universitis to take place physical education, in spite of some pupils do not like that.

 

5.5

Armin
Armin

#227232

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Fitness definitely is one of the most trending affairs in 2023. Although the main object is a fit and healthy body among individuals, there are many discrete ways to achieve this goal. Among those ways two of them are under controversial discuses. In this essay I will elaborate both sides with understandable reasons and logical opinions.
In the one hand some people claim that compulsory sport in educational establishments in order to help individuals keep themselves fit is necessary, because in their point of view people are not really into enrolling gyms and attending public sport schemes therefore, the main solution for this for instance, would be putting more and more sport classes in the interval between courses. As a result of that pupils have to attend these programs in order to achieve better scores, and as achieving better scores for the course would be the main concern the side effect of that is doing exercise and actually it fits gym time in students weekly program regularly. 
In the other hand some people believe that compulsory force is not a prosper way to tackle this problem. They think exercising under unwill forces would result in serious mental illnesses as well as physical coordination. Also pupils in early ages might lose their confident and suffer from lack of self-steam in further years.
In conclusion i think the compulsory force is not even an option because of all harmful physically  and mentally effects which will lead to further problems for individuals

5.5

Mahta
Mahta

#207529

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

In the 21st century, lots of people suffer from obesity. Some poeple believe that governments should set strick rules in educational institution for people to join the club and make an obligation to enroll sport classes whilst others say compulsory physical education make people to fed up and feel ackward to sport. In my opinion, people should have freedom of their choice and governent should do other things to improve the health of society.

 


Nowadays, lots of people take care about their health. Lots of them have joined the gym and sport club. However, it is evident that they do not continue their activities and leave their classes. In this situation, government should set motivator for society to encourege them. For instance, set some local competition and encourage people to improve their body and compete with each other. So, it is one way to improve the society’s health and do not embarrass people. 

 


Likewise, government can make a program to teach to other people the diseases that deprive from obesity. If people know about the disease that might be get trouble in future they try to improve their body fit and join sport classes. Therefore, poeple motivate to join and make an advice for their friends and persuade their friend to improve their body. 

 


In conclusion, despite the fact that sometime compulsory can modify and cure the phenomenon, in this case does not change anything. So, the ways that mention above, can improve the society’s health and they are some motivation for society.

5.5

Monia
Monia

#217335

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Whether mandatory sports provide more effect on people's shape or optional has sparked much debate in recent years. Some people assert that sport should be an essential factor in educational establishment owing to an increase of weight whereas others argue that it is impressive when defines as voluntary activity since some pupils would have a comfortable sense. I am personally in favor of latter speculation. A compulsory action would pursues individuals to fallow sports and avoid being overweight but in some cases their disability can be highlighted and make them embarrassed.

 

 

 

A convincing argument can be made that a particular term of sport are put in mandatory plan for people if so, they would be fit always and their health is guaranteed. Not only can they lose their weight but also they care about the daily schedule. A salient example is students have to play basketball in school in since time immemorial thus it seems a pick in their height growth. Further and even more,although diverse physical issues can eliminate by regular exercise. Should people be in force about sport, their health condition improves.

 

 

 

Nevertheless, there are plethoras of cones in this attitude. A number of individuals are weak in physical activity as well as thay cannot be as hectic as other hence, mandatory sport would distribute them physical and mentally. The avoid doing exercise like everybody if so, their weak point would be public which is distributing. Although sports would preserve our weigh in normal range it can creat serious health problem. Therefore, when sports are voluntary people, try to maintain their fit shape by it if it is parallel to their situation.

 

By way of conclusion, I am convinced that people's physical condition would become better by copulsory sport. I would concede that in some cases it can provide worrying problem to them.

 

5.5

zahra
zahra

#226880

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

People are calling into question the way that prevent or reduce obesity among some people. While some people advocate the idea that making necessary doing sport through educational circumstance may prove beneficial, others dismiss them. Both sides of the argument present rational ideas, which will be elaborated on.

On the one hand, supporters of doing sport compulsorily assert that the benefits from it are by no means negligible. To begin with, it helps a huge number of people a healthy lifestyle. To simply, if they have a necessary for doing sport, people from many walks of life are able to increase their awareness about doing sport. In fact, that is maybe all people do not have knowledge about disadvantage of doing sport. Which means, learning about it in colleges encourage some people to fame their favorites and by it they can make a healthy lifestyle for themselves. Moreover, the more awareness, the more interest. which means during the educational learning since the teachers are specialist so that they can found the favorites of different learner and insist them to do the exercise that help to them to have health and fitness life style. Hence, doing sport can not only help boost out confidence but can help people to be aware about their fitness.

 

On the other hand, others argue that mad compulsory doing sport have some disadvantages. firstly, it may reduce the self-confidence. that means, since, some students have some physical disability it can discourage them of being interested to doing exercise and thus they compared them self with other learner who are talent and their confidence will be reduce. In addition, some students do not like do sport, it is necessary to respect the choices of student although have some problematic for them.

 

To conclude, there are logical points on both sides, however, I agree that when people are having to do exercise can make great contributions for them. This is mainly because, when they learn their talent and their favorite, they can continue with great fan their exercise that lead them to be happy people and healthy life.

5.5

Seyedeh Zahra
Seyedeh Zahra

#237247

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Topic 

Some people say that due to the growing number of unit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments.
Other claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don’t like sport.

Writing

It’s told by some people that because of the plenty of obesity sport should be forced in all educational systems, while other believe that doing sports should be a voluntary decision made by people, otherwise it may be made people apathy to sport and due to increase of overweight cases in the society. 

The main reason for some people that believe sport should be mandatory for all educational establishments maybe this of that if there are many such training centers, people will have to adapt to this system and force exercise, so obesity problems such as heart and diabetes diseases will be decreased.

On the other hand, other say that forcing people may cause the reverse result and this means that people’s interest reduce for sports.

In conclusion, since the obesity problems became more in the society some people said that physical education systems should be increased, whereas the rest of the people believed this compulsion made people less interested to sports. In my opinion, giving more importance to the physical education courses in schools for example, increase the hours for physical education lessons or in society for instance, allocating more physical centers like gym for people who like to exercise eventuate students and people do more physical activities and also can be a positive effect on their mindset in sport context.

5.5

Shima
Shima

#214259

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

That surplus weight has got a direct impact on humans health is undeniable . however, In order to tackle this ongoing problem in this essay I will argue It would be effective whether to make physical exertion As a compulsory education course  or this approach because of not being voluntary Would cause humiliation as well as rejecting the sports among students who dislike physical exercise. Subsequently I as a liberal person  agree with second opinion.


With compulsory atmosphere making people unwill , it is too simplicitic a view to consider it as an effective approach to change human attitude in terms of sports. Indeed, we are human being. When we are forced to do any kind of activity , we would definitely reject it even if it has huge positive effects on our wellbeing. For instance, it has been shown that the more the teachers try to persuade students to study the important courses such as mathematic , the more the students are hesitated to do so. As all we know such courses are crucial for students to be accepted in high ranking universities in future, yet they dont often study it as it is compulsory. Without any dout, forcing humans to do exercise can not be a successful method to help them become fit.


Liberation is humans right, every indivitual knows that ,and become encouraged with. As a matter of fact, freedom of choice is a significant right any human cares about. Therefore, when people are free to select their behaviour regarding to physical exercise , they become encouraged to do whatever necessary for their health. Moreover, using the same compulsory method is not suited for all people. For example, there are some students who are not supposed to do sport in their life because of their physical weakness. It is obvious that this oppressive method will cause them feel humiliated and hated in reverse.


To conclude, in my view, to help people become fit , making them to do sports in their educational courses not only is not effective but also lead to rejection. Because freedom is human need to be encouraged and also the same approach will cause humiliation for some people. 
 

 

5.5

akrem
akrem

#237858

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

A group of individuals preset the view that sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishment, whereas others believe only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.

Everyday life today people have poor eating habits. They also indulge in fatty food and the food they has poor nutritional value. moreover, they have sedentary lifestyle. Therefore, they face several health problems such as overweight and obesity. Health authorities should raise public awareness about the consequently of overweight. Some people believe that the best approach is prevent health problems from happening in the first place.it would be logical preventative measures include compulsory sporting in all educational establishments.

There is no doubt that individuals especially students must take some responsibility for their diet and health. The argument to support this is the fact that everybody has free will and make their choice About what they eat and the exercise that they do. From a social perspective, students who suffer from Obesity, are compelled to do physical activities in public place compel themselves whit their peers. Consequently, they may suffer from self-conscious or become very sensitive about their appearance.

To conclude, in my view, everybody has free will and make their choice. In addition, people should be encouraged to do exercise on a regular basis.

 

5.5

Farima
Farima

#209345

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

 

Nowadays, the figure of overweight people has been increased considerably. Regarding this issue, some individuals believe that it should be considered as an obliged activity to do sports in all educational institutions. On the other hand, it is believed that taking exercises would be effective, if it is done by a person’s willing. To make it clarify, it can have an inverse effect, if it is a compulsory.

On the one hand, doing sport in educational institutions such as schools would become more efficient. Because generally, children have a strong acceptance for learning and doing what is ordered to them. For instance, my niece started doing sport when she was 8 years old and after 7 years, she is continuing that major professional.

On the other hand, it can turn to a difficulty for students, if is not done in an appropriate way. Doing sport as a rule in a perpetual routine wil affect students physically and mentaly. My niece’s friend can be mentioned as an example who hated sport by the regulations in her school. All the errors were in the programming of doing sport that where and when it could be occured. The manager of school was set the time at the end of the day!

In a conclusion, sometimes, it can bre resulted in an opposite side if conducting something become an oblige. To address it, some encouraging ways can be implanted. For instance, if somebody follow the routine, he or she will be granted.

 

 

5.5

Paria
Paria

#237749

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Nowadays, the downtrodden lifestyle has become more monotonous, sedentary and mechanical. In order to this, individuals have a marked tendency toward spending their leisure and work time behind the computers. Overally, obesity has dramatically increased during the recent decades. Additionally , there are some arguements among individuals weather sport educating should be must for pupils or not.The mentioned informations will be analyzed in the following paragraphs; by deviding the subject into two categories.

Firstly, the idea of considering sports as a compulsory rule is going to be discussed. If they make this idea into action, majority number of human beings will be in shaped and fit. A better result of this idea is the fact that a healthier, physically-fit and disease-free society is going to be shaped.Furthermore, in my opinion, even those who dislike the given idea, will admire it after a while.

The second group that i would like to mention, supports the members who prefer to have a voluntary decision on it ; and they believe that compulsory physical education, makes the learners embarrassed and sport-haters. I personally assume that everyone should have the right to make their own decision. On the other hand , i don't presume that many students enjoy exercising, therefore, we are going to face a lot of illnesses caused by obesity and an unhealthy society. 


Finally, from my point of view, attending the sport lessons should be considered as a duty for pupils, in order to build up a healthy and wholesome environment. 

5.5

Mansour
Mansour

#189567

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

People are calling into question the compulsoriness of sport. While some advocate the idea that, making sport compulsory in all educational establishments could help to reduce the number of unfit and overweight people in the society, others dismiss them as a complete approach towards the problem. Both sides of the argument present rational ideas which will be elaborated.

On the one hand, supporters of compulsory sport assert that the benefits accruing from this approach are by no means negligible. To begin with, since students spend most of their times in school and universities it would be hard for them to allocate extra time for sport at home. That is to say, spending a noticeable amount of their time at school or universities, students’ have lees time which should be distributed between different subjects like practicing lessons, rest, personal works and other activities. Moreover, being among their friends and classmates, students would have more desire for sport compare with the time they are alone. For instance, students can play football, basketball, Vali ball or other group sports which need both equipments and players. This in turn has a far-reaching positive impacts on their health and fitness. Moreover it would not only help students to be in shape, it would also prevent of being ill and decrease the cost of health care for society.

On the other hand, others put forward the argument that sport just help to those people chose voluntary be on good shape. Obligatory physical activities not only doesn’t help people to be in fit, but it would also could make them hate sport. The most compelling reason justifying their assertation is that force would never help mankind to reach their aims. Psychologically speaking, obligatory activities bring negative senses towards sprot. That is to say, choosing voluntary sport, people would make their best to reach their goal which is having in shape body. Forced people on the contrary will not make enough efforts in obligatory sports. A good illustration of this is forcing fat guys to run which is the most hated action among these people. All obligatory activities provide whit is hate and embarrassment.

To conclude, there are logical points on both sides; however I am on the opinion that sport should be compulsory in educational establishments. This is mainly because this approach could tackle the root of increasing number of overweight among people and it could also enhance to be in shape.

5.5

sarah
sarah

#232403

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

These days the number of overweight people is increasing, so some people believe that mandatory work out programs will solve this problem, while others think compulsory sport will result in embarresment in people who do not like physical activities. I believe in the second insight to this controversial problem, compulsory physical activities for students,only embaresses them and make them to avoid doing sports.

To begin, I think not only in this case, but in every field, compulsory activities make people to be averse doing it, and working out is not an exception. I think it is totally reasonable and inevetible, because  only people are justified to descide for their lives. For example about a century ago wearing hijab had been forbiden in my countary. At that time this decision leaded to disobedience to the law, years later not wearing hijab was banned and again, it resulted in strong aversion and protests.

Moreover, some people may have had malformations from birth and they are forbidden from doing some specific kind of sports. This fact may embaresses them or make them uncomfortable and more important than that, it may also results in serious harm. For instance, one of my friends, has had an inheritable diseas in her back. When were school girls, we were forced to do Crunchs for our sport exam. I recall that she was in so much pain doing this excersice and she did not like to express it as she thought it is something embarressing.

Taking everything into consideration, I would say, sports should not be compulsory, in that case, if people decide for themselve and understand sport is really good for them, they would have this inclination to do even the hardest physical activities and also they know themselve better, thus they would choose the best excercise based on their physic and body and in this way they will not be embarressed or injured.

5.5

Yasaman
Yasaman

#237323

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Because of increasing the rate of obesity in world, some people blieve that it is necessary to make people to do sport in academic centers even when they aren't volunteer. While other group of people say that this forcing activities could have negative impact on students instead of benefits that it expected to have. In next paragraphs I will give my opinion.
In my view, people affected negatively by every compulsory activity. One of the best effective ways to avoid growing rate of obesity is promoting people knowledge about hazardous impact of overweight. If they know what will happen for them in future, if they weren't in a healthy weight, they would do sports by their own decision, and there won't be any need to make them to do sport. Although sport plays a key role in the matter of being fit, people's diet is more important, so it is necessary to guide individuals to have a balance diet either.
Despite the fact that I am disagree whit the compulsory sport educating idea, some educations about physical activities could be beneficial specially in early ages. Pupils in their primary school could be leaded and interested to sport and healthy life by suitable educations, and also it perhaps could be a good way to find the children's talents and their interests.
In conclusion, forcing people to do anything including sport, not only doesn't have any helpful impact, but also it maybe dangerous because it could make people hate any sport for the rest of their life, and maybe the best way to fight with overweight is increasing people's awareness about the side effects of being fat, and give them the knowledge of having a healthy diet benefits. But in some cases, specially for children, the compulsory sport educating could have some merits . For example they could be leaded to healthy attitude or find their talents.

5.5

Hooria
Hooria

#172519

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

From where I stand, forcing people, make them hate the activity, whether it is for their best or not, you will get quiet opposite result. So although I agree that the number of obese people have been these days, I am not supporting compulsory physical education.

  To defend my opinion, I should say people are free to do whatever they want to their own bodies. So it should be their choice whether they want to do exercise or not. Therefore, if government made them to work out, they will definitely get away these people freedom from them. Maybe they are happy with this body or even want this body. So forcing is not a perfect plan.


  on the other hand, if government educate people about the benefits of the axercis and the negative points of overweight and its harms to body in all educational establishments, instead of just pushing them doing it, I am sure that it remains a huge change in their lives and they will go to the gym and do sports voluntarily. Also, I believe that forcing and compulsory plans are only the easy way and non-efficient ones. If government just operate some encoraging plans such as rewarding prises for losing weight, each month, or even free sports classes or indirect effects on people's mind by frequent advertisements, they definitely will face a better result than the scheduled education which is without any mind's background. 


  To conclude, in general, I think forcing for any kind of plan, would be a disaster and not only you will never get your optimal result, but also it will make it worse.
 

 

 

5.5

Bahar
Bahar

#237730

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Some people believe that doing exercises should be mandatory at school, but others think that sports should be optional. In my opinion, despite that exciting children to have some daily exercises might be benefical, sports should not be compulsory. 


Making children do some exercises as a routine would be very beneficial. Benefits of sports are not restricted to physical improvement. Daily exercises would be great for their mental health. Devoting some time of daily school’s timetable to sport may be a very good idea. First, children can have a lot of fun during the activity. Secondly, It is also a smart way of making them interact with the peers which will help them improve social skills. Finally, they will lose weight and be more fit and healthy. 


However, compulsory excersises might lead to negative impacts on either physical or mental health of children. Generally speaking, obesity is not good for one’s health. But this doesn’t mean that being obssesed with fitness can’t be harmful. Seeking too much attention on overweight student may affect their confidence.  On the other hand, not all children are good in the same sports. For instance, someone can be a talented dancer while being awful in running. So if we force this person to run, this would have a bad impact on him and he might lose motivation. 


In conclusion, I believe that It is reasonable to add some routine exercises to education’s schedule. Nevertheless, compulsory sport would affect students in a negative way. 

5.5

zohreh
zohreh

#230240

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

There is a believe that the consequence of the increasing the rate of obesity compulsory exercise in curriculums is the best settlement for that, while others believe that voluntary form of sport education is helpful to keep people far from obesity and its side effects. Making people motivate to do exercise is good idea for public health but not in force.

On the one hand, compulsory exercise may have many drawbacks in terms of physical and emotional.

As far as physical consideration some fields are harmful for some people because of their weight and some ill health which are hidden now. In terms of emotional disliking any type of exercise in schools or when students could not deal with their workout may lead to disappointing.

On the other hand, the necessity of exercise due to less active life style of this todays is not hidden to any people. Informing and educating always is the most effective way because people will be ambitious to do workout. So it is better to let people to know the benefits of exercise then provide them some facilities to choose the way they prefer to do activities. Furthered more, exercise is not only way of being fit and right information about diet helps them to be fit and healthy.

In conclusion, students not only do not benefit from compulsory sport but also may it will be harmful specially those who do not used to do it before.

5.5

Rahmat Ullah
Rahmat Ullah

#200821

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Some people believe that because of growth of fatness and being over-weight, doing sport must be obligatory for individuals in all educational centers. Others agree the fact that doing physical activities must be chosen voluntarily due to have efficient consequences in students’ health and body shape. Because, if students are enforced to do sport, it will be embarrassing for them.
 
Recently, Being over weight and unfit are increasing among students dramatically. It will be a serious problem if society do not find a suitable solution. some people suggest that doing compulsorily sport and physical activities manage to solve the problem. For instance, in some schools students have to attend a sport class once in a week and if  they do not participate in that class, they will not pass the term. Students do not enjoy doing sport when they are enforced and it would not be helpful in increasing their weight. So imposed activities like this can not be a beneficial solution for this problem.

In the other hand, some people agree that doing sport and physical activities in educational establishments as an answer to the problem of being over-weight, should be freely and not by force. Because, imposing things will not be attractive in every aspect of life. For example, people who attend a gym for doing sport are more good in shape and fit in comparison with individuals who are forced to do physical activities. So, students will not do any sport enthusiastically unless it do have an attractive point for them. Authorities in schools can stimulate students by putting forward some bounce for attending their desirable sport in a gym out of school or in educational environment if it is applicable.

Inconclusion, according to these few examples, doing sport freely by students in schools or other educational centers are more efficient to be well-shaped and fit than imposing them to do physical activities due to loose weight. In my opinion, voluntary attending athletic activities will be more beneficial for students rather than enforcing them to do such activities.
  

5.5

Parvane
Parvane

#236127

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Certain individuals discussed that exercising must become a mandatory in all buildings of education due to the rising figure of obesity among folks. Others believe doing physical training must be a free choice because pushing pupil to have workout resulting hate that major. Personally, I agree to make doing sport a compulsory in different grades. 

 

 

 

 


On the one hand, many commentators argue the view that based on the increasing amount of outsized people working out have better got compulsory in various school grades. From their point of you, being fat results in lack of confidence, which brings suicide and other psychological disorders. It is also maintained that due to advertisement for being fit on social medias, students who are suffering from obesity would get more bully than who have athletic body. For instants, results have shown schools with fit students are facing fewer bullies than schools include chubby students.

 

 

 

 


On the other hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that mandatory exercising on a volunteer basis would help individuals to get in shape. They argue that pupils would get a chance to live in a free world. This would be a practice for making choices. However, completely I disagree with this attitude because school authorities are always making plans to indirectly train students to select. It is a basic part of their rule.

 

 

 

 


In my personal opinion, although there are people who say it's better to have freedom in doing sports, others believe due to the number of unfit pupil, it's better to make a sports courses forced for all educational establishment. Because of obesity brings psychological disorder in students. In addition, students get less bully them they are fit.

5.5

Mahmoud
Mahmoud

#213520

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

These days obesity is a big dilemmas that community is suffering from, and perhaps it needs to find a way to solve this problem such as regular sport activity. But who does not know that an activity needs motivation, which without that, it would be annoying. Motivations which act better than legislation and encourage people in a way that they find physical activity as an inseparable part of their life rather a boring duty.

 

When we deep in life of people who are successful in a field we find a big difference with ordinary people, and it is not nothing except the wish for being better than others. It looks that they bear any hard situation to be outstanding. And it not be achieved by compulsory ways but motivated mind.I remember the boring sport class that I was made to participate every weekend because of parents ask, and it does not have good result for me since I was not reluctant. But when I got a young boy I  saw the girls tendency to handsome ,It changed my mind totally and after then the sport was not boring for me. I find it as a way for attracting of girls. My sport activity level changed and now I was doing the sport simultaneously. It is the way that we act. We make an undesirable activity to a joyful, only by changing our motivations.

 

Compulsion always is a way of ruining the things that people enjoy since it has a mental effect on their mind. They do not enjoy someone make them to do the activity albeit they like it. In a compulsory sport activity people get forced to do activity in a way that do not appeals to them. For example, in a university, student do sport under supervision of professor, and his opinion is dictated on them no matter how much they are professional. Some of them that are brilliant in their field, may find the professor annoying since they were doing this activity in other way. Always the freedom in activations brings a better result and make a better atmosphere.

 

To conclude, it is not the deniable that people always sport in way that find in joyful and health provoking rather than a boredom that they have to do as a part of their responsibility . When they do it by force they only try to look it as a job that its results do not matter. 

5.5

Mahmoud
Mahmoud

#235337

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Todays because of sedentary life style the number of overweight people increase hugely that is the reason of the most important disease like heart attack, high blood pressure and etc. So people need to excercise to be fit and healthy and it can come from education. But some people believe that education force them to do sports and may someone does not like to do that, while it is necessary for everyone to excercise, so this essay will indicate how education influence on people's health.
Furthermore by some idea this believe is available that people should be forced to do some sports from primary school because they should habit to perform that, so if it be their field of lesson and do that frequently it will be placed on their unconscious mind and they will continue until their adult age.For instance if school schedule  football, volleyball, ping pong and etc. in students weekly plan they will find out their passion and continue it. So they will have physical and mental health with no over fat.
 In addition when people have to do something they are forced so in my opinion since the excercise is so important. Governments can infliction people with a tricky way. For example the people can be encouraged by states with some prize.If they hold a public sports like jogging for a specified distance then they can hold a lottery and give the prize to people.
On the other hand, we should acknowledge that if forced students to do that they might not like it and they could be angry and anxious so it is better to convince them that it will be the best way for them to maintenance their healthy.
In conclusion, I hold the view that people particularly students should be forced to do excercise until keep their physical and mental health and do not be too fat that is the reason of many illnesses.

5.5

Ghazal
Ghazal

#157493

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Compulsory events is to human what heat is to diamonds. There might be some individuals who think sport should obligate in schools while another people think it does not work. I partially agree that people can be more practical under pressure. What stands out is that obesity should be dealt before growing more in the number not only for people’s health but also for their beauty and shape. 

 


Including sports events in schools’ and other educational schedules as an option is good enough for governments to dedicate their responsibilities but it is not enough to tackle the problem. Someone believes that embarrassing force of people might leads to turning away students specially for dose who do not into physical activities. Meanwhile there are some dependent students needing observation on their tasks, they always seek for what are their tasks and they do not usually opt for extra activities. 

 


On the other side, there are many people who believe in the power of force. Thus they choose sports as musts in educational programs. If students have to be active, they become healthy and be in a good shape. That can be their motivation to do more sports. Encouraging people by making them feel the result can be the best way for facing challenges. Although at times for some people this obligation may seem like a terrible situation, it usually works for ambitious, disciplined and hard working individuals. 

 


On balance, ethically problematic as forcing sports might be, it is indeed beneficial in terms of population’s health. If compulsory exercise is like an energy to become a diamond, so the merits outweigh the demerits.

5.5

atena
atena

#217628

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

 

Currently, some group of people claim that sport should be obligatory in the school curriculum due to increasing rate of obesity. On the other hand, others believe that people should make their own decision. I personally believe that government can have a significant role in encouraging students to do exercises and do it without compulsion. In this essay I will discuss both views and share my idea.

 

If we consider large number of students that have normal wellbeing and standard weigh, we can see that they would get better results and scores at the school due to having better appearance more classmates would communicate with them and moreover they can establish more friendship with others so they have motivation to study. As far as I see, more unfit students are involving with problematic situations such as lack of self-confidence, self-insurance, lack of friends, depression and so on. Sometimes they can not perform or lecture in front of others since people used to humiliate them. So I can say that doing sports to keep fit is a essential thing for people.

 

As I mentioned earlier, doing exercises have so many benefits so I guess it is better to start educating people from earlier ages, because youngsters imitate faster and can make a habit easier than the elderly. Base on my personal experience, I observed that we can easily persuade children in a fruitful process by just encourage them and may be sometimes give them some prizes.

 

To put it in a nutshell, we can say beyond a shadow of a doubt that make sport obligatory in the schools could be extremely productive and I believe that it is better to start this process from childhood.

  

 

 

5.5

Nashmil
Nashmil

#236197

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Many argue that because of the rising number of individuals involving with obesity sports should be considered as a compulsion in the educational systems, however, others have an unlike belief asserting rigid rules in this field completely make people hated physical practices. I am in agreement with both mentioned statements up to a point due to some reasons.

 

On the one hand, human instinctively tends to work according to a certain determined rules or plans. Furthermore, If a sport course there would be permanently in school schedules from the elementary grades can lead to be an indispensable part of daily tasks so that individuals will not be able to give it up even during adulthood. Thus, in many cases a compulsive time table including constant sports courses especially when people obviously see its beneficial advantages also enable them to do more efficiently personal affairs in comparison to the past then after they enthusiastically without any external pressure tend to exercise.

 

On the other hand, meny children demonstrate a considerable range of persistence and dissatisfying while facing a strict schedule . For instance, when I was a child regardless our ability and based on our curriculum we were forced to exercise early in the morning everyday so that that practice made us completely suffered as well as exhausted to learn other lessons. Unfortunately, because of that awful experience I have not been able to opt for a specific sports field so far.

 

To conclude, I believe that the existence of a timetable involving rejuvenating fitness programs in educational organisations can be quite adventurous provided that these curriculum would not be inflexible and harmful for children.

 

Academic Module

Nashmil Bahrami

5.5

Ehsan
Ehsan

#237773

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

No one can deny that a healthy life is vital. A healthy society causes a better life for all people Because of financial and psychological reasons. However, the important issue is how to reach to such society. This essay intends to talk about the alternative solutions to compulsory doing sports. The author critically disagree with making our children do sports in their schools.

First of all, we have some other solutions to create a healthy society. For example, go on diet is really better for some people. Since some individuals do not eat healthy foods, diet is a better way for them and it can help them more. When I was child, I lost a lot of weight by diet.

Secondly, doing physical activities needs motivation. If you do not motivate children to do sport, they will definitely be annoyed by doing exercises. I can remember my friends at school. They needed to be motivated by the teacher, otherwise they did not do their sport tasks well. Consequently, mandatory exercises will not help when students do not have motivation.

Finally, another issue which is really important is the lifestyle and the interests of pupils. We cannot make our children do a sport which they do not like it or even hate it. For instance, when I was child, despite the fact that doing sport was compulsory in our school, I avoided it. Because we had to play soccer which I hate it. I always made excuses to not to play soccer. Also, people lifestyle plays a very important role in the impact of the sports on their fitness. We have to pay attention to the amount of the calories that an individual gains and spends daily. According to these amount of calories, we need to do special sports.

In conclusion, doing compulsory sports really annoys children and if the selected sport is not appropriate for individuals, that will not help them a lot.

5.5

Mahdieh
Mahdieh

#237724

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

It is believed that owing to increasing the rate of obesity,educational institutions should regulate a rule for doing sport mandatorily.How ever,some others argue that by no means can encourage students to keep fit except with doing sport arbitrary,for making mandatorily decision would have negative impacts,which I am in a complete agreement with.

Although being overweight has adverse impacts on physical health for human beings during a long term,numerous people do not pay attention to this subject,particularly younger generations and it is because of their tendency for junk food and doing less activities that the number of obese students has been growwing during the last decades.Thus,it is thought that restrict a strict rule for doing sport in educational places would be the best solution in this case,for students have to be present at least five days during a week in these places,hence doing sport compulsorily.Also,during the long time,it could change their mind to choose a healthy life style ,loosing their weight.

On the other hand,I entirely agree that making mandatory decision has negative consequence in many occasions,which scientists report a significant number of articles about.It is undeniable that in no circumstances  can people persuade a person to change their unhealthy lifestyle unless with giving the information about negative effects and encourage them to make the best decision arbitrary.Hence,some individuals believe that if overweight students be under pressure of doing sports,they would be reluctant to do such activities due to their negative perspective.Other than that,they would conteract with mental diseases,like depression,because of doing undesired activity. 

In conclusion,albeit it is a beliefe that doing sports mandatorily should be the best solution for overweight students,it could be quite harmful from others perspective,myself included,because this not only can make them unmotivated,but also cause some mental problems over a period.

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Bahar
Bahar

#213188

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

 

These days, people do not have enough exercises, so the number of people who are dealing with overweight is raising. Because of that, it is often argued that sport should be on compulsory curriculum in different sort of educational institute. Whilst other believe that students should do sport by their own voluntary decision. In my opinion, training sports as a compulsory course cannot motivated student to do physical activities.

Doing sports by force cannot be useful for someone who do not like it. It just make them tired and disappointed. They must try hard because of getting acceptable grade while they are not interested at all. So, there is no pleasure and happiness, although one of the effects of doing sports should be making people happier and refreshed. Generally, it can be harmful for their mental health by passing the time. 

Moreover, some student cannot do the sports perfect and they compare themselves with someone who are keen on the sport. These kind of comparison lessen their confidence and self-esteem. They believe that they are not good enough. These various thoughts and pressures may influence other parts of their life. Such as, work, study and social life.

In conclusion, I think sport might not be helpful when people are not willing to do that. Because, make it compulsory just increase the mental pressures on them and have bad effects on their personality. For instance reduce their confident and happiness.

5.5

Sarina
Sarina

#234773

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

   It is considered by some that sport must be forcible in every educational organizations because of  ascending number of obesity and fatness, while there are others who that is better sportspersons practice and encourage people who want be fit as apposed to use force and make students reluctant about sport and exercise. In my opinion, I believe that establishments should work on people mindset and accustom them with body operations.

   On one hand, put compulsion in sports can make a negligible result in short period, but will decrease the amount of unfit people in a log time in society. On the other words, by doing daily exercise, body secrets useful hormones which help body metabolism rises and then engorges body to work better. If students practice everyday , even with force, obesity will be less.

   On the other hand, having power of choice makes joy and fun in practice times and will have better results. Body will work more coordination with other organs and metabolism will increase heart activity, if people choose their sports and enjoy in exercise; In this case, not only do students love sports, but also make them more motivated and attract them to be active in their lives.

   Finally, in my opinion, besides encouraging people about sports, it is necessary to aware them about health risks. In this case, students who are interested about sport will be more excited to do exercise and people who never didn’t practice, search for healthy lifestyle and modify their nourishment. Eventually, everybody accustoms with body operations and use this knowledge in exercises.

   In conclusion, it is really important to create eagerness in people for doing daily sport exercise and rise their knowledge about healthy lifestyles to have a efficient practice and see great results. 

5.5

Fateme
Fateme

#232687

Some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport.

Mahdie Rezaei academic task two

 

Some people are on this belief, it is better that people force to do sport because of rising up obesity and overweighting. Others disaffirm in this statement and trust that it is better doing sports become optional because forcing people to exercise and also reminding of this problem that they are overweight, it effects on their spirit and at the result, they will be shamed for this problem. My view is completely matched with arbitrary of doing sport.

First, if people have to exercise, they won’t have motivation for doing that. This problem causes that people release during in middle of sport process. It is imagined why they shouldn’t have liked themselves with this body or even might compare themselves with others in eating, shape and so on. As a result, always one regret will be accompanied by them and won’t enjoy in their life. Most of them face with over upset and might suicide.

On the other side, most of them don’t have this ability to decrease weighting. Actually, we should look overweighting as a disease. For people who involve in obesity, it is difficult to go down their weight by sport. Indeed, overweighting of them is not related to eating or unmovement. If I want to tell more, it is a genetic disease. They suffer from this sickness. For example, there is an organization in world which has established for this group of people and support from them, not only financially, but also changing in their mindset.

Overall, although sport is the best way for decrease of weighting and fitting, we should pay attention that we couldn’t prescribe for all.

 

Mahdie Rezaei academic task two

 

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abbas
abbas

#233216

Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty lately.
In your letter, you should tell:

Why it is happening
What problems it will cause
What your suggestions are

Dear Sir or Madam.

I am writing in connection with the recent issue that has happed in the Olive street in Jackson neighborhood. There is a constructing site in the middle of the street that are digging the ground, during their work they broke the underground  water pipeline. This incident is undergoing for several days, when we call to the support department their responses are not transparent.  

 

Because of this unfortunate incident, the water is streaming everywhere, that has damaged our gardens as well as has penetrated to our houses. Consequently, crossing the street somehow is impossible ,in  particular, by car. Moreover, bus drivers neglect the bus station that is located in our street. hence we have to walk the whole street to reach the main street to use a public transport. Imaging with the mud that sticks on the bottom of our shoes, we arrive at our workplace or other places, this is embarrassing.

People who live in this street could not undergo this situation anymore. Therefore, please send workforces to fix this problem as soon as possible. Otherwise, we will not permit this construction site continues their work until they fix this problem.

Please contact me through my email.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours faithfully,

Abbas soltani.

 

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Mohammad
Mohammad

#214023

Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty lately.
In your letter, you should tell:

Why it is happening
What problems it will cause
What your suggestions are

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to you in regard to Esar street that has not been cleaned for a few weeks.

Recently, the number of people who have chose to live around the street considerably increased. Therefore, this place has become more dirty than before and also high renge of constructing building had been effective to creat this size of disposal.

One of the big issue after crowding is that people espacially children and old ones who live here are in danger of asthma becouse of plenty amount of dast in air. In addition, problems would become more when it is rain and every where is getting more dirty.

If you decide to clean the street twice a week, it will become one of the beautiful place of city that deserved to be.

I look fowrward to your action about it and I hope you consider my suggestion.

Yours faithfully,

Mohammad Rouzbahani.

5.5

Seyedeh Zahra
Seyedeh Zahra

#237247

Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty lately.
In your letter, you should tell:

Why it is happening
What problems it will cause
What your suggestions are

Topic 

The fallowing bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960,1980 and 2000.

Writing 

This chart below illustrates different figures of transportation such as, bus, car, bike and foot in a city of Europe in the years of 1960, 1980 and 2000. Units are in percentage of total travelers.

Overall, using vehicles for instance, car and bus was the most in the years of 1980-2000, while people mostly rode bicycle and walked for their commuting in 1960.

In 2000, over 35% of persons used cars that was higher than using buses, walking and biking respectively ( all of them accounted for under 15%). Likewise, with regarding the year of 1960 see that most of individuals walked (just 35%) and about over 25% of people used bikes, whereas using vehicles was the least (was almost under 18%).

Choosing the kinds of transport modes by people was not much difference according to this comparison and using all of them were between 15%_27%.

 

5.5

naghme
naghme

#184619

Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty lately.
In your letter, you should tell:

Why it is happening
What problems it will cause
What your suggestions are

Dear Sir or Madam

I am Naghmeh Zahedi and am living in the 29 street, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to cleanness of the street of the neighborhood. 

To begin with, the rubbish is not collected in a timely manner and it causes not only a bad smell in the area but also the insects. More importantly, the sewage system is not work probably. It brings about unhealthy water and spread of contagious disease. As you know, there are 2 schools in this neighborhood. If you do not take the immediate action, it will have serious impacts in people and especially children wellbeing. 

To remedy the situation, the adequate bin should be supplied and more dustmans should be hired. In addition, one professional team should inspect and maintain sewage system performance as a regular basis. 

Your prompt action in this regards would be highly appreciated

Regards

Zahedi

5.5

Moein
Moein

#236262

Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty lately.
In your letter, you should tell:

Why it is happening
What problems it will cause
What your suggestions are

The given column graph illustrate the information of various modes of transport which were used for movement between workplace and house, during a fourty-year period ( from 1960 to 2000).
A cursory glance at the chart is enough to make it clear that the use of car increased dramatically, from approximately 12% in the 1960 to over a quarter in the 1980 and ecalated to 36 percent in the end of periods.
In contrast, despite the foot and bike were first and second popular ways for movement, both of them had downward trend, and fell from 34% and 25% in the 1960 to 17% and 20% in the 1980 and, in the following years, reached to just 9% and 6% by 2000, respectively.
Turning to the other data set, bus, it can be seen that the shares of bus for transporting were difference and flactuated between range of 16% and 26% in the whole of period.

5.5

moohamad ali
moohamad ali

#218814

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

The given bar chart illustrates different ways of transport which were used to travel to and from work in one European city in the three specific years 1960, 1980, and 2000. Overall, foot and bus and car had the highest rate and also had the lowest rate in the mentioned city.

In 1960, approximately 35% of people who lived in a European city transport with their foot. What is more, second way was bike was 10% less than foot. Also, bus approximately half afoot percentage and the car was the last one.

In 1980, all mode of transport was near to them between 25 and 15% . Bus was almost 25%. and car exactly 23%and foot just 10% less than bus.

In 2000, car had reach 35% and was the public mode of transportation. next, bus was 20% less than car. eventually, bike with 5% had experinced the lowest percentage in the bar chart.

5.5

Hosein
Hosein

#233993

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

The bar chart illustrates the different mades of transport which name are bus , car , bike and foot to travel to and from work in a European city in three different years , 1960 , 1980 and 2000 . It is clear that only car had increased in the mentioned years whereas other mades of transport had decreased .                                     We can see in graph in one European in 1960 that the most type of transport were foot by more than a third , about 34 , whilst in the second place were belong to bike by about 25 and bus and car were 17 and 5 , respectively . In 1980 , numbers there were almost the same and there weren't any significant difference among  them , and this year bus were the most by about 26 and the least transport mades seen in foot by about 17 .                                                    In 2000 , there were many changes than before ago , and in this year the highest used were car , about 35 and car had been used less about fifteen and the least made of transport were foot and bike about less than ten.

5.5

Kimia
Kimia

#235721

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

The chart illustrates four types of transports that people used to chose for traveling or getting to their work place in three different years by the every two years from 1960 to 2000.

Overall, people preferred to go to travel by personal car in 2000 but as years goes back it is shown that travelers went to work or trip by their foot.

As it is seen, the chart of 2000, has a lot of fluctuations. It increased sharply from a little more that 15 percent to more than 35 percent and it gets to more than it’s doubled figure but after that it plunged to around 5 percent. The chart of 1980 presents a gradual drop of in order of using :Bus, Car, Bike, feet. In 1960 the graph fell down from above 15 percent of using Bus to around 6 percent but it rose respectively to almost 26 percent for gong to tavel or work by bicycle  and this rising continued to under 35 percent in walking.

5.5

Shadi
Shadi

#226221

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

Dear Sir or Madam,

 

I am Shadi Servat, a citizen of the green neighbor, first street. I am writing this letter because of the nearest problem we are faced with, and I should mention that our street goes to dirty situation. 

 

The main problem is that all the rubbish are full and that is why It seems a lot of trash in every were. That has affected the weather and smell very badly. Actually in some cases a lot of mosquitos in this neighborhood.

 

In my belief, this problem started last week when the refreshmans didn’t came. Since then green street is getting such as desaster. It is harmfull for children that play in street. Unfortunatly they don have any were to go for doing play. Maybe I should mantion that it is onother problem, but it is not a aim of my letter. 

 

My recomandation is, consil plans a sesson and think about what was the problem of street-sweepers that they got stricke. It should be handeled for helth of the our street.

 

I apreciate if this problem be persued.

 

Your cincerely

Shadi Servat

 

 

 

5.5

Hasti
Hasti

#232942

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

The bar chart illustrates the variety mode of transports what were used in 4 case of vehicle in every two years from 1960 to 2000 in a European city due to travel and commutation.

 

It is clear that the amount of commutation in way of walking and bike had decreased, in contrast the car mode for transporting had rose, while the travelers who were used bus neither fell down, nor enhanced in this city.

 

Looking at details, in the 1960, the used cycle and walking were 25% and about 35%.

The percentage of people who used of bike was declined significantly in 1980 and 2000 ,it reached to 5%. Travel by foot reduced steeply, it was 35% in 1960 and decreased at 25%.

 

The cars mode had an sharply climb it was eight fold in 2000,35%. The bus transportation had a fluctuations in the 1960 and 2000 had same percentage about 15%, but in 1980 was 25%

 

 

Hasti(ac)

 

5.5

زهرا
زهرا

#232601

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

Dear Sir or Madam, 

I am writing this letter to inform you that Namazi stree , which my family and I have been living here for  about 15 years till now .

Overall,this street has so many problems and I need your help to solve them easily.

firstly ,I saw some dirty cats every day in the  garbage. you know they made some harmful diseases. Secondly,  one of the biggest shopping malls in our city try to build a new building in our street so it made many unclean place. Finally , the trees will dry very soon and need to watering them.

As our kids played in  this street and spend their some  times there one day one of them injured by the materials of  shopping mall.also the street is very dirty these days and need to clean. 

Now ,I hope to solve these problems so soon with your nice and smart help .

Good luck, 

Yours faithfully, 

Fatmeh

5.5

Danial
Danial

#237957

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

The bar chart breaks down the various means of commuting used in one European city into four main transport modes which are : bus , car , bike and foot , each examined in three different time periods .

There is a sophisticated arrangement and use of text , chart and color in order to better communicate the purpose and aim . The first thing which catches attention of the reader is the bar chart itself , as the focal element , located at the heart of the plot . The reader can easily extract information about the value (in percent) and time simply by looking at the y-axis plus , knowing which year every color represents , from the chart . The subject of analysis is clearly located at the top in bold , and a map guide , grided on the right side of the plot identifying the year each color represents  . All these elements together , result in an enhancement in readability due to the decent setting and composition of the whole plot .

It can be easily interpreted that the bus transport mode popularity has not changed over time , and fluctuated instead , with the average percentage of total travelers somewhere around twenty percent . However , the car transport mode has seen a drastic increase in its popularity in those forty years’ time and being used more by Europeans . 

On the other hand , the bike and foot transport mode , have both seen a decrease and a twilight in their value of travelers from 1960 to 2000 , mostly because people tend to use cars instead . However , it can be seen that Europeans preferred to walk more than how much they biked in 2000 as the value for foot transport mode was a bit higher than that of the bike .

5.5

Ainaz
Ainaz

#232201

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

The bar chart illustrates data of variaty type of transition through the work or used to travel in a city that situated in Europe in 1960,1980,2000.

The information is divided in four different categories based on the transport mode-bus car,bike,food.Further the bar chart gives percentage for three year periods-1960,1980,2000.

A key feature of this chart illustrates that the lowest percentage of dweller was in a car during 1960,however in 2000 there was a dramatic growth in the amount of traveller.
It is apparent that,the second prominent features of these data is that most of the people transferred to work or another city approximately under 35% in 1960 by foot.on the other hand,in 2000 has significant decrease a number of people who moved by foot slightly under 10%.

In conclusion, although the number of people who use car or public transportation had increased,use bike or pedestrian reduced.

5.5

Yasaman
Yasaman

#237323

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

The given bar chart compares the popularity of various transport facilities, that people tend to use to went to work and came back home in three different decades in an European city.
Overall, the car usage increased significantly from 1960 to 2000, and the population life style faced an overt change, which means people went to machine_orinted style, during 30 years.
In 1960, most range of travellers, approximately 40%, tended to walk to the work place and walk back home. However, in 2000, workers mostly preferred to use cars instead of walking or use public transportation like buses, which include 35% of people.
Riding a bike was more common in 1960 rather than 1980 and 2000, which means 25%  of workers, while this amount almost discharged whit using a bus to reach the work place in 1980.

5.5

seyedeh firouzeh
seyedeh firouzeh

#234651

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

I would like to explain to you that the following chart shows several type of transport for traveling or going to work in cities of Europe. You can see that it shows the comparison between 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The chart shows four type of travelling, such as bus, car, bike and foot. You see that travelling by bike is the least and travelling by car is the most vehicle that used during these years. The most way of travelling In 1960 was go on foot and the least was  using car. But about 1980 travelers used bus the most and went on foot the least. At last in 2000 using bike was at least and using car was the most.

If we want to know exactly wat happened in those years, I will tell you. Using bus in 1980 was much popular , and about 25% of people used it, and there was not much difference with other dates. But about using car was a lot of diffrences , and in 1960 about 5% of people used it and 35% in 2000.

Using car was much popular in 1960, and about 25% of travelers used it , but in 2000 was the least, and about 5% of them used it.

5.5

Monia
Monia

#217335

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000

A glance at provided chart reveal some information about diverse terms of transportation in a European city in three years 1960, 1980 and 2000.

It is apparent from data, car were used mostly by people in Europe in the year 2000 while, bike was less poular among them in the same year.

The initial impression is that, a neglib 5 percent of individuals used car for urban tarvels in the first given year whereas, foot was first opportunity for travellers by a mere 35 percent. Bike and bus usage were 25 and 17, respectivly in the same period.

 In 1980, bus was common transportation by approxieamatly 25 percent. Bike and bus had experienced same amount by nearly 20%. The proportion of people who walked were fewest by 5% less than bikers.

The number of car taravels were increased expotentially in contrust to other types in 21 century by just over than 35. It is interesting to note that, bicycles was one-eighth of car applications. Bus and foot were the minimum by about one-fourth of all.

 

5.5

moohamad ali
moohamad ali

#218814

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Many people and I think some moments in television programs and some games which show violence have a bad effect on society. On the other hand, many people believe violence is just related to people's personalities.

Groups of people do not think the harsh In video games or television is the main result of violence in our society because they know and believe the person who has these bad manners is just about his or her personality and characteristics then it would be provided in his or her behavior. But they are wrong, teenagers and children spend most of their free time playing video games with their console or computer. Also, one of the most popular and famous games in history is Call of duty which is made by the Activation company. This game is about some wars and some fight missions, for example, world war I or II, so this genera has lots of harsh secons and easily can effect on teenagers and it leads to a side effect on children's minds or their future behavior. What is more, when they are playing these games are not relaxed and sometimes, they have very big rage. So in the future rate of violence in society has a dramatic increase.in addition, Adults who watching some Tv shows that reporting or monitoring some harsh time of others' life of society, the viewer can feel the impact of these programs in their mind and behavior.

In conclusion, in my opinion, the time that a person watch or play these type of programs have a direct effect on someones personality and characteristics and illustrates on behavior.

5.5

Tahereh
Tahereh

#237510

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

While some people advocate that broadcasting violent on the media and virtual games had a repercussion for society,others neglect this as a harmful subject assert that it has a positive impact on people's personality. There are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious topic will be discussed in detail, followed by my own take on the matter.

On the one hand there are many compelling reasons why aggressive programs had a dire consequences. To begin with, violent programs received wide currency and can overshadow people's treatment ; these fury scene fuelled public worries about rapidly increasing crime tendency in the nations. Take virtual games as an example includes a lot of offences, aggressive playing breed an underaged person prone to a lot's of criminal situations.that is to say disobey the rules and strict laws without any restrict leads to inducing people to do crime in the real world. Moreover these programs on the media or games put people under pressure also spell trouble for watchers or players.

 

On the other hand, the opposing viwe assert that the negative effect of violence on the media should be denied. The most ligical reasons for their assertation is that violence are being shown on the media are helpful to overcome their difficulties by watching and playing. For instance a action film cam improve their brave, self confidence. They take in essential ways when they are faced with problems how they never give up, also continue their hardworking. Furthermore, cyber games cam improve decioun making due to in the programs people need to quick decision.

 

To conclude, there are valid arguments on the both sides of the statements.i, however, belive that broadcasting violence on the media can have a detrimental impact on people life. This not only aren't imperative for society but also are demanding. The more violent spreads among people, the more aggressive behaviour seen among People. Mina parhizkat

5.5

Somayeh
Somayeh

#214278

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

It is argued that TV programmes and PC games especially violent ones have a negative impact on its audiences' behaviors. While other people share different view and consider these kind of entertainments very neutral in changing individual’s personality. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of arguments and support former view. 

On one hand, most young people spend large amount of time on watching violent movies and playing digital games and, by the time it would change their traits. It is because the violent scenes will affect their brain unconsciously and viewers would copy the manners and behaviors of actors in order to experience things that they have already seen online or on TV. To make an illustration, imagine a young boy who is playing Sega every day, his brain is sensitive enough to imitate the action scenes in real world to experience them by himself.

On the other hand, some people believe that other factors such as environment and family contributed to aggressive or harmful behavior of people. This is because parent and sibling manners plays a crucial role to development of personality traits, even though proper nurture methods can help individuals to choose appropriate game and media to play or watch. For instance, if there is a friendly relationship between children and parents, all family members help each other to figure out which kind of movies or games are good enough for them.

In conclusion, while someone thinks that TV and PC games have not affected our society, I opine that these technological devices have worsened our life because they changed us.

5.5

Mojtaba
Mojtaba

#229606

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

A group of individuals present the view that the violencec on television and in computer games adversely affects on the people, whereas others believe that eliminating from media is not a good idea to preserve society from violence. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.

On the one hand, some people justifiably argue that eliminating violence from public media or video games do not guarantee the society to be free of violence. They add aggrasive behaviors, which sometimes occurs in our house or life area, is one of the most important component of our lives. So, managing this part of our character is more effective than trying to ignore it. Moreover, there are enormous number of people that love this kind of film or playing this games is attractive for them. In addition, huge businesses are producing films or games in this genres so that it would not reasonable to make this companies off and due to unemployment of large number of people who work there.

Oth the other hand, another group of people claim that films and video games violence should be banned. They insist that aggressive trend in people stems from unappropriate television shows and video games. However, I do not find this argument convincing as media means is not the only parameter which influence individuals and there might be a lot of reasons. Also, government have responsible to eduacate people peroperly.

To coclude, in my view, films, series or video games with some aggressive effects doesn’t have to removed. There are several people that are fan of this kind of movies and much money do exist in their production process. Moreover, government could control these movies and put age lable on each game.

5.5

Maryam
Maryam

#234407

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

If I want to talk about the effects of some TV programs and video games on society, I would say there are two groups of people. A group of people believes these activities can not have an awful impact on society. On the other side, others think these items have a significant influence on people's manners. On my side, these kinds of hobbies make a great contribution to people's treatment, and as a result of this, we face some abnormal behavior in society.

Several people claim that violence on TV and games not only does not harm them but also they think these hobbies are so entertaining. Also, they think these are can use for filling their leisure time without any significant effect. Especially, these are just entertainment for adults so they pleasured with them instead of having bad behavior in society.

I believe violent harsh TV programs and games can play a key role in people's manner in society. Another group opinion is if these kinds of hobbies indicate violence, they will pose a threat to people's mental health. Meanwhile, it is better that games are played by teenagers and children to contain less violence, due to they are more effective compared to adults. Otherwise, they can commit a crime in society such as arguments, theft, etc.

In conclusion, for the sake of spending loads of time playing harsh games and watching TV, these have a dramatic impact on people and society. I supposed that the more spend time playing or watching, the more influenced people are. Others consider these activities like a hobby and claim they are not effective. so that these have no harmful influence on both. I would recommend playing games and watching TV programs without violence.

5.5

Nooshin
Nooshin

#237023

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

In the modern era, people's lives have become extremely complicated. Some people imagine that showing of violence in the films and computer games has the harmful impacts on people's behaviour. Although, another group of people don't agree with this issue. In my opinion, the promotion of violence can affect on people's lives specially the younger and teenagers.

Over recent years,  the crime rate is growing. Maybe, it can be said that the display of violence increases crime among young people. Since, young people don't have enough experience in their life. Thus, they are very emotional. As a result, they would like to do everything like consuming drug, gambling and betting.

On the other hand, the industry of computer games has also grown significantly. Many computer games have violence scenes. These scenes can affect on the mood of children. Therefore, they cannot focus on their homeworks and they will face with many problems at their school such as dropping grades and fighting with their classmates. What is more, many children think that repeating violent scenes don't have any danger for them. So, they would like to do them like jumping from a height or swimming under water without equipment.

In conclusion, the promotion of violence creates many problems for people especially young people. It is recommended that the government and the authorities prevent from showing violence and crime in the films and computer games. Also, they can show theses films only for people over 29 years old.

5.5

Ainaz
Ainaz

#232201

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

It is a commonly held view that,by grown the technology most of the people adapt their selves by this innovation children in particular, moreover they convinced that television and computer game and these kind of gadgets that related to technology can harmful and has negative influence on society .On thr other hands,these

theories is rejected by people due to they believe that these factors havenot any negative effect on people's behaviour.In this essay, I am going to elaborate on the topic and show my disapproval.

From where I stand , the  demerits of the computer games and television overshadow the merits.

Despite the technology is beneficial,the minority of people overuse of this development. in addition,it can hurts their bodies also they will be faced some prominent problems in their health.

Furthermore,people who watch television or play online games lose track of time and they cannot socialise with others and find new friends, so they canot keep contract with people.It is apperent that,they will have  problems in their relationship consequently, it has significant consequence in their future.

A recent conducted research shows that,people who spend times in watching television or playing games are not able to spend their time outside,and do some physical activities in leisure time. so they they prefer to stay at home and watch movies on televisions moreover, it has been pychologically proven that playing games affect our subconscious mind.

There has been a case of 50 people died by playing games named blue whale and squid games. Although these games attract people,their results could be severe.

To conclude,these platforms have momentous impact on people's daily life and most important,societies.That the reason why I strongly believe that in each countries,authorities should set a rule for these kind of games and they have to control this problems.

5.5

Bahar
Bahar

#213188

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

It is argued that different violent content on TV and computer games is harmful for the health of society. While some people believe that these things have not any considerable impact on people. In my opinion, these content has noticeable influence on various group of people such as adults, children, elderly people, women and teenagers.

Firstly, using the violent factors in movies, games, and shows contribute to normalize these kind of behavior on the society. People tend to be more aggressive and react harshly in some unpleasant situation. It encourage people to be less patient and become angry sooner. For example, car accident might happen foe anyone but someone who are exposed by the violent content cannot control the condition peacefully. They, unconsciously, make the condition worse and more stressful.

Moreover, distributing the cruelty could be harmful for mental health especially for the sensitive group of people such as children, elderly people, and someone who are dealing with mental problems. It might increase the level of stress and cause depression or mental breakdown on people. As a result, by passing the time the rate of happiness of the society will decrease. For instance, when a kid watch a harsh movie it have effect on the quantity and quality of sleep and cause the sleep deprivation in that child.

In conclusion, from my point of view, violence on the different media actually is normalizing it. Because people will be encouraged to behave in the violent way. Also it has negative impact on the mental health of individuals. So, we cannot deny it and should be aware of the influence of these things.

 

Bahar Shahmansouri

5.5

NAZANIN
NAZANIN

#235666

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

People have different views about influence of violence on people by showing violence on computer games or television.In my opinion, while showing roufness things could be warned people about some occasion that might be  happened in real life, we can not deny the negative effects that it has on individuals.
The first reason that I expose to discussion is the damaging effect of violence on teenager.In many of computer games are shown the violence as a usual and normal stuff in society. As the teenagers have not  found their personality yet, they could be more sensetive than others and that is the reason why they are more motivated by vindalism. Some of gamers said that many of these games prepear them for dangerous situation in real life but honestly, how does possible to occur these occasion in real life? Probably never for most of us, so I think this alibi is not credible.
My second reason are related to showing roughness view on Tv. These are  lots of series and movies which shows the violence as a cool and exciting things and the people who have done it. These characters most of the time have a good reason for commiting crime and violence that it is not acceptable in true life. Forthermore, it makes satisfy individuals  that the worse things which have done or used the violence were for the rational reason. As I know, many of unforgivable crimes are committed with the stupid reason that someone explain  logical that for her/himself.
In conclusion, I tend to that showing violence could affect damagingly on every kind of ages.

5.5

Farzaneh
Farzaneh

#176714

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Today, violence on technology such as television and computer games are increasing, while some people claim that violence has damaged the personality of people, others determined the positivity of computer games and television are more than a bad effect on behavior. In my opinion, I completely agree that this kind of technology has an impact on society and could destroy people’s character.

On the one hand, people claim that violence on television and computer games can change people’s minds in a bad way, and I agree with this theme. People learn negative acts from television. as a result, this act influences our society and brings serious communication problems. For example, in our city, a teenager attacked his friend this month, then he said that learned from a computer game that he played recently. however, violence in television and computer games can destroy our society and family.

On the other hand, a few people believe that violence on television and computer game is less and also these technologies bring a positive impact on people’s personalities. People can learn important things from tv programs. For example, the tv show about ‘society’ changed my mind and affects my communication when I was a teenager. Also, learning positively from television and computer game are important.

In conclusion, violence on television and computer game are increasing and affecting people’s behavior. while there are several opinions about it, I personally believe that the violence on this technology has destroyed people’s behavior and even impact families and society.

5.5

mostafa
mostafa

#236260

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Violence which displaying in television programmes or in some genre of computer games are increasing significantly day by day and this issue has a remarkable impact on people and their behaviour. Some people believe this violence has not any effect on society but other people express that that has a negative influence on people. I believe that violence in games and TV shows are dangerous to society and we should be aware of it and prevent our lives to be affected by this and its consequences. 

 

Most of film makers and directors believe that if their movies or programs contain severe violence, it will observe more viewers and their product will be more popular, as a result more intensive violence containing films and programmes have been publishing since the statement went viral. It is believed that some of people imitate the sense of movies and if it contained any dangerous act in it, they will do the same act in the real life. for example, after a movie about a person who had a bad behaviour with his family published, the number of family violence which were reported to police office rose dramatically at that time. 

 

On the other hand, we have some video games containing violence in it. Although young children should not be allowed to purchase and play these kind games, this issue would not be happen. It is known that children and younger's brain has not completely developed due to their age. So they can not distinguish between reality and virtual situation which they are playing the game in that world, therefore if the game  instruct them to kill or harass somebody, they might try to kill or Harrass someone in real life. For instance, my little nephew was trying to stab me because it was told to him by the video game. 

 

In conclusion, although movies and games with violence are entertaining, we should consider its negative impact on our life especially our children's one.

 

5.5

Mobina
Mobina

#221194

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

It has been stated that, society has been damaged by violent scenes on TV programs and video games, while some people assume that they cannot be effective agents on folk’s temper. I firmly believe that, representing intensity in different kind of media resources has unconscious impression on people’s mind and behavior without doubt.

To commence with, it should be admitted that children are the first group which have been influenced by violence scenes. They do not any explanation about behavior differences, so they imitate whatever they see. For instance, if children are experienced violent on a series, they could understand that it is a normal behavior between people, and they would treat in the same way to their friends. Thus, all behaviors positively or negatively can be a pattern for them to emulate, and some limitation and restriction must be considered by producers and parents.

On the other hand, teenagers who are the biggest fan of video games, are endanger of these games’ contents. This has been proven that, teenagers are so vulnerable and sensitive in puberty period, and hormone changes are at their highest level in this age, so they capable to do everything without any thinking Therefore, violence video games can lead them to behave illogically and cruelly. As a clear example, blue wale was a destructive game whose victims were mostly teenagers. 

In conclusion, people are constantly being damaged by inappropriate Tv’s program and modern digital games, which their harmful impacts can be seen in society specially between children and society. 

5.5

Sara
Sara

#237105

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, some individuals think that technology and media can lead society into cruelty. On the other hand, this attitude is ignored by some people, they believe that they do not have any negative impacts on manners. In my opinion, electronic devices play the vital role in destroying the society and emphasize people’s mind.

 First, I completely know that watching violent movies on TV for many hours can change people’s behaviour, especially has huge effects on the children and teenagers, because they are influence by brutal characters and undrestand it as a normal behavoiur. In addition, they copy their actions, and make them heroes for themselves. For instance, I have a nephew who spends many hours to play violent games on PS4. Therefore, he becomes extremely aggressive and impolite. In fact, not only children, but also adults can be affected by visual media. Crime games are able to make people feel lonely and might cause them to keep away from society, due to the negative experiences that they gained.

 However, some nations disagree with this idea. In their opinion, committing suicide or being rude relate to their nature and some mental problems. For example, a kid that has murdered someone, it is not related to social media or technology. In fact, they were not supported by their families or the government. Although, most terrorist groups and organization have been created in American countries. Moreover, most crime games and series are made by Americans. These statistics indicate that public’s intentions depend on their media. Furthermore, there should be a restriction on teenagers. 

 To conclude, media platforms and electronic devices have an enormous influence on people’s behaviour and are able to shape their personality and mind.

5.5

Shakiba
Shakiba

#237048

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

An often debated topic is the different types of the TV shows and their content. Some say that, the aggressive program which showed on TV or computer games have numerous adverse effect on the people. Others opposed to it. However, I believe that violence program brings about serious problems in the society.

To begin with, in today's world, we cannot find anyone who does not see the TV or play with computer games so these types of media are considered sensitive for society which means that, some acceptable authorities should be excited to check their content to not be violence. A good example for this fact was a research done with American psychologist on children who was between 10 to 14 years old that played with aggressive video games. The research showed that they were more attended to contribute in national wars to experience the reality of games that they played before, so it is understandable why some concern about these programs on media.

However, opponents of this view argue that people should be free to watch everything that they want. Firstly, they believe that this effects are contemporary and do not have a critical consequence for society. Secondly, they suppose that these types of programs only have harmful effects on children, not adults. Thus, family specially parents have some responsibility to do not let their child to watch them. Which is in fact a reasonable solution for this issue.

In conclusion, I believe that, we should respect to some people's interests and their opinions around their freedom of choosing everything but the government should review and check the program's content that showed on TV or other platforms and people also should try to decrease the amount of violence in society by themselves.

 

Shakiba jahangiri

5.5

Hamide
Hamide

#237444

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

While it is believed by some that the violent scenes on computer games and TV have a damaging influence on society, others argue that they have not any serious impact on people’s attitudes and behavior. I am, however, in complete disagree with the latter on the basis of suffering from mental issues and increasing the rate of crime.

To begin with, these scenes can be roots of suffering from mental issues such as anxiety and losing temper. It is a well-known fact that our minds will be affected by whatever things that we see. These scenes can increase people’s heartbeat rate which directly impacts their minds and tolerance. Take professional wrestling as the most patently obvious example; when people, especially children, watch it lose their relaxation and cannot manage their anger.

Furthermore, after watching these shows, the rate of crime may be grown. The vast majority of violent scenes happen during the perpetration of a crime. Children are the main viewer of these movies and games since they are not mature enough, and may copy these actions and try to do because they think those are normal acts. In 2017, based on BBC report the number of pupils who use murder weapons at school significantly increased due to watching Godless. Some may argue that they are other serious issues that threaten society. However, society should be kept away from every potential danger.

To conclude, although some deny the damaging influence of watching violence, I believe that it can seriously threaten our societies and lead to forming some mental problems, and increasing the rate of crimes.

5.5

Negar
Negar

#234192

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Some people are of the opinion that violent games and movies have a devastating effect on the community. While others believe that these kinds of programs do not affect people’s lives. I strongly believe that violence really influences people's minds, especially the youngest. 
 
Firstly, in today’s technology-focused world people tend to spend their free time on television, the Internet, and computer games, especially young people. As they have more free time, they show a big preference to spend their time on TV and games. It has many damaging effects on their behavior. The more they watch violent programs, the more they tend to be aggressive. In other words, it has a long-lasting effect on their personality. 
 
Secondly, these kinds of pastimes, prevent positive activities such as outdoor activities, young people find it comfortable to stay at home and watch TV or play online games. Besides, violent games provide a pleasant experience for teenagers so, in the long run, they prefer to be alone and do not enjoy spending time with their relatives and friends and therefore, it adversely affects their communication skills. It is advisable to encourage people including teenagers to do outdoor recreation such as walking or running or maybe family get together because it has much more positive effects on their lives. 
 
In conclusion, although some people think that violent programs on TV and video games do not affect people’s mind, I am of the opinion that, it influences people’s preference and personality specifically younger people in a negative way and it is better to encourage them to do some outdoor activities because of its positive aspects.

5.5

Mahmoud
Mahmoud

#235337

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

It has been around some decades since television and computer games have first introduced into our households.It has started to change many aspects of our lives and people today still have mixed views on whether they have a positive or a negative  effect.But in my opinion the costs will outweigh the benefits.This essay will illustrates how they impact on society.
Recently video games improve in numbers and quality because of technology progress and some of them are related to war and crime that is so attractive for teenagers and adults and also because they are accessible,these range of people encourage to buy and play that can have influence on their unconscious without they understand about that.For example when they play God of War that is full of murder and blood and you must kill anyone in this game whether you want or not it will have impact on your mind,so it is better to play games contributed to strengthen your brain like chess.
Furthermore,television programs that need to attract more audience to secure their financial survival need to make shows that are full of crime and love which do not need knowledge to understand and majority of people are fancy if that.For instance the shows like WWE that is related to fighting encourage kids to do that at home and how hazardous is for their physical health.On the other hand we should acknowledge  that television have some positive effect like can be useful for who live in overseas for studying to watch programs about their own culture.
In conclusion,I hold the view that the television programs and video games which are full of crime is dangerous and effect on people's mind so it is better to push these factors towards positively influence like games that make brain stronger and TV programs teaching about science and how to live better like some documentary programs.

5.5

Mina
Mina

#232680

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

A group of people claim that computer games and movies have a great deal distructive effect on social violence. While others argue that these variables could not be substantial responsible for badly mannered people. I completely agree with the first poit of view and in this essay I will explain my own rasional reasons to make my opinion concrete. 

Advance of technology, has been aimed for closing virtual space to reality more and more and it would be a primary sussessful key role until now. Arbitrary, by playing electronic games, one suppose himself within the unreal situation, therefore, it might be somewhat hard to distinc futrther real occurence with what he wached and experienced in those games or movies. Althogh it might bring a variety advantages for the users, unfortunately the majority popular media products (films or games) are those which include extraordinary and wierd action, so after spending some time on them, it could be appeared some violence or unacceptable behaviours on the people.

Since technology of virtual reality has been proved as a treatment for some kind of phobias and pcychological disorder, it means that it has proved that media has a spectacular power to change human behaviours. At the same time, in terms of an act of violence simultaneusly it cause many social dilemma. 

To conclude, Since media has been introduced to human being, lots of people tend to involve with that thoroughly. Many harmful effects on the social communication. On the other word, who watch a movie or play a game is eager to imagine its story could be a part of life, because of that people feel pleasent or awkward speding time with media players.

5.5

Seyedeh Zahra
Seyedeh Zahra

#237247

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Topic 

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people’s behavior . What is your opinion?

Writing 

Said by some people that watching belligerent programs in the media such as, TV or playing such asperity games has a detrimental impact on the society, as opposed to other person think that these things have no considerable effect on individuals manner. In my opinion, if television programs and also computer games be selected according to people’s age and the hours allocated to watch TV or play game be controlled maybe there is no need to worry about these issues.

There are some reasons that some people think may cause an increase in violence rate on society, for example, when children watch horror movies or play war games on their PC, whereas they aren’t well-suite for their ages at all.

On the other hand, other person believe that the proliferation of violence in society have other important reason.

I am the opinion of that not only there is not just negative aspects for television programs or computer games but also there is programs with positive content for watching, for instance, some educational channels, beautiful movies or interesting cartoons and many games for cultivating thought namely, a chess and backgammon. I think these things can be suited for a part of time that individuals allocate to their free time and also can be a kind of pleasant and healthy activity for their spare time.

5.5

parvaneh
parvaneh

#236223

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays there are various programs on television and computer games that have many advantages as well as disadvantages. One of the things that is important and affects our behavior is the violence in these programs. In many families, parents do not have control on children's computer games and they play each games even war games. I assume, it has a more negative effect especially for children as well as teenagers.

On the one hand, a flock of people believe that when people watch violent programs on TV or play computer games that including violent scenes, after a while it changes their behavior in society. A lot of research has been done on this issue and studies show that people who use these programs can not manage their behavior and are more aggressive in their relationships.

On the other hand, a low percentage of people believe that programs do not affect on behavior in their life. This category of people believe that other factors such as training in school and family influence on treatment . According to them, people can use any programs and ignore the disadvantages of them in their life. I do not think this is necessarily true.

To put in a nutshell, violent programs on TV as well as computer games are extremely harmful. In my opinion, under no circumstances should children play or watch these negative programs. In addition, it is vital for people's health that everyone, especially parents, remove these programs from their life and that of their children.

5.5

Maryam
Maryam

#238088

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

The effect of violent movies and computer games on people's manner is argued a lot. some people believe that it can not be damaging but the other group disagrees. I personally agree with the first group. in this essay, I will explain the reasons for my views.

some people think these days the level of violence has increased significantly، it is due to the movies or games which contain a violent subjects. but I think a substantial part of violence in our society is because of our real world.

In modern days we encounter a huge amount of problems and stress and one of the easiest ways to reveal this stress is violence.

on the other hand, I strongly believe watching these kinds of movies or playing these games helps people reveal their anger in a safe way.  Also, all human beings have an inherent tendency to violence and this genre helps them to satisfy it. So not only doesn't it have negative aspects, but also it's really beneficial for society.

 in conclusion, I think, if people are well educated to control their anger,  just a movie or game will not have a significant effect on their behaviour, and the impact of this subject in comparison with other things that people face them, it's really tiny.

                 

 

5.5

Zahra
Zahra

#237205

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Some people believe watching or gaming violence content can encourage society to illustrate the same treat ,but on the other hand Some one deny this subject. In my opinion there are something like this issue ,although seems completely true but in fact it's not .I think nothing specially watching and gaming can't modify people's behaviour even sometimes  they can will be advantage for us. In next section , I'll try to describe my point of view clearly.
Firstly, we can't tell without doubt about this fact that aggressive person and actually people who likes this kind of games and programs do violence behaviour or this media cause to they show violence performance. 
Secondly , I have some information about this topic because my field in university was psychology so l have spent many times relevant with this issue . The results of new researchs have shown that watching anything as love to war can effect on our mind but can't stimulate to do same treat ,even every thing about it, it's totally viseversa ,for instance if I watch a program about killing animals  there is so poor probably I will do this brutal act in the future . The name of theory is "effect of audience " .
In conclusion , in point of my view watching and gaming can improve our creativity and cause to experiment some moments that may we never can't feel or know about . This phenomenon can cause our mind feels the occurrence really happened and loses passion to do it in real life and with real person.

5.5

zohreh
zohreh

#230240

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

There is a belief that computer games Tv programs with violent context influence the society and interactions between people, while immense damages of them are ignored by others. Human by and large is an influential creature if constantly expose to moral values and immoral one will slightly change.

Todays, various game have been provided for different ages which have violent them. So not only children but also impact their behavior in bad way. For instance, in some games in which hitting people and rubbing their cars will change the attitude of children about social interactions and it possible lead to some grappling in schools. In addition, some adults as well as children going to change. furthermore, series and movies whit murders context, which specially are provided for adults and it is emphasized for +18, can influence individuals approach to the life and value of it, as they may involve whit depression as well as home or social violence.

In my opinion, without doubt any violent facilities have destructive effect on different ages which will be fundamentally for children. however there is an idea these can improve the ability of imagination and they are merely entertaining, I fiercely upheld that forming peculiar idea and eccentric behavior in both, adults and children, are consequences of violent context that people have frequently exposed them.

 

In conclusion, rough facilities could impact people should not use as permanent pastime because they are exiting or fascinating.  

5.5

elham
elham

#238096

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

People have differing views regard to the question of how violence on TV and computer games affect our society.in my view, both serials and games can have effect on our culture and ultimately on our society. Therefore, there is an argent need to be paid attention to their concept.

From a social perspective, there is a strong argument about violent scenes that can have a negative impact on audiences, especially on young people. Since adolescence is immature and unexperienced, they usually undergo a crucial milestone. In addition, violent scenes appeal to young people. Therefore, they are more willing to do like movies stars and these movies and games can lead to criminal violence by joining juvenile delinquency to gang group. Moreover, they also encourage aggressive behavior.

On the other hand, some people claim that violence on television or in computer games is a very commonplace scene such as other types of scenes like science fiction or comedy movies. While, from my point of view, young people are unable to distinguish between right and wrong. Therefore, watching and playing these violent serials and games should be banned for young people who especially do not reach eighteen years.

In conclusion, if young people are avoided watching violent scenes on TV or playing this kind of games, they are more likely to not turn to crime. Therefore, it is more possible that we benefit from safe society.               

5.5

Nasrin
Nasrin

#232854

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

The subject of publishing violent behaviors in TV programs or in computer games has been a controversial one throughout any country. Many people believe that thy will cause myriad negative effects while others claim that their influences can be neglected. I agree with the former view and in the following paragraphs, I shall discuss my point of view in detail.

 

Every society requires to some factors for advancement, which one of essential those is promotion of peaceful mind and healthy society in terms of psychological that by watching violent activities on TV, it would be in danger, particularly among children and youth. Consequently, they will be more nervous, missing their concentration on the productive activities such as education. For example, my nephew, is enthusiast to these type of programs. Although he is ingenious and very clever, because of participation in large number of disputes which is result of watching violent programs, never he can progress in his education way.

 

Secondly, another noteworthy concern here is the promoting criminal behaviors. If violent activities are routinely broadcasted from the media, it will be altered to usual activities among public people. One of the its consequents will be increasing in the number of criminal people such as theft, killer and etc. Due to that, in developed countries before publishing any program, the suitable range of age has been explained since last decades. However, in other countries specially underdeveloped of them, the authority would not pay attention to that.

 

Having put forth all of the substantial arguments, it is clear that promotion of violent behaviors not only will be caused to countless psychological damages, but also it is considered as one of the reasons of growth of criminal behaviors particularly between new generation.

Nasrin Roshani(AC)

5.5

Farnoosh
Farnoosh

#238092

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Many individuals hold the perspective that only after watching violence program and playing harsh game ,would people’s behavior become worse .other people argue that these type of violence scenes do not play significance role in people’s manner. I will discuss both sides of view in following paragraphs and I suppose to share my view. 

On the one hand those bloster the first view believe that normalizing violent among people , could be have an irreparable harms to their mental health.only when people watch violent movies ,would their emotions lost their values. In addition people’s sympathetic would be marginalized because of falling in to violent situations.for instance these days,most people lost their temperature and become aggressive  so quickly in compare to the past,because they experience these types of feelings in games . 

On the other hand those who argue that harsh movies and games would not propel people toward violent behavior.so common is the effect of violent programs that no one care about it.a vast majority of adolescents are playing the rough game but none of them have  bad habits . People know that these scenes are artificial and dummy so, they like these type of movies only for fun and increasing excitement. 

In conclusion after discussing both sides of view , I suppose that instead of futile arguments, people should have experienced some thrill so it should not be always gain by their own action , it could be achieved by watching horror and violent movies and games . So substantial is the experiment of these type of feeling that each person should faced to it. but it should be controlled and measured.


Farnoosh tahanpoor 
Academic 

5.5

Maryam
Maryam

#237993

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Regarding prevalence violent on television and computer games, some people believe that it has detrimental effect on the society, while others repudiate this influence. I firmly believe that watching violence bring negative effects on people’s behavior resulting in more tension and misbehaviours   in society.

Firstly, psychological impact of violence approved by means of complicated neurological processes in brain with wide range of researches. While one occupies spare time with watching movies and games replete with violence, some neurons called mirror neuron activate in brain attempting to imitate these actions. So, person unarbitrary express such action in behavior. For example, when the youngsters approach such movies, they demonstrate more inclination towards perilous sports to evacuate their high excitement and handle their mood. Some accomplish this by sports like Bungeejumping or car/motor race in the best aspect while others express more hysteric behavior in communication with others. Such people are more likely to fray in their daily routine and behave hysterically. Even , of course minority,  may suffer nightmares  experiencing low-quality sleep.

Secondly, Teenager and the youngsters deeply seek for their role model. When their heros comes in dangerous action and violated behaviours, their mind alters completely resulting in to select a lifestyle wrapped in violence and rage. Passing years after years, fixation these thoughts and behaviours make mature people with high level disturbed social interactions. Such communities perpetually involve in misbehavior. This cycle exacerbate about teenagers as their minds attracting excessive excitement more intensely.

In conclusion, violence on television and games have an important part to play in defected social communication. Additionally, these detrimental hobbies bring more fragile into community interactions and make susceptible groups like teenagers imitate violated behaviours and exemplify them in real life.

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BEHNAM
BEHNAM

#213779

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

The industry of games and movies has developed in last decades, and this development is contained some violence too. So, there are two points of view about effects of these kinds of violence products on society, some people believe that they have harmful effects on public, but others think that has not massive impacts on their attitudes. In my opinion, although maybe there are some effects, it is less than we would worry about that.

 

There are some reasons, which some member of society assumes these kinds of entertainments can influence people's behavior.  In twenty last years, in some countries, crime such as murderer saw a surge growth, because of this issue, some psychologists have had investigation on this subject. They found that some link between cruel behavior   of some criminal and horror movies, but the rate of that was quite low. Another reason for that is, the amount of bullying that happened in schools, parent believe that this aggressive behavior back to games that the children play.

 

On the other hand, another group, which usually either watch movie or play video games would argue about negligible influence on people by doing these activities. Near most of them, play action games that contain fear sections, but they have never faced any problems in society. So, they opine that, games and movies have a short-effect on their life, because they do it as a hobby and know it in a real life everything Is difference. Moreover, acknowledge about rules and laws preserve them to break law. 

 

In conclusion, although there are some negative effects on society's behavior, it is not dangerous for individuals. I recommend that to people who are worry about the effects of watching  violence movies or playing games, they experience them and take more information to tackle their attitudes.

 

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Amir
Amir

#226791

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

In spite of some dwellers mind cruelty on media or digital games affect the public destructively, others believe they are not important agents on citizens' manners.

In my perspective, it cannot be effective in this case on account of the fact that there are more significant problems to make violence for the society. By way of example, based on some investigators' researches, some wrong conditions in a community cause roughness such as shortage of suitable education. It is an inevitable fact that  by a considerable teaching to improve etiquette among people specifically from childhood, avoiding of savagery going to be less. What is more, children are exposed by many harmful events from all over the world which are accessible easily on numerous sites. For instance, every day some news from different parts of the world are shown that can lead people sharply younger generations to violence.

In addition, these programs on television or playing computer games have no harmful effects even make people realistic about existing facts around themselves. In my idea according to scientists theories, censorship in every fields has negative consequences. Therefore, being logical, and showing, as well as offering seemingly bad programs, open minds to this fact.

In conclusion, forasmuch as, always there are some demerits in everything it is impossible to say there is not disadvantages in this things, although on the whole positive aspects outweigh minus points.

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akrem
akrem

#237858

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

A group of individuals present the view that violence on television and computer games has adverse effect on the society, whereas others believe people cannot easily be influenced by these factors.I strongly agree with the former opinion.

On the one hand, some people justifiably argue that the most target customers of movies and games are people between the ages of 15 and25. Movies and game companies produce violent products in order to increase their audience. Therefore, to gain credibility, they have persuaded celebrities toendorse their products. Yong people are manipulated. moreover, they are oblivious to the consequences of their actions. Thus violence on television and in computer program may cause irreparable damage toThem and their society.

On the other hand, another group of people claim that these factors fail to have negative impacts on Society. they insist that Tv programs and computer games are watched as an entertainment. It is over simplify to think that these programs can encourage aggressive behavior. However, I do not find this argument convincing as people who are expose violent cense from an early age are more likely to break the law and turn to crime. In the UK, violent movie and gam are banned for teens under18.

To conclude, in my view, violence on television and computer games should be banned as a deterrent is one of approach to prevent aggressive behaviors from happening in first place.

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raheleh
raheleh

#218818

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Some people would argue that increasing crime in society have been affected from behaviors’ people. They concern about the situations of some TV program and computer games that are on the high range of violence, since the people spend a lot of time with this program, they have been influence of them.

It is my contention that, these days, the influence of programs and games on humans’ behavior is undeniable, for instance, when a cartoon is shown to children, they try to imitate the behavior of the main characters of the cartoon and sometimes they even repeat the special words that they use, so humans are influenced by what they see throughout the day.

On the other hand, there are opposite opinions that believe that society and human behavior are not influenced by the movies and games they watch. They strongly maintain that the violence on tv program is unbelievable for people, or, their view to games are  just an entertainment without any affect after playing. In other words, there are quite a few other effective factors affecting human behavior that have a destructive effect on society.

In conclusion, I do accept the affect of this type of program and games in people behavior, so it seems that they plays a more important role on the increase of social misbehavior. This issue is in need to be resolved by the creators of these programs, and, my solution is that they should simply divide the age range of the audience of their programs to solve it.

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zahra
zahra

#213431

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

There are different opinions about The effect of violence, game, and TV content on people especially children and adolescents in my point of view war movies, and some computer games can increase violence in people, and actually authorities should choose is a significant decision about this situation.
On the one hand, Some part of Society believes that teenagers who have playing violent computer game have more anger issue than the other peers.
Do you ring these days? Because lots of parents have a hectic lifestyle, and most of the families live in an apartment children’s physical activity decreased, and they prefer to fill their pastime with playing with digital devices. Moreover, scientists have been searching about the effect of these kinds of content on society, so their documents represent that that person who have seen and played more violent content, have a lower control on their anger.
On the other hand , many people who are sign of these kinds of movie or games, believe that this is the first and the most efficient way to release their attention and stress.
In conclusion , there are two opinion about facing to violent continents, some people believe they are helpful for them, and the others contrary of the first group, believe it’s Rose, Weiland behavior in society, to tell you the truth, I am with second groups

5.5

Maziar
Maziar

#236270

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

People’s opinions widely diverge on the negative consequences of show violence on television and in computer games on the society. Some of them believe it has not any significant influence on people’s behaviour while others believe it has bad effects. In my view, there is a strong correlation between the age of people and the amount of bad influence which are get from violence on TV or in games.

A major drawback of broadcast violence contents on TV is the bad influence of it on the children, the part of the society who do not have any knowledge about how reaction to violence contents. Due to less knowledge of children about media, watch violence on TV may have a more damaging effect on them. Actually, this lack of knowledge because they do not participate in school or their parents do not have enough time to teach them about this. However, other part of society may get fewer bad effects from violence on television, because they learn in school and from their parents about what is the right reaction to violence content. Therefore, the low age of children is a contributing factor in the amount of bad effect of violence on TV.

According to computer games, violence in games has a significant negative effects on gamers who are do not have enough age for play that game. Nowadays, most of the gaming companies make some limitation on their games which is about what generation of society can play their games and for what part of society their games may have a damaging effect, regarding to violence in their game. Due to this restrictions, if people do not pay attention to what game is suitable for them, it definitely have a bad effect on their behaviour. For example, Call of duty is one of the most famous games among teenagers which is has many violence scenes and due to its content, if people who do not have suitable age play this game, naturally some bad change in their behaviour definitely happen. As a result, do not pay attention to age restrictions, which is make from gaming companies, have a significant bad effect on personality.

In conclusion, broadcast violence contents on TV have bad influence on children who do not have enough knowledge about how reaction to them. The amount of bad effect of violence in game on people is depend on their age, if they under age for play that game, it definitely has a damaging effect on them.

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Yasaman
Yasaman

#237323

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

There is an argument between two groups of people, which one of these groups says that the visual cruelty in media or computer games have a hazardous impact on people's reactions, while the second group do not measure these sort of videos, with sharp violence sense, as a effective contributor on individuals behavior.
Personally, I think these kind of things have a significant impact on the way that people act in their society , and I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
Perhaps the most important reason why these type of videos could provoke cruelty among people in a society is that the violence in the media will remain in their unconsciousness mind and they will use it in some occasions with out think about it's outcomes, and they would lose their temper faster.
Maybe another key factor for this issue is Adrenaline. People could addicted to this hormone easily and the movies or games which have violent genera could rise up the level of the Adrenaline. So perhaps people wanted to experience more Adrenaline every day and they could do extremely dangerous things, for example they fight on street for inconsiderable problems .
And ofcours repetition could lead to learn anything specially in young ages, as it proven that the children whom played war or combat type of games repetitively, have rougher sprit rather than their peers that they didn't watch this cruel video games.
As a conclusion,  rough movies or games could effect on people's behavior negatively and maybe lead them to dangerous acts like fighting on streets because of unimportant issues and bring a disastrous consequence for their personal life

5.5

Ayyoub
Ayyoub

#214868

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

While it is believed by some people that TV violence has negative effects on the society, it would not be acceptable by some other people. I support the idea that violence on TV affects the behavior of the society.

On the one hand, the defenders say watching violence on TV cannot cause problems for the people let alone putting them in any danger. For example, kids now know they put themselves in possible danger if they trust strangers as if they have a very trustful behavior.  Furthermore, people are smarter and more literate than past, so they learn how to protect themselves not to act like the actor on TV. Finally, claiming that a lone person in an island is an innocent man is not acceptable. He is innocent when he lives with other people and sensibly says no to immoral things. You are wise if you know something and wisely do not do it.

On the other hand, some people do not agree with the violence on TV and I am a supporter of this view. Firstly, some violent activities on TV or in video games can teach children how to do an illegal activity while it teaches them something wrong which completely different from what we can experience in the real world. They look at a character who throws himself from the roof of a house; the character survives even though he is dead but just with pressing a button the child makes him alive again. The child really thinks he is just like the character. Secondly, Children are creative and curious and want to try anything they see or watch on TV maybe they are angry with their parents and want revenge. Thirdly, having lots of violence on TV makes people more cynical about the society and if a person really wants to help another person they are reluctant in accepting the favor.

Televising violence has supporting and opposing views and I completely in harmony with the opposing view.

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hanieh
hanieh

#235202

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

It has been argued that anger on TV or video games has a negative impact on community .others are in contrary with this idea and believe that it doesn’t have any effect on society .I believe that any kinda violence on TV, social media and video games can seriously damage people’s behavior .

Playing too much action or violent video games or watch violent movies may damage people’s behavior significantly . First of all, after watching lot of violence, being angry and demonstrate it in an inappropriate way like shouting at people, hitting them or hurting them becomes so common and normal like it happens in video games. since it has become normal in society people can’t react to anger and violence as they used to do it before  . Second, young generation accept that anyone who get into a fight or hit other people harder is stronger so consequently they start to show violence and anger in order to  exhibit their strength and power. Lastly, when people start to show anger and violence it may lead to achieve what they’ve been unsatisfied with . As a result they realize that showing violence can be useful for getting through the day .

Watching brutal movies may lead people into showing too much aggravation in their real life and not being aware of  what they do . Once I was walking in a street and two drivers started fighting over a parking place . At the end, one of them kill the other one with a knife he was holding it. He was totally unaware of what he was doing while he was considerably ireful. 

In conclusion, watching too much  harsh movies or playing savage video games may greatly damage people’s lifestyle or even lead into unexpected happenings . 

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Mobina
Mobina

#237591

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

These days, watching television and playing online computer games are gaining popularity among many people, especially youngsters. Some people hold the view that violence on these platforms can results in violent conduct in the society, while another group of people believe that these factors cannot affect people`s behavior. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and give my own opinion.

 

A growing group of people believe that violence on television and computer games might have intensive side effects on the society. It is their belief that people can be affected by what is shown in these platforms, which can results in changing their personality. Take criminals as an example. They sometimes say that they have learnt how to comic crimes by watching action movies.

 

On the other hand, many people hold the view that these items cannot influence people`s temper. There is also an argument that these kinds of platforms are just for entertaining people and they are mature enough to avoid doing what is shown on TV or these games. In other words, people all  have their personalized characteristics which cannot easily changed, and these programes are just for spending their spare time. A good example would be many sociable and sympethetic gamers who have not been influenced by these violent games.

 

All things considered, Although some people argue that violent behavior on the media has considerable side effects on the society, others believe that it is an impossible belief. Personally, I think it may not have bad impacts on people`s lives and behavior. I believe that for many, it is a way of spending their leisure time and they are aware of what they watch and do.

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Pedram
Pedram

#158350

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

There has been a controversy about the influence of TV programs and computer games with violent content. Some individuals believe that these types of games and programs have detrimental effects on public treatment whereas others claim these effects are minor and negligible. I completely agree with the latter due to some reasons. This essay will examine both views and then provide a logical conclusion. 


First of all, although the media can influence our feelings, they cannot make us do criminal activities. In the other words, our condition might affect us, but we are the last ones making decisions, therefore, we should be responsible for it. For instance, there have been many children during history whose childhood has been in a war. However, they had tough times in their past, and some of them become very hospital individuals. 


In addition, in spite of ideas that claim that TV programs and video games can lead to violence in society, they actually reduce crimes, because, when the young spend time on television and computer at their homes. They cannot leave the house and commit a crime. For example, there is a ceremony in Iran on the last Wednesday of the year in which people make a fire which sometimes leads to death. Authorities, encourage people to stay at home by playing the best cartoons and movies. 


Taking everything into consideration, also this development has some drawbacks to some extent, but I cannot see a proven link between what people watch on the TV or computer and their aggressive behavior.  

 

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Shaghayegh
Shaghayegh

#234410

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, we are involving in using electronical devices a lot, as we have been living in technological decade. It has been argued that, several people think TV programmes and computer games have unforeseen results on the society since they consist of violent parts, whereas others claim these activities do not have any important role on behaviour. Although some groups turn their eyes into this influence, I entirely agree their drawback effects outweigh benefits ones.

To commence with, there is the idea which expresses if people watch violent shows or even play video games, they are doing them just for fun and also spending their time. Clearly, individuals do not absorb them seriously. In this case, after finishing these programmes somewhat, they will back to their routine as usual without any changes on their manners as well as morality

On the other side, I firmly believe that, this violence on these platforms may have negative and adverse effects on us inevitably, as time passes, their results will appear. For instance, as soon as, we arrive in a decision to play video games, they can lead to the increase in tension, stress and of course disorders in terms of concentration. As a result, our mind would be occupied with meaningless actions. Furthermore, watching TV might teach us ways to throw our anger and also annoying thought out by shouting, breaking something or even knocking out somebody. Obviously, our level of bullying peaks up, and occasionally we are not able to keep our patience. Therefore, not only our behaviour, but also character would be changed.

In conclusion, from my perspective, violent shows likewise games can cause numerous results on us, whether mentally or physically.

5.5

Atiye
Atiye

#228605

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

The influence of mass media affects many aspects of human life. Admittedly, these effects can be positive or negave. I quiet agree that media effect on community tend to be more detrimental.

To commence with, excessive use of media causes vast amount of implications. All too often the right things backfire. Media productions are intended to improve quality of society but numerous negative effects have been recognised through psychologists. drawbacks include depression and frustration as the foremost. Furthermore, media can leave profound impression on users mental and behavioral health. In addition long-lasting destructive impacts on youths brain which are not retriveable. what is more, addiction to media consumption seems to be something really effective.

To sum up, media productions expose community to excessive level of adverses compare to its preveleges. I can take increasingly growth of crime in some countries as an instanse which rooted in unreasonable use of watching harsh movies via young aged individuals without parental control. I can understand somr profits made by media. Media not only needs the knowledge of coping with addictional situationsbut but also strong nerves can calmly find feasible solution to filling viewers with great delight. Nevertheless, in my point of view these arguments are not powerful enough to refuse countless drawbacks.

In conclusion, massive media exposure is a crucial phenomenon in the new world. Too much media of any kind can damage health of consumers regarding of above-montioned explanations. As it has been illustrated media affects on audiences thought, attitudes and behaviour.

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Ali
Ali

#205718

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

In our current world, media specially TV, play a major role in most of people’s leisure time and people spend their free time to watch TV shows and listen to their favorite music. So, it means shows and music affect on viewers’ mind and it could have negative or positive effect on societies. In my opinion media has more advantages than disadvantages and in this essay, I shall discuss my reasons.

Based on researches, 60 percent of people watch trend movies and series and talk about it with other people. It helps people to communicate with others and make friends. Furthermore, watching TV series has a considerable impact to improve the language that a person wants to learn. Besides, there are lots of TV shows and music that psychologists suggest to their patients to watch and listen to be relaxed and more hopeful and more energetic.

On the other hand, music and films could have negative impact on societies. Researches demonstrate that movies with violent scenes can make their viewers aggressive. Also, every year thousands of people try to suicide after listening to metal music. In addition, through history, there were some movies that were banned to watch because of the damage that they had on people. Moreover, lots of people are addicted to films and it affect on their real life and it will be a waste of time instead of being just a hobby to fill their free time.

Although there are some disadvantageous in media, it is irreplaceable in people’s life and we cannot ignore its benefits. Also we can avoid these problems using more control on viewers ages and their mental health problems.

5.5

Yasaman
Yasaman

#237323

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?


Due to the communication age that we live in, today, our life is bounded with the media like television, radio and social media, and it is impossible to avoid these mass media.
People could be affected by media in numerous ways, for example watching TV passively for long hours could lead the young to poor academic performance or damage individual's sleep patterns, but also it could have some pros either, like sharing the events as soon as possible or easily communications. 
I am totally agree with that point of view which says the media's cons is much more than it's advantages. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
As I mentioned before, media could have uncountable disadvantages and effect on people negatively. To be more specific, individuals would be gullible easily, if they do not have enough knowledge. Another example of why media could be harmful is that no one could be ensure that the news that are spread on media, specially social media, are true or not; so there is a suitable forum to misguide people and shape their opinion in a negative way. And also, watching to much Tv could make children loss their social abilities.
Although the media have various disadvantages, it have some benefits which are as follows:
We can be aware about events that happened around the world by the extensive news coverages.
Media paly a key role in education, you can learn about almost everything in media like You tube.
Specially social media, make the world smaller, and  people could to each other easily even when they are so far away from their friends.
So as a conclusion, in general, media have more demerits than merits and it could impact on society in a negative way, for example, it could ruined people's sleep patterns or mislead them by sharing the wrong news, non the less, it could have some benefits, like easy communication with our friends or learning uncountable things in media.  

5.5

Amin
Amin

#238312

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

We are at the mercy of technology in modern life. We are exposure by media in some ways such as TV and radio. I believe that the benefits of this kind of technology are more than drawbacks and this essay will discuss about it and the influences of media.

 


What is significant about this phenomenon is promoting every kind of fashion as their authority keen on. For instance, advertisements are the important part of media which we are dealing with. There are many tricks to sell their products. As a result, we choose the goods which we watched in TV and it contributes we have to choose the fashion that we don’t have basic information about. Moreover, media can effect our young generation. One of the huge advocates of social media are students and they can follow people who are their role model. Although it’s a lead to know more about their hero, they might fall behind the study and failure exams due to checking frequently their cellphone. Consequently, they must take part to classes which are repeated for them and their time will be waste.

 


However, There are plenty of advantages for using media in the right way, the disadvantages outweigh. Yeah users of this kind of technology are served every day and they are not taught to how use media in a particular way. As a result, do use media to match and after a long period they will suffer from physical and mental disease. Besides, TV and radio are Invented for leisure times. but, folk around the globe watch or listen more than usual and it causes to do not do their obligation in the home or at the work in the right time.

 


To sum up, media are a technology which we cannot avoid and it is essential for our leisure times. I believe its drawback like advertising widespread fashion and bolding role model can have significant function on societies. So, Countries’ authorities should pay attention to the media rules.

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parvaneh
parvaneh

#236223

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Nowadays there are many various mass media all over the world that share a number of information with people. These data are different such as news, music, movies, etc., Some people believe the demerits of these media are more than the merits. I do not think this is necessarily true.

On the one hand, using the media develop and these days a flock of people are force to use these mass media including television and radio. I am convinced, the first and perhaps the vast majority of effect  about media is increasing awareness among people especially young people. In addition, sometimes family member gathering together for watching movie on the tv as well as I assume, this issue is beneficial for them because they can improve their relations.

On the other hand, sometimes in some mass media such as tv we watch movies that contain a lot of violenc. These films are grossly inadequate for children and teenager. I think, parents’ role is vital in family and they must control their children. What is more, some news that hear in radio are not true and this issue causes problems for people. For example, the news about traffic jam are not always certainly correct and when people listen this news they decide to change direction and after a while they realize that they have made a wrong decision.

To put in a nutshell, in my opinion, that the benefits of mass media outweigh the drawbacks, provided that we learn how to use the media to raise our awareness in life.

5.5

Mina
Mina

#232680

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Various sorts of media has been increased their place at our thorough life for example using some electronic devices such television or radio for satisfy our eyes and ears. This change cause raising human awareness about lots of events, which I agree with advantegeus effect of this recent changes.

 

When a number of people are involved with media in any types, highest amount of income data consequently, comes to the population mind. Increasing input data result in running extensively brain function to distinguish which one could be reasonable to accept or which may help to boost their current level. Listening to news as an example, everydays followed in either televison or radio, so if people having proper analysis of what they receive they can make a strict future plan for themselves accordingly.

 

Something must be taken into account for for nowadays life is that immersion on the media have many more positive points in terms of impress tradision perspectives to not only restrict on the old-fasion and repeatable methods. Due to explicating the vast number of story from differnt people in each side of the globes, they may begin imply which their notion about some abnormal behaviours, seems not reasonable.

 

To conclude, coming across with all kinds of media surround us is going to assume that ease our making decision quite easier. Moreover, it depend to us, how we use its advantages through our life.

5.5

kimya
kimya

#234417

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Media has expanded around us, it has various effects on people and the country. I completely disagree with the idea that the divastating impression of media outweigh its advantages.

It is evidently clear that media has a key role to impress on peoples' lifestyle in the society by spreading useful information among individuals, and consequently it is connected to peoples' literacy and their knowledges. This vast platform aid people to be conscious about various issues in the society. For example, in Covid pandemic, social media have played a crucial role to diffuse appropriate information for monitoring this global matter. Not only have people become aware about this ailment by social networking channels but also they have found some methods to hinder this dire problem.

On the other hand, watching television and listening music create a closely communication between people from different cultures with valueable notions. Therefore, it is a fabulous bridge Which is narrowing the gaps between cultures. For instance, some music industries attempt to attract people from all over the world by advertising in social media and television shows. Thus, the tourism industry has impacted by this advertisements, and by the time a significant increase will be seen in turnover capital of the society.

As a conclusion, I totally believe that there are various ways which media can be affect people by,however, I completely aware from efficient effects of media on our lives compare with incompetent influences.

5.5

mostafa
mostafa

#236260

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

In our modern busy life nobody can deny the far reaching impact of media on the society. Media can be observed in everywhere, which most of the people use it daily. It is believed that media has various influences on society. In addition, I agree that these impact's disadvantages can can outweigh its advantages. 

 

I believe the main impact of media is on people's behaviour. Nowadays, social media almost determine which clothes should be worn in society and people be awar of fashion and dressing trends by day their social media applications. Furthermore most of the people imitate the behaviour of actress and actors of movies and serial, Which is streaming in Internet or borecasting in television. For instance,  The level of violence has increased in society since violence containing movie genre has become popular among the people. 

 

As media has significant effect on people it can be abused by somebody for personal goals. These days governments may use media for theiraims. It could be used for pursuing people to be or agreed with some policy and some laws which not beneficial for most of the people.for example, Russia  Has established a TV channel ,showing movies and documentaries about the Russia's successes in battles and wars or developing in industry and  technology or other fields. and some of these are not accurate and based on false information. this kind of programs has been being produced to lead people's mind into way that their governments desiring.

 

 

In conclusion, Although media has some positive impacts on society, People should be aware of its threats and consider that media's influence has become widespread in many fields.

 

5.5

Mansour
Mansour

#189567

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

 It is an undeniable fact that nowadays our society has been influenced by media in many ways. it has influenced our lives in many ways ranging from our thoughts and actions to the way we are living. although it has brought many benefits to our lives the demerits it has bring are by no means not negligible.  
To begin beat living in advanced worlds we are using media in our lives more than any other human beings Since the creation of this world. that is to say, in today's world we are using medias such as television, radio and more most importantly the Internet with different goals. Being tired after having a hard day at work, we tend to stay like a catch potato in front of TV. This approach could make us relax and we can get ready for the other days. moreover, we listen 2 news in radio when we are driving car. Needless to say, that the Internet play and a pivotal role in our today's life. All these are the sign of the significant role of media in our advance life and living without media would not be easy for today's mankind. We can learn about other people than other societies all over the world with the help of documents we are watching on TV or listening on radio or the papers we can find on the net. 
on the other hand, we cannot turn a blind eye on the disadvantages of the media. The number of disadvantages of the media are noticeable. Firstly, being involved with media, people spend less time together nowadays. Secondly, statistics shows that medias are one of the roots of the rise of the obesity in the rise of the obesity in the society. Finally, governments can control governments our lives through medias. that is to say, governments inject their aims to our lives through media.  
To conclude, the disadvantages of the media can outwait the merits. that is mainly because of the negative influences of it on peoples live. 

5.5

Sarina
Sarina

#234773

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

   Across the world, almost every equipment and smart devices contain social media applications and thus make life easier. In my opinion, these tools and medias pushing back the standards to a good level . Medias can , on the other hand , hurt society if there is no cultivation about how to use virtual world. This essay will express advantages and disadvantages of technology and media in recent lifestyles and will include relevant examples to support this position.

 


   Medias provided a remote access to almost every information, which the users wishes . You can access unlimited news and information in different topics , any where and in 24 hours in a blink of an eye. Consequently, the general knowledge and useful connections will see a upward trend in society.

 


   The vaster access there will be to social medias , the faster speed will be in daily home-works . A vast remote and connection to medias like television, radio and internet is why traffic decrease in urban areas. The primary reason is online meetings and interviews , which led to members attend at meetings virtually.

 


   Last but not list is the great disadvantage of medias on Psychological Merciful . In recent days , the physical and face to face connections are fewer than ever before that show the weak cultivations in societies to stop the upward of depression populations in communities. For this parents have to monitor the children access and physical activities .

 


   In conclusion, medias makes lifestyles easier but decrease the physical activities, which is really harmful for health and body, but media’s advantages can out weight the disadvantages.

5.5

Roya
Roya

#237564

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Topic

How does media affect the society?

Media and news reports are actually the link between society and organization or people to people and as message carries can be effective in creating public culture , beliefs and public opinions . Besides, media plays an essential role in various areas of life , so life without media is unimaginable in today's world, because the people of today's society move according to the policy of the media.

Although the media have positive effects on society, they can also have negative effects.

Maybe if people use media such as television and radio instead of virtual programs on the internet , the positive effects will be more than the negative effects, because such media (Tv or radio) are more controllable, I mean that these media focus more on the positive points according to the culture of their particular people, however, if people especially young people use media such as virtual programs and unhealthy internet relationships more , it will really have negative and irreparable effects.

On the other hand, the correct use of this media (internet media), like the people who earn income in this way, or people who teach or are taught, brings very positive results.

One of the most important factors effecting the media on societies is globalization, which has facilitated communication in different societies that every person can easily with using a quality media to make her or his voice heard by the world.

5.5

Hussein
Hussein

#238012

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Eversince the advent of radio and TV, they began tooccupy a huge part of our lives. The contents broadcasted through these platforms have a tremendous effect on the way we preceive our sorroundings. Although there are people who argue that these programs are detrimental to our lifestyle, I believe that they are a great tool for education regarding various subjects, and also they be viewed as a burgeoning industry providing job opportunities for many people.

Nowadays, most of the society looks at the world through values delivered to them by media, and the depth to which this medium can affect us is almost frightening. developments in this area has also revolutionised the flow of information, with the news of the furthest parts of the globe being accessible to us within minutes. The widespread usage of media make it an absolute irriversible step in human civilisation's evolution path.

However, like any other subject, specially popular ones among the youth, there is so much debate over media's pros and cons and whether its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. Everybody, including those who oppos media usage, should consider the undeniable benefits of the programs made for TV or radio; things like how the provide access to educational materials for children and through this many students in areas that are struglling financially can try to reach their goals and pursuit higher education. Of course, there can be some downsides to TV or radio programs but I think we should keep an open mind about them an try to find a way to minimise their reprecussions.

In conclusion, media has become an inseparable part of modern life, and will continue to grow in the future; there is no way but forward for it. So we should make effort to understand different aspects to it as it expands as to utilise it in the most profitable way for humanity.

5.5

Nastaran
Nastaran

#151035

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Media has brought a lot of influences on hour lives, because of movies and TV. Nowadays, media is very important. Because it helps human to feel relax. Also we should consider the impact of media on human behaviour,activities and thought in both positive and negative sides.

First of all, Media can inspire new generation to know their dreams and achieve their goals in different fields such as music ,art and cinema. Besides, it can lead to reduce their self-confidence by showing most beauties in the world. Teenagers may get disappointed of life because of showing prettiness and wealth on TV. 

I think media can help people to learn new things and enhance their skills. It reminds me a time that i was between jobs, and started learning programming and web designing. It changed my job' future completely. Moreover, media inspires human to think and live more consious and healthier than they used too. For instance, the rate of doing sports and activities are increased recently.

I agree that media can be more harmful than being positive. Media increases the rate of crime and violence among people.  It can make people's life easier but it can bring many gap between them too. Media is an important reason that make people get depression or even mental health. Because on media everything and everyone are superordinary.

All in all, media has impact on human life more than it shows. People feel comfortable and relax by media , but disadvanges are  more than its advantages.

5.5

Jamal
Jamal

#195727

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Assessing aspects of TV and radio program on society is a controversial subject among multimedia experts. I firmly believe that this entertainment has significant impact on all parts of life.

Surely, shaping our behaviors is directly based on surrounding environment. On of the power tools around us that has solid effect on our manner is media. Clearly, the impact of this subject depends on our personality or age. In fact, people by watching TV programs and listening radio podcasts, try to imitate myriad action of actors, therefore they automatically follow them and finally would be copy of them. For example, when I was childhood, a TV program that was “Socers” which originally produced in Japan, encourage all of co-players to imitate the episodes precisely and repeated all of them in alley carefully. Consequently, this TV program had a positive effect on our lives that stopped many of us for smoking and other social harassment. But on the other side it may be have a lot of negative sides on humans reactions. Physiologists believe that our personality  gradually will grow from childhood to old age. But the prominent stage is childhood which will structure by environment.   

The main disadvantage of TV and Radio goes back of paying attention to financial aspect instead of humanity side. Either expensive TV or Radio program attracts additional fans nor allocating huge amount of advertisements. Unfortunately, nowadays, the big company of film or serial producer like Hollywood or Bollywood considers their energy on more and more selling. For example, some violence films that exactly advertise the USA weapons encourage children to use most of them. Therefore, nowadays number of students and teachers killed by students more than other countries. Obviously, the governments have to obtain an effective approach for producer and viewer to mitigate unwanted result of watching or listening. Luckily, companies have new categories for their films to announce people that it is harmful for which age.  

Overall, based on my opinion media is a vital for any society to guide people. So this guidance based on program. If it is useful so the result would pleasure and vice versa. 

5.5

ramin
ramin

#231302

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Nowadays, media is everywhere with different platforms, like TV, Radio and the Internet, which cause both positive and negative consequences on people. Some people believe that its drawbacks are more than its benefits, which I agree with, but before talking about impacts, we should find out how does it influences the society?

Media change people’s beliefs. Individuals’ beliefs create social norms, so altering people’s attitudes individually might change the whole etiquette in a society. For example, a famous sitcom series which have some contents against women right might alter respects which men used to have, and gradually it will destroy all social norms related to women’s rights.

Apart from social impacts, media can create unhealthy individuals both mentally and physically. Most of the movies and series that are shown on mass media, like television, cause addiction to just watch. This might cause some unhealthy habits, including inactivity and seating for long time, which cause some long-term consequences, just like obesity. Besides all physical impacts, people might be influenced by their contents which might be about crime or violence. These contents gradually change people’s behaviour. For instance, lyrics of some metal music are about cannibalism and killing encouraging violence in audiences.

However, some audiences might gain some knowledge from media. TV shows, like quiz-based programmes, and the Internet provide rich sources which can help people to get knowledge. Human kind nowadays, have an access to wide range of subjects on the Internet which allows them learn whatever they want in any time.

In conclusion, although media can be useful in term of getting knowledge, their cons outnumber their pros due to unhealthy consequences which they might cause on individuals and in society.

 

 

5.5

Parviz
Parviz

#203302

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Today, humans are encompassed by media. It has affected our life by what we watch or listen. It uses TV, radio, and social media to shape our attitudes toward various things. I believe that the advantages of its effects are more than its disadvantages and I will support my opinion by the following reasons.

Media tends to has a deep effect on our outlook towards life. What I mean by this is that people are bombarded with medias every day. We watch their adverts, news, and films or listen to podcast on a daily basis. So, it is possible that our image to fashion, furniture, and politic could will be changed. Even more, media has a high role on our private pages and we are affecting through them. For example, it has been reported that Facebook had cooparated with one of American ex-president when he was advertising for elections.

I agree that media has many drawbacks, however, I would not believe that the downsides of its impact on our life outweigh its upsides. Firstly, I think media forces different business and companies to compete with each other that leads to good services and better products for humans. Secondly, freedom has been improving by media, meaning that totaliter governments are under pressure of media to consider human rights, which I hope that help to improve the quality of human’s life around the world.

In conclusion, it tends to be right that media has undenyable effects on our life, which ranging from shaping our opinion about different things to threatening our personal life on social media. However, I imagine that the benefits of its impacts outweigh its dangers.      

5.5

Hasti
Hasti

#232942

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

From past until now, there was media, but in different types. For instance newspapers,letters, radio that were popular among people. By develop and advent the technology, the life of humans changed. Thanks to the media, this influenced the society in different cases. Moreover, I some extend agree that the media had more drawback impressions. So, I disagree about this subject.

 

By advent media, this informant had affect on society in variety modes. First of all, the advertising from newspaper, television and radio or internet leads to change society. For instance, some advertising showed in order that encourage men to change belief or life of way, such as evolve fashion, politics, religious and others beliefs. In other word, not only it caused to change opinions, but also it caused to achieve money in business. 

 

Second in some media as internet had effect. There was a software like Google what there were many websites that available. By accommodated these details, it cause to the most people accepted everything that they saw, or it due to the people were lazy, and people could not remember some information in their brains.

 

 

Media can both negative impact and positive impact. In my opinion, the advantages of media outweighed disadvantages. The plus points what media had. You can access to info in no time. Another advantage, the speed of spreed news are rapid. For instance, about a week, an earthquake occurred in Turkey. Some people who were drap, thanks to the internet, they share their situation in social media or spread this news in other words, so it due to some countries sends help forces. Finally, these have educational impact. For example, in television there are some programs that train the cooking. The most disadvantage of media is that mental hurting.

 

To conclude,there are many different media that aware people from news, then these have impact on society. It may be pros or cons. In my opinion the advantages of media outweighed than disadvantages.

 

 

Hasti (Ac)

5.5

sara
sara

#220620

Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.

How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

Nowadays, the broadcating system including television, radio, newspaper have influenced our life directly and indirectly. It has both positive and negative impact on society which could influence the way of individuals life. In my opinion, drawbacks of media outweigh its benefits. I will be supporting my view in this essay.          To begin with, presence of media leads to spreading of fake news. Some people misuse media as a source of creating rumors and cyberbullying specifically among teenagers. This harassment would result in a sense of fear and insecurity in society. In other words, media is responsible to report authentic news and develop morality among people whereas the Tv reports alot of fake news from all over the world and shows programmes that contain violence and inappropriate content. For instance, a false news about an intense earthquake in an small city caused issues which was just a rumor. Another reason that I want to support another disadvantage of widespread of media is that the skills of people has declined notably due to exaggeration of celebrity or rich people leading to depression and anxiety. A recently research which was conducted in Stanford university declared that many youth miss their confidence due to shows of bloggers and they always compare themselves with them which has destructive effects on individuals. Moreover, while people use media to do their daily tasks and spend alot of time, their sleep patterns change to unhealthy level. If our sleep patterns become irregular, our productivity will diminish and we will have health issues.                                                    To sum up, however there are some advantages of using media, it contributes to some controversial issues which would increase more and more. These include mental preoccupation, escapism and neglect of personal life which have harmful effects on individuals and society.

5.5

Reyhaaneh
Reyhaaneh

#234155

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Currently, many scientific evidences illustrate that exercises are crucial to maintain someone's health ranging from kids to adults.  Plus, they are beneficial for kids to boost their brain's intellectual ability. As a result, children are being propelled to do extreme exercises. It is claimed that children who found the physical exercises engaging, are vulnerable to overburden these activities or get   injured seriously. This may root in many reasons such as plethora of sport advantage advertisements and lack of entertaining plan for children to dedicate their time to and become discharged. In this easy I want to raise my personal ideas about this problem causes and some possible solutions.  

Nowadays, many kindergartens set a kind of sport plan for their kids. Parents enroll their kids in sport classes. For instance, marshal sports or team sports. Having to say that, a kind of obsession is emerged which results in extra attention for physical activities. But the problem lays on the fact that children's muscles aren't strong enough to involve to surplus exercises. It can lead up to serious troubles such as permanent disabilities or boon's dysfunction in elderly. They should be expected to do minor exercises and prohibited to overdo harmful sports.  

Another reason is insufficient schedule to catch children's attention. There are no convenient programs to take their energy and causes to emotionally involvement. This people are keen to learn new skills ranged from academic skills to soft skills. Children's facilities have to be recognized and planned to nurture! Actually, parents are in charge of upbringing their talents.  In this case, they will be involved in many various activities. So there is no extra time or energy to be dedicated to exceed exercises.

In conclusion, children's sport time should be observed carefully. Although sport is essential for an underage people, this should have been adjusted with kid's capacity and sustainability.First of all, awareness  in this issue should be developed for parents and then they should make out the solution to tackle the problem. For example,hey can prioritize children's need of learning and try to accommodate them by setting suitable plans. 

5.5

elham
elham

#238096

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The children who have a passion for sports are often indulged in doing exercise or sometimes get severely damages. I believe determining the cause of this issue could assist in finding effective solutions to overcome it.

Putting extra pressure on children who are willing to follow professional sports to gain valuable prizes could partly account for devoting a sizeable amount of time to physical activity regardless of children’s physical stamina. Children are always persuaded into being accomplished person by their parents or coaches. They are almost expected to be the first grade in their field. To address this situation, children’s capability and talent should be assessed by their coaches and parents respectively and so their physical activity is set accurately.

Having poor eating habits can explain why children damage severely when they are training. Young people indulge in fast food. Fast foods are very high in fat, sugar and salt and so it can bring about major problems in the long run for instance, heart disease and osteoporosis. One effective way to resolve this difficulty is to encourage children to eat a balance diet which are endorsed by eminent dietitians. Furthermore, there is an urgent need that children’s state is experimented on a regular basis and then appropriate tablets are prescribed to meet essential needs such as vitamins and minerals.

To conclude, even though high expectations and poor eating habits contribute to get serious traumas, parents, coaches, dietitians can remedy the situation. In my opinion, examining children’s physical stamina and prescribing a sensible eating plan are steps in the right direction.

5.5

razieh
razieh

#213484

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

      Nowadays children who are involving in sport are suffering from some issues such as overloading with exercises or having traumas. This can be because of parents or coaches’ pressure on these kids for getting pro or also the contest that are exist between gymnasts. In this essay the reasons and some solutions will be rendered and explained, respectively.

      First of all, families play an important role in their children’s lives. Therefore whatever they ask kids too much can puts stress on them. Moreover some instructors give kids heavy and unreasonable sport programs to turn into champions as well as soon. In fact this causes serious problems in young generation not only in their healthy but also in their mental condition. For example we have seen numerous students that aren’t able to concentrate on their lessons. The key reason is tension and stress of sport activities. Furthermore, people in their childhood perhaps face with sort of destructive, competitive atmosphere among athletes. This case makes them nervous and anxious.

     In the second part, for solving these issues schools and the government are responsible. They should create training and consulting sessions or workshops for both children and their parents. Besides arranging short-time plans and goals for sportsmen helps them to manage time and reduce load of physical activities.

    To conclude, community including family, friends and teachers can be impressive in kids’ health status. If sport children don’t make schedule appropriately of course with help of parents and coaches, they will be exhausted from athleticism or will get harmful traumas.

 

5.5

Elika
Elika

#229201

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

People, especially younger people have tend to be seen by others in sports. As a result, they make extra effort for themselves. It is not only create stresses, but maybe end up in trauma which consider as an illness. In these passage we are going to explain what the probable consequences is and how we can avoid them.

Excessive physical activity or traumas may occur for youth who participate in sports. In my view, parents have high expectation from them, and sometimes children even expect themselves to achieve a high target in a short time which is a burden on children’s shoulder. Unhealthy competition is also stressful situation and result in severe pressure of working which leads children to mental stress.

There are some solution to prevent children from anxiety and excessive work out. For example, if a target is broken down into smaller points, they will be more achievable and a person can reach them step by step. In addition, what is seem to me very important is the choice of a right institution and t. It is undeniable that atmosphere around us can affect our spirit and behavior. As we feel a friendlier environment, we are more likely to avoid from trauma

On the whole, pushing kids hard and putting them at a stressful condition at field of sport, often affect them in a bad way, so it is wiser to choose an appropriate place with suitable coach for them and also keep them aware that we should be patient for reaching our goals, and it is a road which should be passed little by little.

5.5

Fateme
Fateme

#235329

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The children who become involved in sport, often suffer from being overwhelmed with physical activities and it causes them big troubles. This essay is going to outline the main reasons of this issue and how it can be addressed.

 

The most significant reason of this problem, is that children's parents may concern inordinately about the future which leads to overwhelm the children with lots of classes.

for example, my cousin who is only a ten_year_old girl, has a 4-hour swimming class every day and if she doesn't want to participate just in a session their parents would punish her. It is not surprising that she is not enjoying the class anymore and even she is not learning anything new because she is forced to do that.

 

Another reason for some unsetting experiences that affects them for a long time, can be the fact that their efforts may not being rewarded by any one. They would start to lose their hope, if nobody could see and appreciate their attempts. For instance

my friend's child is often reminding their parents that she has been the top student in her class since she started her school. But her parents do not pay attention to her enough. As a result she is not trying like before anymore.

 

To provide a way dealing with these problems, it would be the fastest way to ask the parents not to think and decide instead of their children. Sometimes they can give their children some free time to do whatever they want not repeating the same classes.

They need to consider that children need entertainment and learning both.

It can be possible when some classes would be provided for parents to raise their awareness about their children's need.

In addition the parents should be vigilant for showing reactions to any success is being achieved by their children to show they do care about them.

 

Overall parents should not overwhelm their children with repetitive sport classes and they should encourage their children's attempts

5.5

Tahereh
Tahereh

#237510

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The youth of today doing excessive exercise which it leads to serious  phisycal problems. Although there are specific root causes behind in this issue, many effective policies can be adopted to remedy this situation.
There are two main reasons why children tend to work out far more than necessary.firstly fast changing fashion industry motivate young people to keep a body in shape so in order to reach a shaped body they have taken vigorous exercise. Take some fashionable advertisement as an example shown many 
Handsome young male and gorgeous female with a fit body, this prompt children to do sport continuously also  a various array of physical injuries are arisen from these advertisements. Secondly being unfit is a negative point in many aspects of life. Lack of balanced body breeds many obstacles in the public places such as school.
There are some prohibitive regulations to remedy this problem. One step would be fashion industry should be at the mercy of governments not to work as a private sector. That is to say fashion producers have to take an initiative to change audience outitude about form of the body by means of changing the style of models in the advertisements. anoher viable alternative is teachers are responsible to prohibit adolescence from tough working out by introducing other achievements in life which are much more prominent than a shaped body. For illustration a responsible doctor suffered from obesity takes priority over a person with just fit body.

To conclude, there are two prime reasons why young choose to do vigorous sport. Fashion industry by poducing magnificent advertisment drive children to do demanding exercise also teachers as a role model play crusial role to address this problems.

5.5

kimya
kimya

#234417

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is said that kids playing sports frequently will be faced with high-pressure activities or serious injuries. Although, there are specific root causes behind this children matter, effective policies and attitudes can be adopted to remedy this problem. 

There are two main reasons why children tend to do heavy physical activities and injure themselves. Firstly, a great sense of competition, children are willing to be a winner in sport major. not only do they are under pressure of their parents to do their best in the sport courses but also they are impressed by norms of society to overload themselves for being a perfect person. Therefore, some children are participated in sports extracurricular for promoting their level of physical activities to outreach  their rivals. secondly, some kids are eager to be noticed by their parents, thus they exercise constantly to get their family attention.  

There are, however, some workable solution to aid children to have a normal sport activity in their life. If parents pay more attention to their children and encourage them by their little sport activities, kids' greed about being winner in every races might be declined. Parents are able to define some legislations and in addition, they can allocate certain determined limitation for their kids activities to hinder them from constant exercises. 

As a conclusion, there are beneficial solutions to assist children damaging themselves by great amount of physical activities, and also help them to have a balanced sport life.

5.5

hossein
hossein

#234550

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

With number of gym faciities and body builders soaring often, people overlook sports and sometimes miscalculate the amount of it. Several reasons have contributed to this inscident, in this essay I will mention a few of them and propose a possible solution for each.

First and foremost, media has a profound influence. With movies having body builders with huge arms and muscles, it could be expected that some viewers especially younger individuals might fallow their lead and for achieving abilities like them would do excessive exercise on their routine. In a recent study polled by 'Gym Stars' (gym equipment provider) indicated that almost 30 percent of people who over-do sport activites only because of the inscentive of becoming like the acters. To tackle this problem, education is the key, schools should treach their students about the imaginary figures and unreality pictured in these movies.

Another contributor is society, most people nowadays praise the body builders and have a liking attitude toward them. This might be due to the strenght that their body indicates or could be due to the high-profile acters mentioned. It is evident from our social life that this misconceptualization is common. To solve this issue, society should become eager to enhance other good personalities of people.

With all that being mentioned, scientific advancements have also supplied this fact. As new powders and drugs are being developed , we can see in gyms that most people who behave energetically and work hard are impowered by the usage of these substances. For overcoming this obstacle governments can impose tax on purchasing these materials.

In conclution, I reoterate that since some movies' stars are gaining muscle and society's propelent force of encouragement and due to advancements in protein and other sorts of powders and drugs we are facing with more health issues due to wrongly-done exercise. By focusing in the solutions mentioned the severity of this issue would plummet.

5.5

Hosein
Hosein

#233993

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In this day and age , a lot of children occupied in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumos.There are afew reasons and also solutions for this issue that we will discus in this essay.  Children are more interested to sport compared to the past . We can see many entertainment such as go to park , listening music , watching football and as well as sport in among children and we can absolutely say that sport is the best hobby for them . As a matter of fact , they can have healthy and fit body and by sport breathe fresh air and they become less ill and they consume tablet or pill less than the other people , because their body is strong. Another reasons for this matter is that children drain energy with physical activity and they go to drugs less.                                                           On the other hand , we should provide a good environment for sports. Government can pay subsidization for physical activity and built enough place for them in whole of the country , even village . As a mentioned above , sport is a essential leisure activity but it can cause a lot of damage among them and one of the solutions for this issue is that teachers teach the type of the injuries and give them general and useful information.                                  In this modern world , children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas which we gave reasons and also solutions for it .

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Parisa
Parisa

#222386

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, most children who are linked in sports are overburdened with physical activities or get serious injuries. I think this is mainly because the time mismanagement and do dangerous sports. However, there are some solutions to deal whit them.

A reason why children are often overloaded with physical activities and get serious trauma is that almost they are not able to manage their time as a result they practice more and more regardless to consequence so they are busy all time. Another reason could be doing risky sports beyond their abilities. Some children like to do professional and hazardous sports which has negative effect on their physical health. For example, lifting weights are dangerous exercise so small fraction of children who are powerful and have healthy body can afford it.

A possible solution is that the children’parent should take more responsibility to establish a timetable for their children’s activity and encourage them to follow the timetable to increase the level of productivity. In addition, parents should be more cautious when they are choosing the type of sports to their children. This means that they need to consul with sport instructor and make an informed decision. It helps their children to become more healthy.

In conclusion, the overloaded of children with physical activities and get injuries is because of the mismanagement of time and doing risky sports beyond their ability. But these problem can be solved if they establish a timetable and make informed decision when they want to take up sports.

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Armin
Armin

#227232

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Having tendency for competitive attitude during matches, represents self-esteem. Also demonstrate a healthy state of mind due to human's instinct being created over hundreds of years. Therefore, this kind of manners is not forbidden at all. However controlling it in order to stay between lines is very important.

In the beginning, during human evolution throughout the world they were competing with each other, also against the potential opponents in order to win over food and accommodation. Of course individuals do not need to fight with each other in order to survive nowadays. However they have carried this conduct over the years with themselves. Hence the more being a competitive person the healthier they are because of people's instinct. Even though, there is different sufficient ways to inhibit these type of attitudes and even shape them in best possible way. In the other word strictness pose an essential matter during game. For instance, in a normal Soccer match referee can controls players through firing aggressive participants who show anger in the course of game. Secondly, when the game is over some afterwards bans for boys or girls who have shown bad behavior is necessary in order to teach them that these actions are unacceptable. For example sport teachers or coaches must substitute the following players with others who have behaved better. Moreover allocating rewards to well-behaved children is of the best ways due to, this is a great motivation for them.

In conclusion, competition not in aggressive way associating with rules is best combination for teenagers for the purpose of developing physical-base skills and proper social behavior. Hence, with an accurate comprehensive vision, possible fierce physically traumas will be under control.

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Seyedsahand
Seyedsahand

#233747

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays most of children want to have been attracted in sports, for instance basketball and tennis. These activities make them absolutely exhausted and in many cases lead to injuries because of violets happening during a game.  In the following is debated about the main factors that bring these outputs, and some of practical measures that solve them.

 

To begin, it is should be taken into account that children need to release their energy and sport is a good way for them. But, some of sports have much higher contact risk and expose them in danger of hurting. For instance, at the first glance playing football that is one of the most popular activity among humans is not a harsh type of sport, whereas according to the last investigations number of people that have had broken skeleton in football was higher than martial sports such as kickboxing and karate. Besides, most of sports except of a few take energy of children and they cannot do anything after playing or doing them.

 

That is a crucial matter that for solving any difficulties in the world there is a key. If we search in the internet, in tremendous number of papers can be find important role of parents. Firstly, they can teach their children to have a timetable for physical activities and teach them spending only a limited amount of time for sports. Secondly, they can prepare some protection equipment to conserve their child’s knees and head. And the last thing is that it is vital for mothers and fathers to observe their children to make sure any risk treats them.

 

To sum up, it is undeniable that sports are both exhausting and to sum extend harsh. But, there are huge number of solutions for these cases, and parents have big burden on their shoulders for supporting their child.

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rosha
rosha

#201815

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Children who are athletes mostly do non-standard physical activities or hurt themselves. there are some underlying reasons and solutions for this argument.

Some major reasons will be given one of which is that teenagers feel competitive more than others. When youngsters go to gyms and sport fields, they want to take other attentions to themselves and show the others what they are capable of. Consequently, they work out badly and get injured. Another important reason is children do not have much knowledge about anatomies. There are so many children who have trained alone in their entire life and not considered the problems they have made for their body by these incorrect workouts.

People could deal with this problem and consider solutions, should they pay attention to this issue. One of the noticeable ways is that gyms force children to enroll in sport classes or exercise with a professional trainer. Trainers have lots of information and knowledge about how to exercise correctly and productively so whether they want to work out in class with others or in private, having a trainer is necessary. Enrolling in right class level is the second effective solution. Sport experts should measure children body situations and put them in right level of classes. For instance, some youngsters do not have flexibility and they have to start the yoga from beginning. On the other hand, children with more flexibility and mobility can practice in intermediate or advanced classes.

In conclusion, most of the time children exercise more than they can and wound themselves.

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Mahmoud
Mahmoud

#213520

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt that sport should be an inseparable part of curriculum for children, since its benefits is not deniable. But sometimes it occupy the most of their time in a way that they do not have time for other activities and also the traumas and bruises appear on their body continuously. So it demands solution to mitigate these unpleasant side effects. In following paragraphs I will explain my solutions.

 

The overloading in physical activities roots in their joyful, and after a while they cannot find time for any activity except the sport. They devote the whole of their time to sport and make it as the main goal in their life, which brings them failure in other fields like social activities and their relationships with friends. It brings a responsibility to their parents and teachers to control their activities and if need limit them. They must make schedule for them in home and school and force them to act on it. It will made constraint on them and they will not be able to exceed it and as a result they would have time for other activities.

 

Creating a situation in which the children confront less injury and wound is easy and need acting on some standards that have developed for safety. Every activity had its wears and safety equipment and the children should learn how to use them. For example riding a bicycle needs a helmet which is crucial for this sport and without it, some very series concerns are expected. Also this activity in roads are more dangerous and need to be done under supervision of professional persons. Children must learn the emergency numbers to call them if need. By making some preventive decisions these problem have not much to say.

 

To conclude, overwhelming by sport always can happen to every child who is fascinated by sports, but it can be easily solved by making a good schedule by parent to prevent this problem. The injury and traumas also can be solve by following the safety standards which guarantee the minimum wounds.  

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Fereshteh
Fereshteh

#238208

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Traumas are rotated around children who engaged in sports while a vareily of reason pushes children get injury. It is often assumed that they will get better sooner than adults.             

   Children are dreamers and after every sport event they want to be one of the athlele. A survey of chinese university showed that after the world cup in Qatar, children enrolled in football's school 60 percent more thah previous year. Exercising regularly is the first step of being professional and little by little they will be under the pressure of competition. Therefore, mental suffering is not far from expected. This issue will be followed by loss of their social life for their exercise. As a result , it is true to say sports can devastate the childhood .
     A fair and logical suggestion is visiting a psychologist regularly. They help children to understand a real world and separt from their dreams. Additionally, parents have a crucial role in this ground and they should help for making balance in their children's life. For example when my brother was a teenager he wanted to be a soccer player and my mother with a psychologist helped him for making decision and following his talent instead of his dreams and now he is satisfied with his choice.
    In conclusion, There are some truth about ruining of children’s life by sport like mental hurt but parents and psychologists help them for passing from this dark path.

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Parisa
Parisa

#238094

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Sport is replet with physical activity or damages for children who enter in its realm.although there are specific root causes behind this contentious issue,weaning off from doing sport voraciously can be adopted to remedy the situation.


There is one reason why children get physicaly hurt during activities in the field of sport, Perfectionism and a sense of superiority will make them do a lot of sports in other words,when children trying to be the best in sport for instance to achive a championship leads them to be sensetive in being infallible and eminent in the field of sport

There is ,however, a remedy to explore the root of such a situation, always should parents convince their offsprings to be the best version of themselves and not to compete with any body.take it as an example, a father who badger his child to win a competition or a game will causes her/his kid to feel useless unless he/she achive the goal as a result that child is going to do what it takes to be the best even if it going to cost his/her health.

To conclude,there are a whole raft of reason for this issue however, the main remedy is that children should not compete in any way.Adopting a rose - colored view of this phenomenon is not tantamount to examining the situation realistically.It's because sometimes it acts as a preclusion in making a prudent decision.

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Erfan
Erfan

#230902

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

These days, some children do a variety of activities to keep fit and be healthy in their life whereas, some of them get sharp injuries in these sports that they do. I this essay, I will consider the reasons for those two effects that may be happen for them and give some solutions for these children.

Some children make their suitable plan to do regular exercise and eat healthy diet like fresh fruits and vegetable, so they have an enjoyable and healthy life during these period. These people should be encourage by their family to have enough motivation to continue their work outs. For instance, some parents usually advise to their children to go to gym and do push-ups, pull-ups and sit-ups there, however, unfortunately, some of them consume some harmful drugs that makes their body weaker and has very bad effects. Besides that, a minority of young individuals put lots of pressure on themselves to do activities around the clock which makes dangerous effects because these habits are very common between children in every country to lose their weight.

Numerous studies have constantly found that parents must be take care of their children who their age are between 10-20 and pay attention to their works they do lifelong. In addition, if they are growing up and being mature like their adults, they can handle problems. But, they may under the influence of sexual problems and should lose their weights and keep themselves fit like their partner. So, they always put a lot of pressure and do sophisticated activities. Because of this, parents should be interference in their children’s work.

To conclude, children should be take care of children, even though they are mature and can do their works independent, because they may make a mistake in their life which are irreparable. Furthermore, they should countenance them to do different activities in their leisure time to keep themselves healthy.

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Nastaran
Nastaran

#151035

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Sports are necessary for health. Doing sports is important for kids in both mental and physical aspects. Children who are interested in physical activities , sometimes are involved more than usual that leads to injured or even get serious traumas.There are plenty of reasons that i will explain them in this essay.

First of all, some children choose sports as their priority in their life. Even they want to be an athlete in the future. So it's normal to injure. Sometimes they practice at school without any coach or trainers. It is very crusial to do professional sports activities with an experts. The second reason is that children do sports without tools and safety protections. So most of these people are not cauntious enough, they do not wear protective tools and guards to protect themselves; this might be serious physical damage.

There are many solutions to solve this problem. First i think schools should recognize the students who are pasionate more for doing sports and consider some professional coaches to help them. Or if they have not enough budget , they can ask family 's to help their kids by involving them in different classes.  Moreover, to provide protection while doing sports, they can simply wear various safety tools, such as a face shield or a mouth guard. These will probably reduce the injury rates among children. For instance, for playing hocky, they should wear helmets and knee perotections to stay safe.

In conclusion, it is simple and possible for students to be safe and get less damged when they are overinvolved by doing physical activities.

 

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Maryam
Maryam

#238088

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

These days it can be seen children are more doing exercise than in the past. They do a special physical activity from an early stage of their life. In TV shows internet we can see them. But some of these exercises have short or long-term harm to children. There are various reasons for this and also there are some solutions to overcome this problem. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for it and some solutions for it.

 

The first reason that should be taken into account is that parents sometimes have unreasonable expectations from their children. So they put tremendous pressure on their children to take part in a special championship and get the best results. Consequently, children try to fulfill their parent's expectations and obviously may be harmed.

 

The other reason That is worth mentioning is related to the children's coach and instructor. If they don't be knowledgeable about their course and work with children they can conduct an inappropriate schedule which can harm them physically to children. For example, some schools hire inexperienced coaches for children, because they don't have to pay much money to them. 

 

There are some measures for solving this problem. The most significant point is that parents should be aware of their severe expectations.  They have to know some physical activities not only are not beneficial for their children but also are damaging. In addition, the government has an undeniable role. For example, they can pass strict laws about hiring skilled instructors for children in all the schools and gyms which can prevention from these problems.

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Samira
Samira

#235023

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

 

These days many children are seen in heavy sport activities which are not appropriate for their bodies and hurt themselves. The reasons for this trend are various and I suggest some solutions for it.

Children do exercises that are overloaded and some of them do not like their sport level to be low. Their attitude is not comprehensive, as they do not have the forethought to stay healthy lifestyle. The most important reason is that they compete with their peers and they want to show their strength and appearance to others. therefore they do heavy exercises and in some cases get traumas. Another reason comes back to their lack of knowledge about sport science. They think doing more and heavier sport due to more stamina, meanwhile they do not have any knowledge about health diet.

There are some solution to decrease this mistake. Firstly, parent should be care about amount and type of activities which their children do. They can enroll them in professional gyms with high quality and surveillance. Secondly, parent and teachers theach children about negetive sides of overloaded activities and also how balance in each stage of life can bring advantages in their life. For example, they can show real people who gone this way befor and are engege in sickness.

In conclusion, lack of enough knowledge about amount of activites and sence of competition amonge children can be reasons for doing heavy sport. parent and children have key role to aware children about consequences of overloaded exercices.

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Sheyda
Sheyda

#209995

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Those kids, who are really passionate about doing sports, usually spend much time for getting exercise or injured seriously. In this essay I will try to figure out the causes and consequently, show what should be done to prevent these difficulties.

There is no doubt that juveniles have no attitude about proper equipment and proper techniques and also they are usually seeking for ways or things to achive best result soon. In their opinion expending time for safety, like wearing special clothes is a means of wasting time. In addition, they reckon by putting much time and effort without taking care of themselves, their success can be guaranteed. For example, I have a friend, who was an athlete approximately 10 years ago and was preparing to be in a team but she had to pass physical exam. As a result, without coach and sufficient techniques got a plenty of exercises and her back injured seriously. Unfortunately doctor told she can not accomplish sport anymore so not only she couldn’t be in a team but also she had not been able to continue her life as an athlete.

I hold the opinion that, the best way to reduce these problems is educating children in advance. They should know about either theory or practical tasks, which means before commencing, be aware of the consequences of getting improper exercise. For instance, if my friend knew about techniques, tried to balance between exercise and taking rest, in addition if she tried to work with a coach who was an expert to tell her about her mistakes and balancing between strength and flexibility, she still would have been an athlete.

As I have shown, lack of children awareness of the potential risk of doing sport improperly is the main reason for being overloaded or even getting serious traumas. However, teaching them techniques and telling them about safety could be the best way for declining these problems, moreover by taking adventage of coach the potential risk of getting injured can be reduced significantly.

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Amir
Amir

#238504

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Children engaged in sports because their activities comparing to adults are higher, and they get serious traumas on account of they don’t care about the injuries consequences or might don’t aware of that ,

in my opinion parents are the key and solution. 

 


To begin it depends on parents behavior, and how they going to face this problem in addition, children has a better spirit and energy than elder people, so they might do anything overloaded, and at the same time they are susceptible.

In result, parents should choose the best way to make them traumas get fewer and fewer by talking patiently.

 


Maintain the advantages of these conversations are like parents can affect on them and so children will be more careful about the injuries and illness.

Parents should not interfere and trying to stop them from doing exercise , because maybe in the future they might have some serious problems like depression or psychological issues.

At the same time they avoid of unauthorized sports for them, or has a quarrel with them for just following the sport things seriously

 


On the other hand, the government should downgrade the traumas, by teaching the children to be patient and friendly meanwhile, after the parents the coaches are the most important thing in this situation , they can train the children for how to deal with their anger and behave calmly and if things get better by time for the award, they can’t give them a permission to go on a professional way of sport , cause that’s their authority.

In that case their situations will be marvelous.

 


In conclusion, these three things, parents, government and the coaches are can affect on the children the most.

The first step is find a way to trying to have some useful conversation with them and after that awards for this behavior can be the best option , by the way professional sports are dangerous and they can be hurtful, so parents should deal with that

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Atefeh
Atefeh

#174444

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is said that some youth who are keen on sport are often overloaded with activity or get severely injured. In this essay, I will outline some possible reasons for these, as well as, suggest some solutions.

The main reason behind this issue is that, lack of awareness of some children related to the overloading activities and possibly injured. For example, when I was 16 years old, I left a heavy box as a weight for an imaginary match that leads to a detrimental effect on my spin. Up to now, I suffer from that risky activity which I have done in the past few years. Another significant root of the problem is the lack of parents’ attention to their children. These days, families have a hectic lifestyle and they do not have enough time to pay attention to the physical activity of their children. So when children do some risky activity their parents do not care about them that results in severely injured or overloaded activity.

A possible solution to increase awareness of children could be to teach children at school. In other words, intervention in the education of children in schools includes playing some educational videos about how they do a correct activity without being injured. Just consider how healthier children would be if they watch these videos. Another way to curb increasing attention of parents to their children is that parents use the defense instruments for their children when they sport. For instance, parents could apply a kind of elastic pad to protect the knees of children.

In conclusion, the lack of awareness of children and the attention of their parents results in extreme activity or getting severely injured among children. I suggest, by playing some educational videos and also applying some protection devices by their parents, we can solve these problems.

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Matin
Matin

#225416

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Youngsters are tied with playing sports since childhood, also it is crucial for their health and mental status. Some youths are thirsty for playing some sports such as soccer and basketball which are very popular in our country, in contrast, these sports could be too harmful and maleficence , moreover ,playing these sports for children are limitless.

In our fatherland, Iran , most numerous of the athletics, especially in soccer, came from poor condition ,after that they become more famous in teams and earned a lot of massive money after their success.

As consequence of this reason, most of the children decide to spend their time with overloaded activity related to that sport which is chosen for their career. Every success requires a lot of effort and sometimes these continuous efforts harm the health of children and teenagers.

In this path, they should always play under surveillance .Professional coaches  or a person who knows the way very well are very effective and they can always take care of the children while playing.

In conclusion, every steps we taken in our life, in the future , it can help us in present.it is better to take these steps from childhood on the right path with the right guidance. Parents should take care of nutritional values in the food to supply the energy while they are playing. To conclude, there should be a limit for everything, even the kids are interested in sports they should play under proper guidance and guidelines.

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Mahta
Mahta

#207529

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In these days, children tend to do lots of sport activities and become a professional athlete. Although, in some cases, they try hard and attempt to a productive in the major, they injure so badly or get some mental problems. In my point of the view, their coach or their parent put them under the pressure to become win the games or other reasons. In the forthcoming paragraphs I will discuss the various reasons that impact on children and suggest some solutions. 

 


To begin with, children are not enough mature to think correctly and make a smart decision. Especially, nowadays because of competitive atmosphere, they want to defeat their friends or win the prizes. If they do not have proper coach or their parents just struggling to them and disappointing them, they get outrageously traumas and they lost their confidence. Also, they think if they had endeavoured too much and had not eaten in some cases, they would have achieved their goals. Therefore, not only they will injure themselves but also they do not attain their goals.

 

To reduce this matter, various ways can contribute to children to do a great job on their professions. In details, sport clubs should set some mental classes for young people to change and affect in their mind. Likewise, governments should train the coaches and teacher because children make the next generations and teachers affect on children’s behavior. For instance, Some sport teams beside the doctor for their physical health, have some doctors for their mental healths and they set some exercise for their mental activities and children gain the information that play the significant role in their future. 

 


In conclusion, children are not very mature to do correct activities and in some cases they often overloaded or get serious traumas. Government must improve the knowledge of the children’s teachers and coach and parents should take care of their children and do not put them under the pressure to achieve something that it not necessary. 

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Siavash
Siavash

#205936

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas.

What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is clear that children's sport activities some times include some damages and mental conflicts. There are various reasons why it is happened and what is the measures that could be feasible.

Firstly physical activity may cause severe injuries in some cases. The main reason maybe due to essence of recklessness of children bear in mind and their definition of the true safety. Fore instance, the children who play football and want to acting, running and jumpping torward the ball just alike Cristiano Ronaldo or  tackling the apponents just as Grizman, never consider the injuries and the dnagerous behaviour against other playmates. Furtheremore, the other root of the problem is the parent's duty to child's sport activities. with reagard to this fact that parents this days have a less spare time to creating as a family so the child has to playing and reached the safty rules through trial and error that could put them in a dnagerous conditions.

Secondly, there are a number of different actions that could be taken by parents and governments to reduce the probable dangerous trauma. For example, if parents spend more time with their children during child's leisure activities and setting a plan to put them on some under conrol hazardous conditions and force them to follow safty rules, the children are taught to playing wisely. In addition, authorithies should codify schedualed safe sport activity in the school or some precise places that it leds to that children playing under supevision of professional tutor and so the traumas due to sport activity are alleviated.

In conclusion, the sport traumas which undergo people face with are inevitable but there are a number of preventive measures that could be taken by both parents and authories to mitigate eventual damages.

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Somaiyeh
Somaiyeh

#213753

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

Nowadays, it is widely accepted that tourism has fundamental role in countries economics. Although tourism industry has a key role in some countries, the unavoidable drawbacks of tourism shouldn’t be neglected however those challenges can be managed somehow. In this essay the cons and pros of tourism will be discussed. I firmly believe that despite the inescapable challenges of tourism, not only is it necessary for economic but also good for enhancing cultural level of country.


On the on hand, some people firmly claim that without a strict management tourism can destroy tourist attractions. They believe that in a high season uncontrolled traffic can cause a huge problem not only for citizens but also for tourists. Moreover, congestions are great opportunity for pickpockets and shoplifters. For instance, I remember when I was teenager we attend a color festival in Tehran unfortunately I had been carried all my money when I noticed that all of the money is stolen already. However, governors can manage those challenges by implanting a good policy.


On the other hand, it is crystal clear that tourism is one of the main potentials of countries economy and culture. It is estimated that in some countries, such as turkey and France, great portion of the government s income gained via tourist industry. Furthermore, not only tourists bring their money to country but also cultural interchange occurs in the region. 


In conclusion, it is naturally accepted that every phenomena has its merits and demerits so tourism is not an exception. In this essay advantages and disadvantages of tourism discussed. In spite of some problems I think tourism is tremendously beneficial for country.

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Parisa
Parisa

#238094

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

Tourism is the chief source of income in myriad places around the globe.however, if it is not controlled properly, tourism can be problematic. also this contentious phenomenon can have both benefits and drawbacks but i assume its merits outweight its demerits.

On the plus side, the pros of tourism for countries revenues are manifold. to begin with, tourism can save the countries which are economicaly poor but  on the other hand replet with a whole raft of tourist traps and places of intrests. to put it  simply the more tourist a location attract, the more it accumulate money. As an example a place like dubai runs on tourism industry due to its eminent and marvellous tourists attractions and land scapes.plus it used to be a city in a thired country but now a days thank to tourists it is now among thrived countries 


On the other hand, the opposing view asserts that tourism can be a detrimental issue to a society  if its not be observed and controlled due to some reasons for illustration  not only migh some tourists stay too long in a particular place but also have a job there as a result this penomenon damage job circumastances in a place and this issue seems to be beyond remedy if government dont  pave the way to controll the root of such a problem.

To sum up, although this topic has both downsides and upsides but its my  firm belife that tourism is extremly advatageous to countries economy

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Sheida
Sheida

#203686

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

The major source of revenue in many areas is provided by its tourists. Sad to say, visitors can cause trouble with no supervision. Although travelers can lead to some problems, they still have many benefits to that society. I strongly believe that its positive points overpower the drawbacks and in my next paragraphs, I will discuss about this view.

To initiate with, one evidence benefits is that they boost the community’s economics growth. To put in another way, job opportunities will increase as more sightseers visit these areas. Apparently, businesses make more profit which plays a vital role in developing that country. Moreover, visitors may come from different countries. Therefore, their presence in these places will expand the awareness of the people of the world about culture and history of that country.

On the other hand, there are several negative points as well. Such as pollution and destruction. In other word, more tourists lead to severe traffic congestion. Therefore, it would be more cars in streets. As a result, the air pollution would increase in this area. Besides, because of lack of information, some visitors might break rules which result in damaging historical building. Since most of these infrastructures are old, they are not strong enough. Consequently, they would be easily ruined by careless behaviors.

To sum up, from my perspective, governments can fix disadvantages with a proper planning. And since their positive points is really effective in progress of that society, I think that advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Zahra
Zahra

#237205

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

Amongst the majority of nations, tourism is a one of the best way to increase GPA or national income.  In fact tourism have many advantages but also be a source of issues in some touristy countries. In this essay I'll try to introduce benefits and disadvantages of tourism and then give some logically conclusions. 

First of all ,we can't deny the critical rule's of tourism to make job apportunity , specially for local people , for instance, in some countries such as Turkey or Maldives can cause to economic boost and this country stablished on travelling and tourism industry. On the other word , people who travel, love to spend money for sevinour, food,transportation, accommodation or so many other things. 

On the other hand, this phenomenon may be caused some problems to invoirment . As a result of this , I can give a example of a region in Iran . Esfehan is a big historical city in Iran but poor management cause to destroy this historical place for example in takhtejamshid people who travelled in thus place have written their names on the historic wall or government can't restoration and protection perfectly so everything are arosion.

To sum up , tourism have many advantages and if the government and people help each other and try to respect to invoirment, culture and civilization , we can see that advantages other tourism is more than disadvantages. 

 

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Shirin
Shirin

#238200

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

A lot of places in the world on tourism as a main source of income . Unfortunately , tourism can also be a source of problem if it is not managed correctly.

Economical statements in many countries are relevant to tourisms that every year grows more and more. Tourism industry lead to increasing local economy and also is important sector for local infrastructures in their countries. These industry have more advantages and disadvantages for local people and environment .

On one hand , a lot of countries in around the world provide good situation for individual and environment local to attractive visitors that will be travel to other country that use spare time and visit attractive places and enjoying their vacation . Authorities devote a part of budget every year to making facilities for visitors that travel from distant sites also they struggle to increasing voyage ' s material . Visitors bring dollars with themselves to purchase presents for friends and family members. People who lives in this places effort to changes local infrastruction for traveler that inclined to visit in these locals . They build five star hotels , modern public transport system , new coffee shop and luxury restaurants with local and tasty foods. Thus these changes generate new job 

And diminish number of jobless also raise individual income . Turkish country had not a developed land likewise had many economical problems but responsible statement decided to improvement industial tourism in their country and allocated mush money for improve situation for visitors that travel to own country . 

On the other hand , tourister destruct and pollute environment and nature when many of them visit nature places . They take a way rubbish and other throwaway things that lead to pollution and vandalism local environment . In my country police could caught several visitors several visitors that came for visited historical and natural environment . They decided to collected military datas . 

On conclusion , many of countries could improv income from tourism and developt life conditions for people that live in their places also visitors pollute environment and destroyed nature . But appear davantages be more than disadvantages.

 

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Armin
Armin

#227232

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

Nowadays, economical benefits of tourism industry is undeniable throughout the world. How ever mass tourism can cause vary issues for both native people and visitors if not being under control. In this essay I am going to elaborate pros and cons with logical reasons also, I in favor of first statement and believe benefits will outweigh negativities.

In the one hand, tourism industry's direct effect is to enrich destination country's economic and this lead to a vast amount of revenue for both native inhabitants and the local government. A great example is Thailand which has experienced flourishing in its economy. Moreover, the passive influence is that visitors will become familiar with native's cultural backgrounds and traditional habits also different cuisines and the fact that Viewers become obsessed with traditions, equivalents more and more travellers for their country and more income as a result of that.

In the other hand, unplanned tourism programs plus insufficient infrastructures in target cities, will lead to huge difficulties for residents and foreigners. For instance rising in crime rate is one of the potential challenges. Unpredictable bad behaviors will lower the number of people who want to observate picturesque scenery, magnificent museums and awe-inspiring spots. Therefore, one of the main responsibilities for local police departments is to make the entire city more safer in order to lower the crime rate. 

In conclusion, although mass tourism can result in a rise in criminal activities, it greatly improves local residents's income as well as the government. Hence, I strongly believe that positive points outweigh the drawbacks.

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Elahe
Elahe

#235207

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?